Thoughts
a rhyming Whitney159 total reviews
Comment from InterestingRon
Hi Brooke,
A clever poem full of wise words.
I find letting my imagination rip on FanStory kills any brooding!
The lovely puss looks like my old cat Monty, who adopted me.
Ron x
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2014
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Hi Brooke,
A clever poem full of wise words.
I find letting my imagination rip on FanStory kills any brooding!
The lovely puss looks like my old cat Monty, who adopted me.
Ron x
Comment Written 19-Jan-2014
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2014
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Thanks so much, Ron :-) Brooke
Comment from mstad55
Yes, I agree 100%. The cat in the picture looks like our kitty only, ours is golden and not gray scale. The dull color adds effect for the mood of the poem. This was not your usual stuff. Makes me think you had something more on your mind and held back a little. Mike
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2014
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Yes, I agree 100%. The cat in the picture looks like our kitty only, ours is golden and not gray scale. The dull color adds effect for the mood of the poem. This was not your usual stuff. Makes me think you had something more on your mind and held back a little. Mike
Comment Written 19-Jan-2014
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2014
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Mike, thank you so much, little brother :-) Brooke
Comment from Tortie Heart
Concise and punchy. Excellent! And so true, the best thoughts are when they're uplifting and wonderful banishing all anxious fretting aside. And the cat picture, cats always look like they're pondering something. Lovely work!
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Concise and punchy. Excellent! And so true, the best thoughts are when they're uplifting and wonderful banishing all anxious fretting aside. And the cat picture, cats always look like they're pondering something. Lovely work!
Comment Written 19-Jan-2014
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2014
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Thank you, Tortie Heart, for your gracious and generous response to this poem :-) Brooke
Comment from RodG
This poem certainly makes it clear how different kinds of "thoughts" affect our outlook on life.
Excellent choice of adjectives/rhymes in "ponderous" and "wondrous."
"weighted down" perfectly describes brooding.
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2014
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This poem certainly makes it clear how different kinds of "thoughts" affect our outlook on life.
Excellent choice of adjectives/rhymes in "ponderous" and "wondrous."
"weighted down" perfectly describes brooding.
Comment Written 19-Jan-2014
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2014
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Rod, thank you so much :-) Brooke
Comment from chasennov
'Thoughts.' "Thoughts can be so ponderous when weighted down with brooding - Better when they're wonderous, our nagging frets excluding. A lovely poem about thoughts. Well done, Brooke.
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'Thoughts.' "Thoughts can be so ponderous when weighted down with brooding - Better when they're wonderous, our nagging frets excluding. A lovely poem about thoughts. Well done, Brooke.
Comment Written 19-Jan-2014
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2014
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chasennov, thank you so much :-) Brooke
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You are so welcome, Brooke.
Comment from alexgeorge
This is a fresh approach for you, Brooke. Nice kitty, and I love the ones featuring Sawyer as well, as you well know.
Their eyes can be so expressive. I have a white one that sits on the window sill and stares at us. I swear that cat was human in a previous lifetime!
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2014
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This is a fresh approach for you, Brooke. Nice kitty, and I love the ones featuring Sawyer as well, as you well know.
Their eyes can be so expressive. I have a white one that sits on the window sill and stares at us. I swear that cat was human in a previous lifetime!
Comment Written 19-Jan-2014
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2014
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Alex, thank you so very much for your gracious and generous response to this poem :-) Brooke
Comment from Keturah Martin
This short work is crammed full of indispensable truth which we all do well to take heed to. The flow of the poem is even and rhythmic throughout. Have a great 2014
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2014
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This short work is crammed full of indispensable truth which we all do well to take heed to. The flow of the poem is even and rhythmic throughout. Have a great 2014
Comment Written 19-Jan-2014
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2014
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Keturah, thank you so very much :-) Brooke
Comment from Sarah Butterfly
Nice poem to read Brooke with a lovely picture attached. Indeed thoughts can weigh upon us when brooding. It is not easy to ban brooding from our mind, but our thoughts are so much beautiful without.
Kind regards
Sarah
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2014
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Nice poem to read Brooke with a lovely picture attached. Indeed thoughts can weigh upon us when brooding. It is not easy to ban brooding from our mind, but our thoughts are so much beautiful without.
Kind regards
Sarah
Comment Written 19-Jan-2014
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2014
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Sarah, thank you so much :-) Brooke
Comment from Margaret Snowdon
Thoughts can be
so ponderous
when weighted
down with brooding --
Better when
they're wonderous,
our nagging frets excluding.
a catchy rhyming Whitney which suits the lovely
picture perfectly, Brooke.
Have a lovely Sunday - sun is shining here - wish I could bottle it and bring it out when it starts to rain - again!!
Margaret
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2014
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Thoughts can be
so ponderous
when weighted
down with brooding --
Better when
they're wonderous,
our nagging frets excluding.
a catchy rhyming Whitney which suits the lovely
picture perfectly, Brooke.
Have a lovely Sunday - sun is shining here - wish I could bottle it and bring it out when it starts to rain - again!!
Margaret
Comment Written 19-Jan-2014
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2014
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Thank you so very much, Margaret :-) Today is going to be okay, and then for the next week we're going to have super frigid temperatures, again! Brooke
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wrap up warm. m
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I am a master of wrapping up and hunkering down. LOL When it comes to cold, I don't have a bold bone in my body :-)
Comment from James Dooney
Very succinct here. I loved it. I like to write this kind of thing myself and I felt that I really resonated with this ! Well done !
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2014
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Very succinct here. I loved it. I like to write this kind of thing myself and I felt that I really resonated with this ! Well done !
Comment Written 19-Jan-2014
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2014
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James, thank you so much :-) Brooke
