Comment from Roxanna Andrews

Excellent

That is so cute. He is loving playing on the piano, all kids love a piano. This as always is super well done, perfect rhyme and a fun story told. Rox

 Comment Written 25-Jan-2014

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reply by the author on 25-Jan-2014

Rox, thank you so much :-) Brooke

Comment from Giddy Nielsen-Sweep

Excellent

These sweet quatrains have a strong message of friendship. I really enjoyed reading this for its words and for its even meter and beautiful rhymes, too. Giddy

 Comment Written 25-Jan-2014

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reply by the author on 25-Jan-2014

Giddy, thank you so much :-) Brooke

Comment from marijmd

Excellent

Well fortune favors the bold! And a bold request could lead to love! Cute concept linking duets and couples - love the picture too!

 Comment Written 24-Jan-2014

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reply by the author on 25-Jan-2014

marijmd, thank you so much :-) Brooke

Comment from 3boysrule

Excellent

Brooke, Another lovely, well-written masterpiece. It flowed great, with such an incredible message. Plus, I, of course, love the picture!
Dee

 Comment Written 24-Jan-2014

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reply by the author on 25-Jan-2014

Dee, thank you so much :-) Brooke

Comment from gramalot8

Excellent

Brooke, what a beautiful sentiment in these words. How true that one must definitely be in tune with another for the real rhythm and song of love to happen. Great message and thanks for sharing this with us. Jerri

 Comment Written 24-Jan-2014

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reply by the author on 24-Jan-2014

Thank you, Jerri, for your thoughtful review :-) Brooke

Comment from dmt1967

Exceptional

I do love the way you write it is so very professional and I love your poems about your grandchild I have a muse now and now get how important they are to a writer thank you for sharing

 Comment Written 24-Jan-2014

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reply by the author on 24-Jan-2014

dmt, thank you so very much for your encouragement and generosity :-) Brooke

Comment from Helvi2

Excellent

Hi Brooke,

You have a real knack for writing uplifting poems.
THe 8/7/8/7 beat of this poem and the abcb rhyme so lightens the mood around you and you can't help but smile. This is such a sweet valentine! I love the feel it has. Always a joy to read your poems My Friend.
:o) Helvi

 Comment Written 24-Jan-2014

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reply by the author on 24-Jan-2014

Helvi, how good to hear from you :-) Thank you so much. Brooke

Comment from GracieAnn

Excellent

Brooke, this Valentines Poetry contest entry is a tender write that asks for nothing material to confirm the love, but the lasting treasure of friendship. Balanced rhyme with creative word combinations. All the best in the contest! :0 GracieAnn

 Comment Written 24-Jan-2014

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reply by the author on 25-Jan-2014

GracieAnn, thank you so much :-) Brooke

Comment from Janet Foor

Exceptional

A delightful Valentine poem Brooke with Sawyer and Nora. The gleam in his eyes and smile on his face says it all.

Blessings
Janet :)

 Comment Written 24-Jan-2014

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reply by the author on 24-Jan-2014

Janet, thank you so very much for your encouraging and generous review :-) Brooke

Comment from Deniz22

Excellent

Superlative! Superlative! Superlative! Superlative! Superlative! Superlative! Superlative! Superlative! Superlative! Superlative! Superlative! Superlative! Superlative! Superlative! Superlative! Superlative! Superlative! Superlative!

At the risk of being redundant, may I say," Superlative! Superlative! Superlative!"

 Comment Written 24-Jan-2014

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reply by the author on 25-Jan-2014

Dennis, thank you for the smile and the review :-) Brooke