Thoughts
a rhyming Whitney159 total reviews
Comment from 24chas
This was an enjoyable read, adewpearl. Liked the pic you used with the piece. Went along with it nicely. Nice structure and form.
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2014
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This was an enjoyable read, adewpearl. Liked the pic you used with the piece. Went along with it nicely. Nice structure and form.
Comment Written 19-Jan-2014
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2014
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24chas, thanks so much :-) Brooke
Comment from Carole Rosa
Brooke, You have written wonderful words of wisdom and Sawyer's cat truly looks like he is brooding. I often look like that myself. Thank you for your daily unique and delightful rhyme. Carole
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2014
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Brooke, You have written wonderful words of wisdom and Sawyer's cat truly looks like he is brooding. I often look like that myself. Thank you for your daily unique and delightful rhyme. Carole
Comment Written 19-Jan-2014
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2014
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Carole, thank you so much :-) Brooke
Comment from sweetwoodjax
this is very well written, brooke, you did an excellent job writing this whitney poem about the thoughts that can overwhelm us. i needed to read this one yesterday. i was so depressed yesterday i cried all the way to work.
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2014
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this is very well written, brooke, you did an excellent job writing this whitney poem about the thoughts that can overwhelm us. i needed to read this one yesterday. i was so depressed yesterday i cried all the way to work.
Comment Written 19-Jan-2014
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2014
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sweetwoodjax, thank you so much - I'm sorry to hear you needed this poem so much. I hope you're feeling better. Brooke
Comment from boxergirl
I'm amazed at all the different
formats you use for your
poetry. You are one talented lady.
nice alteration of w's and rhyming of
wonderous and ponderous . 8-)
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2014
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I'm amazed at all the different
formats you use for your
poetry. You are one talented lady.
nice alteration of w's and rhyming of
wonderous and ponderous . 8-)
Comment Written 19-Jan-2014
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2014
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boxergirl, thank you so much :-) Brooke
Comment from MM lives on :)
Hey Brooke, I like the friendly bounce of this poem and an out with the negative thought and think like a playful carefree kitten, lol..great job
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2014
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Hey Brooke, I like the friendly bounce of this poem and an out with the negative thought and think like a playful carefree kitten, lol..great job
Comment Written 18-Jan-2014
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2014
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Christopher, thank you so much :-) Brooke
Comment from Dawn Munro
Aw, now that's just too cute! It's just a great poem, and a perfect picture for it. I always say my Miss Priss has the most expressive face, but it looks like this one is deep in thought; yes, maybe brooding. LOL
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2014
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Aw, now that's just too cute! It's just a great poem, and a perfect picture for it. I always say my Miss Priss has the most expressive face, but it looks like this one is deep in thought; yes, maybe brooding. LOL
Comment Written 18-Jan-2014
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2014
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Dawn, thank you so much - they have two cats - Potato is the extroverted, active one and Pixie is the thinker. LOL :-) Brooke
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Hahahaha - oh, THAT explains a LOT. Prissy must be a thinker too!
Comment from Sueellen11
So so very true,, when we ponder on things we cannot change we weigh ourselves down and heaviness,, but thoughts of faith, love and peacefulness give us such wondrous feelings,,I enjoyed reading this one,,, well done great message to all,,,blessings sueellen
reply by the author on 18-Jan-2014
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So so very true,, when we ponder on things we cannot change we weigh ourselves down and heaviness,, but thoughts of faith, love and peacefulness give us such wondrous feelings,,I enjoyed reading this one,,, well done great message to all,,,blessings sueellen
Comment Written 18-Jan-2014
reply by the author on 18-Jan-2014
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sueellen, thank you so much :-) Brooke
Comment from w.j.debi
This poem has a lot to ponder. You creat vivid images with strong word choices. Not a word is wasted. The cat in the picture does look like the weight of the world is too much to bear which compliments your message well.
reply by the author on 20-Jan-2014
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This poem has a lot to ponder. You creat vivid images with strong word choices. Not a word is wasted. The cat in the picture does look like the weight of the world is too much to bear which compliments your message well.
Comment Written 18-Jan-2014
reply by the author on 20-Jan-2014
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Debi, thank you so much :-) Brooke
Comment from Maria C.
You have said so much in so few words. This is a Whitney worth quoting. Rhymes nicely too. I especially like ponderous and wonderous. I like the Whitney form. Learned it from you!
Blessings, peace and hugs.
Maria
reply by the author on 18-Jan-2014
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You have said so much in so few words. This is a Whitney worth quoting. Rhymes nicely too. I especially like ponderous and wonderous. I like the Whitney form. Learned it from you!
Blessings, peace and hugs.
Maria
Comment Written 18-Jan-2014
reply by the author on 18-Jan-2014
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Maria, thank you so much :-) Brooke
Comment from visionary1234
RHYMING Whitneys are not easy to pull off, Brooke - and your flawless rhythm really helps out here. Well done! Clever use of 'ponderous' and 'wonderous' - delightful!
:)Sharyn
reply by the author on 18-Jan-2014
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RHYMING Whitneys are not easy to pull off, Brooke - and your flawless rhythm really helps out here. Well done! Clever use of 'ponderous' and 'wonderous' - delightful!
:)Sharyn
Comment Written 18-Jan-2014
reply by the author on 18-Jan-2014
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Sharyn, thank you so much :-) Brooke
