Thoughts
a rhyming Whitney159 total reviews
Comment from nancyjam
I like the message in your Whitney.
Better to think positive, happy thoughts
each day for a happier life.
Perfect Whitney form and the rhyme adds
pleasure to the reading. Nancy
reply by the author on 18-Jan-2014
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I like the message in your Whitney.
Better to think positive, happy thoughts
each day for a happier life.
Perfect Whitney form and the rhyme adds
pleasure to the reading. Nancy
Comment Written 18-Jan-2014
reply by the author on 18-Jan-2014
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Thanks so much, Nancy :-) Brooke
Comment from Acquired Taste
Truer words never before spoken by a cat! I love the photo. In with the positive - out with the negative. Excellent words to live by and flows nicely.
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Truer words never before spoken by a cat! I love the photo. In with the positive - out with the negative. Excellent words to live by and flows nicely.
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Comment Written 18-Jan-2014
reply by the author on 18-Jan-2014
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Acquired Taste, thanks so much :-) Brooke
Comment from Domino 2
You're obviously a gifted and aware writer of the whitney and its rules, Brooke, so I assume nature isn't a necessary theme, as in the current contest where it's specified.
Only ladies (and cats - in your picture) 'nag' and 'brood', don't forget. Haha.
Excellent assonance in 'brooding/excluding' rhyme.
Nice alliteration in 'brooding/better'
Very clever and fun read.
Best wishes, Ted
reply by the author on 18-Jan-2014
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You're obviously a gifted and aware writer of the whitney and its rules, Brooke, so I assume nature isn't a necessary theme, as in the current contest where it's specified.
Only ladies (and cats - in your picture) 'nag' and 'brood', don't forget. Haha.
Excellent assonance in 'brooding/excluding' rhyme.
Nice alliteration in 'brooding/better'
Very clever and fun read.
Best wishes, Ted
Comment Written 18-Jan-2014
reply by the author on 18-Jan-2014
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Yes, this is not in the nature Whitney contest - it's just a plain old Whitney. LOL Thanks so much, Ted. :-) Brooke
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I was surprised you didn't enter the contest, Brooke - though I'm not complaining. :-) x
Comment from Matoshka
What a picture of Pixie, you can tell he/she is so loved. They have minds of their own and so fun to watch.They always look like their deep in thought. I so enjoyed this and it is so true. They say a cat picks its owner, we don't get a choice. LOL Blessings
reply by the author on 18-Jan-2014
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What a picture of Pixie, you can tell he/she is so loved. They have minds of their own and so fun to watch.They always look like their deep in thought. I so enjoyed this and it is so true. They say a cat picks its owner, we don't get a choice. LOL Blessings
Comment Written 18-Jan-2014
reply by the author on 18-Jan-2014
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Matoshka, thank you. When Pixie was approaching his bedroom the other morning, Sawyer recognized her meow before he saw her and shouted, Good morning, Pixie. LOL :-) Brooke
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How precious is that, Brooke. It sounds like the two are quite the pair. Wonder what they do when no one is looking. LOL Blessings
Comment from c_lucas
As a man thinketh, so he is. Keep the positives, discard the negatives. This is very well written with a smooth flow of words, making for a good read.
reply by the author on 18-Jan-2014
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As a man thinketh, so he is. Keep the positives, discard the negatives. This is very well written with a smooth flow of words, making for a good read.
Comment Written 18-Jan-2014
reply by the author on 18-Jan-2014
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Thank you so much, Charlie :-) Brooke
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You're welcome, Brooke. Charlie
Comment from His Grayness
Hi Brooke: really delightful as usual and the lovely cat photo was absolutely perfect. Good advice of course which always finds it's way into your works!! Have a wonderful day. Vance
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Hi Brooke: really delightful as usual and the lovely cat photo was absolutely perfect. Good advice of course which always finds it's way into your works!! Have a wonderful day. Vance
Comment Written 18-Jan-2014
reply by the author on 18-Jan-2014
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Vance, thank you so much :-) Brooke
Comment from Marillion
Short and sweet and positive, and a nice piece to see on a late Saturday afternoon. Love the sentiment, Brooke, although a good purging is always a nice catharsis. I love how you ended it, and I imagine there may have been a tug-of war between excluding and working it around to end with exuding.
reply by the author on 18-Jan-2014
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Short and sweet and positive, and a nice piece to see on a late Saturday afternoon. Love the sentiment, Brooke, although a good purging is always a nice catharsis. I love how you ended it, and I imagine there may have been a tug-of war between excluding and working it around to end with exuding.
Comment Written 18-Jan-2014
reply by the author on 18-Jan-2014
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Marillion,thanks so much :-) Brooke
Comment from angelface2
Awww. I love this Brooke. I love the picture. Cause I guess you know, I love cats. Sometimes wonder what they are pondering about. Very good Whitney. LOL Miss Sally
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reply by the author on 18-Jan-2014
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Awww. I love this Brooke. I love the picture. Cause I guess you know, I love cats. Sometimes wonder what they are pondering about. Very good Whitney. LOL Miss Sally
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Comment Written 18-Jan-2014
reply by the author on 18-Jan-2014
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Miss Sally, thank you so much :-) Brooke
Comment from Maureen's Pen
Amen to that one! As always skillfully penned with a great sage like wisdom - one I am struggling to find at the moment in my journey...new lessons for me I suppose :) - I liked this one my friend :)
Thanks for sharing it.
Maureen
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reply by the author on 18-Jan-2014
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Amen to that one! As always skillfully penned with a great sage like wisdom - one I am struggling to find at the moment in my journey...new lessons for me I suppose :) - I liked this one my friend :)
Thanks for sharing it.
Maureen
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Comment Written 18-Jan-2014
reply by the author on 18-Jan-2014
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Maureen, thank you so much :-) Brooke
