Comment from L.A.Matthies

Excellent

I will bet that this is the sweetest and most sincere Valentine that I'll read this year! Brooke, you really are something special :)Linda

 Comment Written 23-Jan-2014

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reply by the author on 23-Jan-2014

Linda, thank you so much :-) Brooke

Comment from Ridley Williams

Excellent

Hello Brooke,
I appreciate the simple thought you put forth in this piece...that of taking "two to tango", if I may. Love truly comes into accord when a couple is committed to each other...their duet will echo through the passages of time. I liked the idea of the deal; faithful, unending love, in exchange for the compliment of the others voice. A well metered write, with an endearing message, well done. Good luck in this one...and best wishes, Bill

 Comment Written 23-Jan-2014

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reply by the author on 23-Jan-2014

Bill, thank you so much :-) Brooke

Comment from TAB_that's me

Excellent

This is a sweet poem Brooke for the Valentine's Poetry Contest. Great rhyme and meter. Good luck in the contest.
~Teresa~

 Comment Written 23-Jan-2014

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reply by the author on 23-Jan-2014

Teresa, thank you so very much :-) Brooke

Comment from padumachitta

Excellent

Hello.

Need I say more!
I like this best

My songs are all composed for two,
duets designed for voices
that harmonize to celebrate
a love the world rejoices.

Duets are the best.
Ciao

 Comment Written 23-Jan-2014

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reply by the author on 23-Jan-2014

padumachitta, thank you so much :-) Brooke

Comment from Liz Dunbee

Excellent

I love the picture, it reminds me of my children when they were small. Your words are perfect for the pic and the rhymes excellent. A lovely and uplifting poem.

 Comment Written 23-Jan-2014

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reply by the author on 24-Jan-2014

Liz, thanks so much :-) Brooke

Comment from Peter@Poole

Exceptional

Brilliant! How I enjoyed voicing these abcb rhyming quatrains, and it seems Sawyer is too. Iambic tetrameter and trimeter, I believe, because of the catalectic docking of a possible fourth iambic foot in 2nd and 4th lines of each stanza. If you teach this, no one seems to have tried it yet, Brooke. ;-) Peter

 Comment Written 23-Jan-2014

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reply by the author on 24-Jan-2014

Peter, thank you so very much, my friend :-) I truly appreciate your review and support :-) Brooke

Comment from TOMORAL

Excellent

I've tried to sing a song to this beautiful piece, but I am tone deaf. I love the rhyming of solo and hollow. Wrote that one down for future reference. This is excellent writing, as usual.

 Comment Written 23-Jan-2014

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reply by the author on 23-Jan-2014

Tomoral, thank you so much :-) Brooke

Comment from fastdigits

Excellent

Valentine's Day right around
the corner, and here you come
with another artful, poetic,
charming piece of writing to
commemorate this day of love
that is for indeed made for
two; and then you enhance your
writing by showing love for two
really starts at an early age,
and so Sawyer has learned that
love is meant for two.
Well done

 Comment Written 23-Jan-2014

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reply by the author on 23-Jan-2014

fastdigits, thank you so much :-) Brooke

Comment from trevorletang

Excellent

Once again you have mastered the rhyming quatrain with the abcb rhyme scheme. I love the picture it is so cute. Thanks for sharing this one and all the best for the contest

 Comment Written 23-Jan-2014

Comment from Margaret Snowdon

Excellent

And so my Valentine for you
needs your participation,
for only will the notes you add
complete my song's creation.

How lovely is this - such a pleasure to read, Brooke
and the picture makes the whole perfect - I love his
cheeky smile.

margaret

 Comment Written 23-Jan-2014

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reply by the author on 23-Jan-2014

Margaret, thanks so much :-) Brooke