Comment from Sallyo

Excellent

That is lovely, adewpearl... sweet, playful, tender and... well, funny! I have no suggestions other than finding this one a home in an anthology. It's one of those pieces that works equally well for adults or children.

 Comment Written 28-Jan-2014

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reply by the author on 28-Jan-2014

Thank you so much, Sallyo - you are most encouraging :-) Brooke

reply by Sallyo on 28-Jan-2014

I doubt if you need encouraging, dear Brooke! I just loved this poem!

Comment from GWHARGIS

Excellent

I think I learn more from your poetry every time I read it. It reminds me of the simple thing to do that made me happy when I was younger and the stunning conclusion that they still make me happy. Thank you for another wonderful poem.

 Comment Written 28-Jan-2014

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reply by the author on 28-Jan-2014

Thanks so very much, Gretchen :-) Brooke

Comment from kiwijenny

Excellent

This is the cutest picture yet...that cute mischievous half smile.......he has a HUGE personality behind that half smile...adorable ..
And set your whole smile free.....yes
Well done
God bless

 Comment Written 28-Jan-2014

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reply by the author on 28-Jan-2014

kiwijenny, thank you so very much :-) Brooke

Comment from Angel Debbie

Excellent

Such a loving thought for this child. Smiles are worth a million and then some. Nice simple quatrain. See I'm smiling with him. Nice job thank you for sharing.

 Comment Written 28-Jan-2014

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reply by the author on 28-Jan-2014

Angel Debbie, thank you so much :-) Brooke

Comment from rouskin

Exceptional

So if you have a half a smile,
just grow that smile to see
what happens when you use both halves
and set your whole smile free.

In my humble opinion it deserves more than 6*******
Have a great week

 Comment Written 28-Jan-2014

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reply by the author on 28-Jan-2014

thank you so very much, rouskin - I truly appreciate your encouragement and generosity :-) Brooke

Comment from Kenneth Schaal

Excellent

He's an infectious looking little dude, but it's more the laughter in those eyes than mouth that spreads it. Nice use of the ballad form. Kenny

 Comment Written 28-Jan-2014

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reply by the author on 28-Jan-2014

Kenny, thank you :-) Brooke

Comment from Debra White

Exceptional

Nothing less than a 6 for this little beauty Brooke!
It's almost like a tongue twister.
Great rhyme, rhythm, humour and to me, perfect!
Sawyer's sweater ought to say 'Cheeky' instead of 'Sleepy'!
I loved this one, if you hadn't guessed!
Kindest regards, Debra :)

 Comment Written 28-Jan-2014

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reply by the author on 28-Jan-2014

Debra, thank you so very much for your thoughtful and generous response to this poem :-) Brooke

Comment from Curly Girly

Excellent

This is such a cute poem to match Sawyer's cute photo. I like the way you use the name 'Ezekiel.' It certainly adds a fair amount of humour to the whole poem.

 Comment Written 28-Jan-2014

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reply by the author on 28-Jan-2014

CG, thank you for your thoughtful comments :-) Brooke

Comment from misscookie

Excellent

I love his smile half or whole
Like you said he lights up any ones world.
I love the words to your poem and how it flows.

 Comment Written 28-Jan-2014

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reply by the author on 28-Jan-2014

Miss Cookie, thank you so much :-) Brooke

reply by misscookie on 29-Jan-2014

You're very welcome, have a blessed day.

Comment from jackpeg

Excellent

Bright and cheerful, Brooke. I read this to Alyce who has a passel of grand kits, too. I have three. Good ABAB rhyme scheme (except for the smile/smile in the 1st stanza) Young Sawyer will cherish this piece years from now.

 Comment Written 28-Jan-2014

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reply by the author on 28-Jan-2014

Thank you so much, Jack - I love it when readers share my work - there's no lovelier compliment :-) Brooke