Comment from Angel Blessings

Excellent

What a nice poem and picture!. it is very descriptive of what fascinating adventures, and just everyday new discoveries are awaiting to be explored. loved it. Angel Blessings

 Comment Written 27-Jan-2014

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reply by the author on 27-Jan-2014

Thank you, Angel Blessings, for your thoughtful review :-) Brooke

Comment from kiwisteveh

Excellent

It is almost impossible to predict the things to come for those who are new to the world - it is interesting the ones you have chosen as your examples - I imagine you could well have gone on for a few more stanzas...

Steve

 Comment Written 27-Jan-2014

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reply by the author on 27-Jan-2014

Steve, thank you so much :-) Brooke

Comment from Pilot2Pen

Excellent

What a beautiful picture of your grandson. You are truly blessed. Your poem is so fitting for a young child. There are so many opportunities that lie ahead and you so eloquently put that into words. Beautifully written. Ken

 Comment Written 27-Jan-2014

Comment from S.Yocom

Excellent

I like your poem very much, Brooke. It always pleases me when someone (especially a wonderful poet such as you) uses one of my invented forms of poetry. It's perfectly acceptable to modify it. This one is beautiful, as is your darling grandson.
Sally

 Comment Written 27-Jan-2014

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reply by the author on 27-Jan-2014

Sally, thank you so very much, my friend. I will never be able to tell you how much I love your form :-) Brooke

Comment from rhymelord

Excellent

Dear Brooke,
A delightful view of the future world by a little one. If only we could recapture (ourselves) the innocence.
Regards
Reg

 Comment Written 27-Jan-2014

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reply by the author on 27-Jan-2014

Reg, thank you so much :-) Brooke

Comment from SteveY

Excellent

Ah yes what's yet to come for each of us. One of my favorite sayings is: "To all that's been, thanks, for all that shall be...yes!" Great job once again.

 Comment Written 26-Jan-2014

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reply by the author on 26-Jan-2014

Steve, thank you so much :-) Brooke

Comment from gazzagodbod

Excellent

again a beautiful photo and i love your poem running with hippos appeals to me too thank you my friend your the best xxgazzaxx

 Comment Written 26-Jan-2014

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reply by the author on 26-Jan-2014

gazza, thank you so much :-) Brooke

Comment from AudreyRose

Excellent

What a wonderful look into the eyes of a child. The best is even and smooth, I enjoyed the rhyme scheme alot as we'll. The Pompano in the band and the castle in the sand lines were very enjoyable.

 Comment Written 26-Jan-2014

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reply by the author on 26-Jan-2014

AudreyRose, thanks so much :-) Brooke

Comment from Belinda

Excellent

I agree with you (this photo is amasing) and with 'Sawyer': there are so many things to come and so many possibilities to encounter... Entertaining and thought provoking poem,Brooke...:)

 Comment Written 26-Jan-2014

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reply by the author on 26-Jan-2014

Thank you so much, Belinda :-) Brooke

Comment from heyjude

Excellent

Brooke, another one of your many enjoyable poems. Nice
picture of your sweet Sawyer. Yes, he has many things
yet to come in his young life.Nice alliteration in
hippo herd and I like your repeating line .. are yet
to come.

 Comment Written 26-Jan-2014

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reply by the author on 26-Jan-2014

Judy, thank you so much :-) Brooke