I Contemplate
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Comment from 24chas
This was an enjoyable read, Brooke. I know children would love it with it's easy to read lines and rhythm. Well done. Keep up the good work.
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This was an enjoyable read, Brooke. I know children would love it with it's easy to read lines and rhythm. Well done. Keep up the good work.
Comment Written 24-Jan-2014
Comment from Dawn Munro
I am constantly amazed at the fresh new ideas you come up with, but then, when I see Miranda's photograph's, I can understand how they would inspire. You two make a fabulous team, Brooke. Just marvelous!
reply by the author on 25-Jan-2014
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I am constantly amazed at the fresh new ideas you come up with, but then, when I see Miranda's photograph's, I can understand how they would inspire. You two make a fabulous team, Brooke. Just marvelous!
Comment Written 24-Jan-2014
reply by the author on 25-Jan-2014
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Thank you so much, Dawn. I am so proud of my daughter :-) Brooke
Comment from BCScot
What a wonderful way to put a child's thoughts (perhaps) onto paper. It would be neat sometimes to return to that part of our life and see what a child sees (again). Children have such hope and appreciation for all the things around them. Thanks for sharing, and yes, cute pic.
reply by the author on 25-Jan-2014
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What a wonderful way to put a child's thoughts (perhaps) onto paper. It would be neat sometimes to return to that part of our life and see what a child sees (again). Children have such hope and appreciation for all the things around them. Thanks for sharing, and yes, cute pic.
Comment Written 24-Jan-2014
reply by the author on 25-Jan-2014
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BCScot, thank you so much :-) Brooke
Comment from Marillion
Beautiful work, Brooke, and I love the promise of the adventure of life, which is so exciting to our youngsters. I especially like the repetition and the varied line length. Nothing to suggest in this fine piece, so please accept a virtual sixer in absentia.
reply by the author on 25-Jan-2014
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Beautiful work, Brooke, and I love the promise of the adventure of life, which is so exciting to our youngsters. I especially like the repetition and the varied line length. Nothing to suggest in this fine piece, so please accept a virtual sixer in absentia.
Comment Written 24-Jan-2014
reply by the author on 25-Jan-2014
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David, thank you. I just finished reading yet another response to the Rogue - your friend is taking blows right and left. LOL :-) Brooke
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He's well-armored. :-)
Comment from LorraineK
Another great poem of yours. I do love babies and children. I have 7 children and 14 grandchildren of my own. I loved this poem and how you talked about the new possibilities and adventures that await a child. Great write. LorraineK
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reply by the author on 31-Jan-2014
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Another great poem of yours. I do love babies and children. I have 7 children and 14 grandchildren of my own. I loved this poem and how you talked about the new possibilities and adventures that await a child. Great write. LorraineK
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Comment Written 24-Jan-2014
reply by the author on 31-Jan-2014
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Lorraine, thank you so much :-) What a wonderfully abundant family you have, must make for great gatherings :-) Brooke
Comment from sweetwoodjax
this is very well written, brooke, you did an excellent job writing this octogram about possibilities that exist that make life interesting and always changing. I enjoyed reading it
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reply by the author on 25-Jan-2014
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this is very well written, brooke, you did an excellent job writing this octogram about possibilities that exist that make life interesting and always changing. I enjoyed reading it
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Comment Written 24-Jan-2014
reply by the author on 25-Jan-2014
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Thanks so much, sweetwoodjax :-) Brooke
