Romance Poems
Viewing comments for Chapter 31 "No Surprise"Non-biographical LovePoems
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Comment from lancellot
Nicely. I like the use of repetition to enforce that this is just how love is suppose to feel, how a lover is suppose to act. Well done.
reply by the author on 10-Mar-2014
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Nicely. I like the use of repetition to enforce that this is just how love is suppose to feel, how a lover is suppose to act. Well done.
Comment Written 09-Mar-2014
reply by the author on 10-Mar-2014
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Thanks a lot, lancelot.
Comment from Glasstruth
Love without surprises? Well, I think you need to add some. Good ones, of course. Nice rhyming throughout. A very nice Octogram. Your author notes helped explain what that is. Great job! Les
reply by the author on 10-Mar-2014
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Love without surprises? Well, I think you need to add some. Good ones, of course. Nice rhyming throughout. A very nice Octogram. Your author notes helped explain what that is. Great job! Les
Comment Written 09-Mar-2014
reply by the author on 10-Mar-2014
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Thank you Les.
Comment from royowen
I loved this free verse, occasionally rhyming love tribute to the object of your affection. I can see were she would be deeply moved by your appreciation of her presence in your life! I enjoyed it! Well done, blessings, Roy.
reply by the author on 10-Mar-2014
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I loved this free verse, occasionally rhyming love tribute to the object of your affection. I can see were she would be deeply moved by your appreciation of her presence in your life! I enjoyed it! Well done, blessings, Roy.
Comment Written 09-Mar-2014
reply by the author on 10-Mar-2014
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Thank you Roy. Glad you liked it.
Comment from dmt1967
This is a very tender poem I like the softness I got from this poem and the great sense of love very nice picture thank you for sharing
reply by the author on 08-Feb-2014
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This is a very tender poem I like the softness I got from this poem and the great sense of love very nice picture thank you for sharing
Comment Written 08-Feb-2014
reply by the author on 08-Feb-2014
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Thank you dmt.
Comment from Righteous Riter
The photo fits the piece well as the words bring the photo to life. Good end rhyming. Good alliteration with hear/her...sweetest/she. Good description. Good rhythm and flow. I see nothing that I would change or rearrange in this piece. Good work.
reply by the author on 08-Feb-2014
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The photo fits the piece well as the words bring the photo to life. Good end rhyming. Good alliteration with hear/her...sweetest/she. Good description. Good rhythm and flow. I see nothing that I would change or rearrange in this piece. Good work.
Comment Written 08-Feb-2014
reply by the author on 08-Feb-2014
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Thanks again Righteous.
Comment from chicken scratch love
What a beautiful poem. Your significant other will be pleased INDEED! I absolutely love the lesson learned on the Octogram and thank you for that as well! Was your entry poem of the same style/template? Thanks for the share!
reply by the author on 08-Feb-2014
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What a beautiful poem. Your significant other will be pleased INDEED! I absolutely love the lesson learned on the Octogram and thank you for that as well! Was your entry poem of the same style/template? Thanks for the share!
Comment Written 08-Feb-2014
reply by the author on 08-Feb-2014
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Thanks chicken scratch. No, my entry was the Sonnet, True Love.
Comment from sweetwoodjax
this is very well written, treischel, I enjoyed reading your modified octogram poem about the love found in another's eyes that gives no surprises.....
reply by the author on 08-Feb-2014
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this is very well written, treischel, I enjoyed reading your modified octogram poem about the love found in another's eyes that gives no surprises.....
Comment Written 08-Feb-2014
reply by the author on 08-Feb-2014
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Thank you very much, sweetwoodjax.
Comment from adewpearl
I like your choice of refrain line
I wish you had stayed more within iambic meter because that is what gives this form its distinctive and pleasing sound
and it is part of Sally's requirements
I like the romantic and tender tone of your sincere love poem
Brooke
reply by the author on 31-Jan-2014
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I like your choice of refrain line
I wish you had stayed more within iambic meter because that is what gives this form its distinctive and pleasing sound
and it is part of Sally's requirements
I like the romantic and tender tone of your sincere love poem
Brooke
Comment Written 31-Jan-2014
reply by the author on 31-Jan-2014
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Thank you Brooke.
Comment from allborn66
This is a very beautiful piece. The form and rhyming scheme enhance the poem. The word choice paints a vivid picture. The tone is appropriate to the theme.
Barbara
reply by the author on 29-Jan-2014
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This is a very beautiful piece. The form and rhyming scheme enhance the poem. The word choice paints a vivid picture. The tone is appropriate to the theme.
Barbara
Comment Written 29-Jan-2014
reply by the author on 29-Jan-2014
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Thank you very much Barbara.
Comment from MommaT
I liked the simplicity of this as there is an felt understanding between two people. The art of not needing to have to talk to feel a loved ones intent has slowly seemed to disappear. Showing this type of love was great I thank you for sharing. I also salute you at trying new ways to write and express yourself I feel you accomplished this very well. Good Job.
reply by the author on 29-Jan-2014
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I liked the simplicity of this as there is an felt understanding between two people. The art of not needing to have to talk to feel a loved ones intent has slowly seemed to disappear. Showing this type of love was great I thank you for sharing. I also salute you at trying new ways to write and express yourself I feel you accomplished this very well. Good Job.
Comment Written 29-Jan-2014
reply by the author on 29-Jan-2014
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Thank you very much MommaT for your pleasant visit and wonderful comments.
