The Wind
rhyming quatrains169 total reviews
Comment from janalma
This is truly a realistic poem. We are supposed to have a wind chill here tonight of -15 to -20. I have six chickens in a little house in the back yard and I turned the heat lamp on for them tonight. 'Bitter air,' is right on. Very well worded poem which I can relate to.
I figured that the fans were what Sawyer was enthralled with in the pic.
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2014
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This is truly a realistic poem. We are supposed to have a wind chill here tonight of -15 to -20. I have six chickens in a little house in the back yard and I turned the heat lamp on for them tonight. 'Bitter air,' is right on. Very well worded poem which I can relate to.
I figured that the fans were what Sawyer was enthralled with in the pic.
Comment Written 22-Jan-2014
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2014
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janalma, thank you so very much. Yes, we are having disgustingly cold weather too. Brooke
Comment from Irish Rain
loved this wind poem, and the charming inspiration behind it, your grandson adds lovely visual to your poetry, would make a wonderful children's book that all could easily identify with! blessings to you tonite!
reply by the author on 23-Jan-2014
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loved this wind poem, and the charming inspiration behind it, your grandson adds lovely visual to your poetry, would make a wonderful children's book that all could easily identify with! blessings to you tonite!
Comment Written 22-Jan-2014
reply by the author on 23-Jan-2014
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justjo, thank you so much for your gracious and generous response to this poem :-) Brooke
Comment from Belinda
For me it's apparent, Brooke, since ceiling fans are called kipas angin (wind fan) over here. Fancy how kids love things which are so common to adults. Glad you draw innumerable inspiration from Sawyer...:)
reply by the author on 23-Jan-2014
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For me it's apparent, Brooke, since ceiling fans are called kipas angin (wind fan) over here. Fancy how kids love things which are so common to adults. Glad you draw innumerable inspiration from Sawyer...:)
Comment Written 22-Jan-2014
reply by the author on 23-Jan-2014
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Belinda, thank you so much :-) Brooke
Comment from chasennov
'The Wind,' Another one of your excellent poems you have crafted here, Brooke. The other day I didn't like the wind blowing, Then it got very hot (43.3 deg) and I begged the breeze to come in. Well done.
reply by the author on 23-Jan-2014
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'The Wind,' Another one of your excellent poems you have crafted here, Brooke. The other day I didn't like the wind blowing, Then it got very hot (43.3 deg) and I begged the breeze to come in. Well done.
Comment Written 22-Jan-2014
reply by the author on 23-Jan-2014
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Chasennov, thank you so much :-) Brooke
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You are so welcome, Brooke.
Comment from Super_G_123
Wow! This is such a great poem! The words flowed smoothly and the rhyming worked well. Good luck on your next writing piece! :-)
reply by the author on 23-Jan-2014
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Wow! This is such a great poem! The words flowed smoothly and the rhyming worked well. Good luck on your next writing piece! :-)
Comment Written 22-Jan-2014
reply by the author on 23-Jan-2014
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Super G, thank you so much for your gracious and generous response to this poem :-) Brooke
Comment from Rdfrdmom2
Brooke:
When Cindy was just a baby, she would just laugh
out loud every time we visited a friend of mine
who had a ceiling fan in her living room. She
thought it was the greatest thing ever. She still
loves them but manages not to laugh out loud all
the time now.
thanks for sharing
love,
jan
reply by the author on 23-Jan-2014
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Brooke:
When Cindy was just a baby, she would just laugh
out loud every time we visited a friend of mine
who had a ceiling fan in her living room. She
thought it was the greatest thing ever. She still
loves them but manages not to laugh out loud all
the time now.
thanks for sharing
love,
jan
Comment Written 22-Jan-2014
reply by the author on 23-Jan-2014
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Jan, thank you so much for your great story and for your thoughtful review :-) Brooke
Comment from Mastery
Hi, Brooke. Loved it:
"The world will cower as Wind spills
its frigid cold 'mongst vales and hills"
I wonder who took Sawyer to see the fans?
Blessings, Bob
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2014
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Hi, Brooke. Loved it:
"The world will cower as Wind spills
its frigid cold 'mongst vales and hills"
I wonder who took Sawyer to see the fans?
Blessings, Bob
Comment Written 22-Jan-2014
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2014
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Bob, thank you so much :-) His parents took him to Home Depot.
Brooke
Comment from crzypnter
Great job with this poem. I love it when we can take a true life experience and turn it into a poem or story. It flowed and rhymed nicely the personal touch in your note further drive home this poem. Thank you for sharing. GOD bless August:)
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2014
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Great job with this poem. I love it when we can take a true life experience and turn it into a poem or story. It flowed and rhymed nicely the personal touch in your note further drive home this poem. Thank you for sharing. GOD bless August:)
Comment Written 22-Jan-2014
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2014
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crzypnter, thank you so much :-) Brooke
Comment from Darkhorse555
ah little angel picture blowing The fox and hare both hope it stills, But Wind just puffs its chest and fills beautifully drawn piece dear friend
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ah little angel picture blowing The fox and hare both hope it stills, But Wind just puffs its chest and fills beautifully drawn piece dear friend
Comment Written 22-Jan-2014
Comment from bob cullen
Is there anything you can't write about. I think Britain had a title called the Poet Lauriat, I feel you should be adorned Fanstory's Poet Lauriat. Hope I've spelt it correctly.
This truly was delightful
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Is there anything you can't write about. I think Britain had a title called the Poet Lauriat, I feel you should be adorned Fanstory's Poet Lauriat. Hope I've spelt it correctly.
This truly was delightful
Comment Written 22-Jan-2014
