A Valentine Duet
quatrains in 8/7/8/7157 total reviews
Comment from NightWriter
A Valentine Duet is outstanding. Such rhythm and rhyme here, it's perfect. Beautifully written quatrains with strong ending. Well done.
reply by the author on 23-Jan-2014
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A Valentine Duet is outstanding. Such rhythm and rhyme here, it's perfect. Beautifully written quatrains with strong ending. Well done.
Comment Written 23-Jan-2014
reply by the author on 23-Jan-2014
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Steve, thank you so much, my generous friend :-) Brooke
Comment from donnadiann
I really like the flow of the lines as they lead into the next and the rhymes and near-rhymes are creative. You keep the romantic two always in focus:)
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I really like the flow of the lines as they lead into the next and the rhymes and near-rhymes are creative. You keep the romantic two always in focus:)
Comment Written 23-Jan-2014
reply by the author on 23-Jan-2014
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donnadiann, thank you so much :-) Brooke
Comment from Irish Rain
so sweet and valentiney! i loved every word, and wish i had six stars left, your poetry always deserves it! blessings to you tonite!
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so sweet and valentiney! i loved every word, and wish i had six stars left, your poetry always deserves it! blessings to you tonite!
Comment Written 23-Jan-2014
reply by the author on 23-Jan-2014
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justjo, thank you so much :-) Brooke
Comment from Petriesan
I Like poetry when it speaks to us, like this one does.
for only will the notes you add
complete my song's creation.
I could have a little fun with this and ask if you write three-part harmonies, but I am being nice today, so I didn't ask ?
;)
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I Like poetry when it speaks to us, like this one does.
for only will the notes you add
complete my song's creation.
I could have a little fun with this and ask if you write three-part harmonies, but I am being nice today, so I didn't ask ?
;)
Comment Written 23-Jan-2014
Comment from heyjude
Brooke, how very true. It takes two to make the music
of love. One just can't do it alone. You sure come up
with such precious pictures. Great rhyming quatrains.
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Brooke, how very true. It takes two to make the music
of love. One just can't do it alone. You sure come up
with such precious pictures. Great rhyming quatrains.
Comment Written 23-Jan-2014
reply by the author on 23-Jan-2014
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Judy, thank you so much :-) Brooke
Comment from Cumbrianlass
Brooke, it's been a long day. When I opened up this notification in my in-box just now, my tired eyes saw 'A Valentine Diet'. LOL! Chocolates, champagne, strawberries, followed by dessert? LOL!
I love the idea of creating songs for two, that the song being written and sung is incomplete without both voices. And love should be that way, certainly. There's a certain whimsy in the sentiment, and a sweet sincerity. I enjoyed it very much.
That big smile on Sawyer's face is just priceless.
Av
reply by the author on 23-Jan-2014
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Brooke, it's been a long day. When I opened up this notification in my in-box just now, my tired eyes saw 'A Valentine Diet'. LOL! Chocolates, champagne, strawberries, followed by dessert? LOL!
I love the idea of creating songs for two, that the song being written and sung is incomplete without both voices. And love should be that way, certainly. There's a certain whimsy in the sentiment, and a sweet sincerity. I enjoyed it very much.
That big smile on Sawyer's face is just priceless.
Av
Comment Written 23-Jan-2014
reply by the author on 23-Jan-2014
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thank you so much, Av - the poor little fellow caught a bug from his mom and has been projectile vomiting - what a way to wipe that smile off his face... Brooke
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Aww, poor little mite. I hope he gets well soon!
Comment from Gert sherwood
Love your poem Brooke . Play two notes, I bet Sawyer was playing more then two notes on the piano so you as his Grandma will be his special Valentine.
Gert
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Love your poem Brooke . Play two notes, I bet Sawyer was playing more then two notes on the piano so you as his Grandma will be his special Valentine.
Gert
Comment Written 23-Jan-2014
reply by the author on 23-Jan-2014
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Gert, thank you so much :-) Brooke
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smiles
Gert
Comment from Alena Smith
what a sweet poem.
my favorite lines:
"The song I hold within my heart
has never been a solo,
for words of love when sung alone
create a sound so hollow."
nice way to point out how many people are in our lives that can make our song so much morebeautiful
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what a sweet poem.
my favorite lines:
"The song I hold within my heart
has never been a solo,
for words of love when sung alone
create a sound so hollow."
nice way to point out how many people are in our lives that can make our song so much morebeautiful
Comment Written 23-Jan-2014
reply by the author on 23-Jan-2014
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Alena, thank you so very much :-) Brooke
Comment from Mastery
What a wonderfully joyus poem, Brooke. I love every word from start to finish. You are amazing!
"My songs are all composed for two,
duets designed for voices
that harmonize to celebrate
a love the world rejoices."
Best wishes, Bob
reply by the author on 23-Jan-2014
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What a wonderfully joyus poem, Brooke. I love every word from start to finish. You are amazing!
"My songs are all composed for two,
duets designed for voices
that harmonize to celebrate
a love the world rejoices."
Best wishes, Bob
Comment Written 23-Jan-2014
reply by the author on 23-Jan-2014
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Bob, thank you so much :-) Brooke
Comment from michaelcahill
This is so nice to read something perfectly written in English that doesn't need translation. Excellent sentiments put forth honestly and beautifully. Lovely picture that enhances so well. Love it, mikey
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This is so nice to read something perfectly written in English that doesn't need translation. Excellent sentiments put forth honestly and beautifully. Lovely picture that enhances so well. Love it, mikey
Comment Written 23-Jan-2014
reply by the author on 23-Jan-2014
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Mikey, thank you so much :-) Brooke
