Thoughts
a rhyming Whitney159 total reviews
Comment from gazzagodbod
loved this one what a wonderful pondering pussy cat picture and your poem just wonderful thank you my friend loved it xxgazzaxx
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2014
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loved this one what a wonderful pondering pussy cat picture and your poem just wonderful thank you my friend loved it xxgazzaxx
Comment Written 19-Jan-2014
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2014
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gazza, thank you so much :-) Brooke
Comment from Patrick G Cox
Hi Brooke,
A lovely poem to accompany the photo. Watching an animal watching the world, one can only wonder at what they think of a beautiful sunset, a rainbow and so much more. An old cat I had used to always pose herself carefully amidst a display of flowers in the flowerbed - having first contemplated them at a distance.
One has to wonder at her thinking as it was never about hunting or catching anything, the poses she adopted were clearly just for the sheer pleasure of being ...
Patrick
reply by the author on 21-Jan-2014
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Hi Brooke,
A lovely poem to accompany the photo. Watching an animal watching the world, one can only wonder at what they think of a beautiful sunset, a rainbow and so much more. An old cat I had used to always pose herself carefully amidst a display of flowers in the flowerbed - having first contemplated them at a distance.
One has to wonder at her thinking as it was never about hunting or catching anything, the poses she adopted were clearly just for the sheer pleasure of being ...
Patrick
Comment Written 19-Jan-2014
reply by the author on 21-Jan-2014
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Patrick, thanks so much :-) Brooke
Comment from Just2Write
Love your Whitneys, Brooke. They area so simple in their message, yet, I'll bet they can be tough to write. Pixie looks to be close to dreaming, but then sometimes that's when the most interesting thoughts come to us.
Thanks for brightening the day.
Fog here - I'm hoping that the sun will break through it.
Rose.
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2014
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Love your Whitneys, Brooke. They area so simple in their message, yet, I'll bet they can be tough to write. Pixie looks to be close to dreaming, but then sometimes that's when the most interesting thoughts come to us.
Thanks for brightening the day.
Fog here - I'm hoping that the sun will break through it.
Rose.
Comment Written 19-Jan-2014
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2014
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Rose, thanks so much :-) We have had so many gloomy days in the past couple of months that I barely remember what the sun looks like :-) Brooke
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The sun did break through the fog, and it was a brilliant, sunny day. Went for a walk with the puppy. As the Beatles would say - Good day, sunshine.
Comment from Robin Gilmor
It just make you wonder what Pixie is pondering in your Whitney! I don't think she is weighed down or brooding one tiny bit. Enjoyable verse that brought a smile to my face. Robin :)
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2014
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It just make you wonder what Pixie is pondering in your Whitney! I don't think she is weighed down or brooding one tiny bit. Enjoyable verse that brought a smile to my face. Robin :)
Comment Written 19-Jan-2014
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2014
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Robin, thank you so much :-) Brooke
Comment from jadapenn
Ah, I see where you're rhyming your Whitney. Honestly, if your courses weren't so expensive I might have taken lessons long ago. But you see - I have to pay well over ZAR1000 to purchase $99. And we earn peanuts in this country. :) Still, I love your Whitney. Oh, that cat looks like he has plenty problems on his mind. Probably missed the darn mouse again. lol. Well done. luv jada
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2014
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Ah, I see where you're rhyming your Whitney. Honestly, if your courses weren't so expensive I might have taken lessons long ago. But you see - I have to pay well over ZAR1000 to purchase $99. And we earn peanuts in this country. :) Still, I love your Whitney. Oh, that cat looks like he has plenty problems on his mind. Probably missed the darn mouse again. lol. Well done. luv jada
Comment Written 19-Jan-2014
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2014
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Jada, thank you :-) I'm so sorry the classes don't fit into your budget. I understand budgets because mine needing an infusion is why I teach the classes :-) And I don't get nearly all the money the site charges. Brooke
Comment from Preston McWhorter
Hi, Brooke,
"Thoughts" is a delightful seven line poem poem with an unusual rhyme scheme and great flow. It has high quality figurative language and imagery (our nagging thoughts excluding.)
Preston
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2014
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Hi, Brooke,
"Thoughts" is a delightful seven line poem poem with an unusual rhyme scheme and great flow. It has high quality figurative language and imagery (our nagging thoughts excluding.)
Preston
Comment Written 19-Jan-2014
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2014
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Preston, thank you so much :-) Brooke
Comment from joneau2
What a delightful and poignant write. I enjoyed it immensely. The picture of the cat is so perfect for the post ... a great choice. I can just see it pondering whatever.
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2014
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What a delightful and poignant write. I enjoyed it immensely. The picture of the cat is so perfect for the post ... a great choice. I can just see it pondering whatever.
Comment Written 19-Jan-2014
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2014
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joneau, thanks so much :-) Brooke
Comment from James W. A.
Another great work! Short and simple, but interesting and entertaining nonetheless. Rhymes were cool, so all in all, another great job!
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2014
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Another great work! Short and simple, but interesting and entertaining nonetheless. Rhymes were cool, so all in all, another great job!
Comment Written 19-Jan-2014
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2014
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Thank you so much, James :-) Brooke
Comment from Bayberry
An excellent message for readers to consider, Brooke. And I also like the picture of Pixie who looks a little bit like my Angel Kitty. :)
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2014
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An excellent message for readers to consider, Brooke. And I also like the picture of Pixie who looks a little bit like my Angel Kitty. :)
Comment Written 19-Jan-2014
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2014
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Bayberry, thank you so much :-) Brooke
Comment from Dorothy Farrell
Wise words as usual from you. Brooding never gets us anywhere but very often we cannot help ourselves. Yo always have wonderous thoughts would be truly lovely. Good Whitney. Regards Dorothy
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2014
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Wise words as usual from you. Brooding never gets us anywhere but very often we cannot help ourselves. Yo always have wonderous thoughts would be truly lovely. Good Whitney. Regards Dorothy
Comment Written 19-Jan-2014
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2014
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Dorothy, thank you so much :-) Brooke
