I Contemplate
modified octogram206 total reviews
Comment from Shirley B
Dear Brooke, I love this poem. You are so right. The best is yet to come. I really like your poems like this that tell a little story and involve Sawyer's life. Thank you for sharing, Shirley
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2014
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Dear Brooke, I love this poem. You are so right. The best is yet to come. I really like your poems like this that tell a little story and involve Sawyer's life. Thank you for sharing, Shirley
Comment Written 24-Jan-2014
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2014
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Shirley, thank you so very much :-) Brooke
Comment from Irish Rain
How lovely, and such a wonderful view into the mind of a little one! I enjoyed this immensely! Blessings to you this evening!
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2014
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How lovely, and such a wonderful view into the mind of a little one! I enjoyed this immensely! Blessings to you this evening!
Comment Written 24-Jan-2014
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2014
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justjo, thank you so much :-) Brooke
Comment from dmt1967
This is another awesome poem my friend I really love it you have captured a child's mind wonderfully I like your take on this thank you for sharing
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2014
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This is another awesome poem my friend I really love it you have captured a child's mind wonderfully I like your take on this thank you for sharing
Comment Written 24-Jan-2014
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2014
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dmt, thank you so very much for your gracious and generous response to this poem :-) Brooke
Comment from poetbear
That beautiful face.
His spirit and future come through every word and line.
My nieces have nicknames.
One is Awesome and the other Amazing.
They really are those adjectives and so much more.
They live their young lives to the fullest.
I wish the same for him.
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2014
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That beautiful face.
His spirit and future come through every word and line.
My nieces have nicknames.
One is Awesome and the other Amazing.
They really are those adjectives and so much more.
They live their young lives to the fullest.
I wish the same for him.
Comment Written 24-Jan-2014
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2014
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Thanks so much, Maddy - sounds like your nieces are well loved :-) Brooke
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As is he.
The oldest is a magazine editor and the younger one a teacher.
Our young teacher has taken the baton from her Aunt and Uncle.
Comment from RYME4U
Wow, Sawyer has alot to look forward to. The poem is beautifully written and the flow of words so smooth and even. You did a great job as usual.
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2014
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Wow, Sawyer has alot to look forward to. The poem is beautifully written and the flow of words so smooth and even. You did a great job as usual.
Comment Written 24-Jan-2014
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2014
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RYME4U, thank you so much :-) Brooke
Comment from Joy Graham
Very nice, Brooke:) It's fun to imagine what goes on in the little ones monds. I love the octogram and yours is lovely. Cute photo of Sawyer as always!
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2014
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Very nice, Brooke:) It's fun to imagine what goes on in the little ones monds. I love the octogram and yours is lovely. Cute photo of Sawyer as always!
Comment Written 24-Jan-2014
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2014
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Thank you so much, Joy :-) Talked to him on the phone a half hour ago - he just chatted away even though he is experiencing his first cold. When his mom told me about his runny nose, he chimed in with his own rendition of "runny nose." LOL Brooke
Comment from krys123
By God, Sawyer does look like he's contemplating which fits your poem very much. You have you handled your rhythm and rhyme so well that made a very we understand your poem. Your internal and external rhymes when either forced, labored or strained and very cleverly accomplished. thank you so much Brooke for sharing this with others including myself. May you have a good one and God bless.
Alex
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2014
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By God, Sawyer does look like he's contemplating which fits your poem very much. You have you handled your rhythm and rhyme so well that made a very we understand your poem. Your internal and external rhymes when either forced, labored or strained and very cleverly accomplished. thank you so much Brooke for sharing this with others including myself. May you have a good one and God bless.
Alex
Comment Written 24-Jan-2014
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2014
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Alex, thank you so very much :-) Brooke
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Your so sincerely welcome Brooke
Comment from nancy_e_davis
You must have hundreds of pictures of Sawyer. This one is precious. Love the modified octogram Brook...
The possibilities abound,
adventures that might roll around --
so many things beneath the sun
are yet to come.
He deserves all the dreams he can muster. :-) Nancy
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2014
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You must have hundreds of pictures of Sawyer. This one is precious. Love the modified octogram Brook...
The possibilities abound,
adventures that might roll around --
so many things beneath the sun
are yet to come.
He deserves all the dreams he can muster. :-) Nancy
Comment Written 24-Jan-2014
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2014
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Nancy, thank you. Yes, my daughter keeps me in photo supply to make up for living three thousand miles away. LOL Brooke
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It's just not the same though is it.
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nope, all the phone calls and face book videos and dozens of still photos don't come close to the rare occasions I get to be there in person
Comment from Maureen's Pen
Dear Brooke, this is a delightful children's poem. Lovely colorful word play that I think kids would love. I hope you make and publish a book with all these. Kids would so enjoy it. Great writing as always with smiles thrown in for good measure. Great pic of Cutie Pie - he looks like he is contemplating the world.
Thanks for sharing it.
Maureen
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2014
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Dear Brooke, this is a delightful children's poem. Lovely colorful word play that I think kids would love. I hope you make and publish a book with all these. Kids would so enjoy it. Great writing as always with smiles thrown in for good measure. Great pic of Cutie Pie - he looks like he is contemplating the world.
Thanks for sharing it.
Maureen
Comment Written 24-Jan-2014
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2014
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Maureen, thank you so very much :-) Brooke
Comment from Gungalo
The possibilities abound,
adventures that might roll around --
so many things beneath the sun
are yet to come.
This is a wonderful write Brooke. It shows that much more is yet to come. It's beautifully done in Octogram style, though modified. And ... what a wonderful picture of Sawyer.
reply by the author on 25-Jan-2014
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The possibilities abound,
adventures that might roll around --
so many things beneath the sun
are yet to come.
This is a wonderful write Brooke. It shows that much more is yet to come. It's beautifully done in Octogram style, though modified. And ... what a wonderful picture of Sawyer.
Comment Written 24-Jan-2014
reply by the author on 25-Jan-2014
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Gungalo, thanks so much :-) Brooke
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Brooke I'm smiling.
