Comment from evrenios

Excellent

Love this!!!!! So charming and disarming! I can just see that smile coming from This adorable little boy and remember that smile from my own children so many years ago. I love the way you began this wonderful piece: Ezekial had half a smile,
just half a smile had he,

It sets up the delightful light-hearted way you talk about Ezekial.

 Comment Written 27-Jan-2014

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reply by the author on 27-Jan-2014

evrenios, thank you so much :-) Brooke

Comment from Tomes Johnston

Excellent

This is another lovely piece of writing in this post by the writer in this beautiful poem. This is a bit tongue in cheek and I love it for that reason

 Comment Written 27-Jan-2014

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reply by the author on 28-Jan-2014

Tomes, thank you so much :-) Brooke

reply by Tomes Johnston on 29-Jan-2014

My pleasure.

Comment from Aussie

Excellent

I hope Ezekiel didn't have a lisp - Hee, Hee. My spell checker says Ezekiel. A whimsical way with words at play. I liked your quatrains smiling all the day - half a smile just doesn't cut it - try to go all the way. gorgeous photograph of H.R.H. A new poem for you. Blessings Mrs Glee.

 Comment Written 27-Jan-2014

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reply by the author on 27-Jan-2014

LOL Thanks so much, Kay :-) Brooke

Comment from IndianaIrish

Excellent

It's a pretty contagious smile no matter what size it is, Brooke. You're poem is a great dedication to the smile that warms your heart And makes you kiss that smile.
Smiles to you and Sawyer,
Karyn : )

 Comment Written 27-Jan-2014

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reply by the author on 27-Jan-2014

Thank you, Karyn :-) Brooke

Comment from gazzagodbod

Exceptional

I so love this one there is nothing more beautiful than a smile and your poem conveys this beautifully a six from xxgazzagodbodxx

 Comment Written 27-Jan-2014

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reply by the author on 27-Jan-2014

Thank you, Gazza, for your gracious and generous review :-) Brooke

Comment from Preston McWhorter

Excellent

Hi, Brooke,(-:
"Ezekiel Had Half A Smile"is verse of the very highest quality but I cannot give its six stars as it does not resonate with me. It has excellent flow, rhyme, rhyme scheme followed consistently, figurative language and imagery (my heart would fill with glee). Its message is uplifting.
Preston

 Comment Written 27-Jan-2014

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reply by the author on 28-Jan-2014

Preston, thank you so much :-) Brooke

Comment from Phyllis Stewart

Excellent

set your whole smile free.

This sure set MY smile free! Such creativity, and so well matched to the adorable photo. Bravo! :)

 Comment Written 27-Jan-2014

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reply by the author on 27-Jan-2014

Thanks so much, Phyllis :-) Brooke

Comment from angelface2

Excellent

Well, Brooke this is a lovely little whimsical poem. His smile is indeed cute. the rhythm and rhymes are great as usual. LOL Miss Sally

 Comment Written 27-Jan-2014

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reply by the author on 27-Jan-2014

Sally, thank you so much :-) Brooke

Comment from l.raven

Excellent

OMG Brooke, this is a frame picture if I ever saw one....He is so cute in here...she does get some beautiful pictures of Sawyer...One of my favs...And your poem sets the stage...a wonderful write...Luff Linda xxoo

 Comment Written 27-Jan-2014

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reply by the author on 27-Jan-2014

linda, it is one great photo, isn't it? thanks so much :-) Brooke

reply by l.raven on 27-Jan-2014

You aren't kidding...she does so many good ones you would have to wall paper the house if you put them all up...LOL...I love it!!!xxoo

Comment from prodigal

Excellent

Very cute, Brooke. I like the little half smiles young kids give. My little nephew is king of the half smile. Still there is something to be said for the full on look of joy that they get when they fully smile.

I like the idea of setting a whole smile free. Smiling as I wrote this. Hope you are well - Sam

 Comment Written 27-Jan-2014

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reply by the author on 27-Jan-2014

Thank you, Sam, for your thoughtful review :-) Brooke