Cardinal's Gift
Quadruple Lune: Faith Restored17 total reviews
Comment from Gravell
Good poetry in motion here. Your words has been perfectly chosen creating poetic language. Excellent presentation representing the poem perfectly. Great metaphorical language between red and white, hot and cold. Life and death. Well done and good luck in the contest.
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Good poetry in motion here. Your words has been perfectly chosen creating poetic language. Excellent presentation representing the poem perfectly. Great metaphorical language between red and white, hot and cold. Life and death. Well done and good luck in the contest.
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Comment Written 17-Jan-2014
reply by the author on 17-Jan-2014
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Thank you for stopping by! I am perplexed, however, by your comments coupled with your rating.
Comment from allborn66
This is a very powerful poem. The word choice paints a vivid picture. The form enhances the piece. You communicate your theme well.
Barbara
reply by the author on 17-Jan-2014
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This is a very powerful poem. The word choice paints a vivid picture. The form enhances the piece. You communicate your theme well.
Barbara
Comment Written 17-Jan-2014
reply by the author on 17-Jan-2014
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Thank you for stopping by and your kind review! diane
Comment from Erik McGinley
That is a very striking caption image!
Maybe literal but interpretable as loss of virginity and very obscurely as a period and possibility of pregnancy.
Nice deep imagery in there :D
reply by the author on 17-Jan-2014
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That is a very striking caption image!
Maybe literal but interpretable as loss of virginity and very obscurely as a period and possibility of pregnancy.
Nice deep imagery in there :D
Comment Written 17-Jan-2014
reply by the author on 17-Jan-2014
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Thank you for your kind review! diane
Comment from seaglass
Lovely picture, lovely poem. I have often thought God created cardinals for the purpose of giving us joy during the cold dark days of winter. The Lune style of poetry was a great choice for shaping this theme into a meaningful, spiritual message.
reply by the author on 17-Jan-2014
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Lovely picture, lovely poem. I have often thought God created cardinals for the purpose of giving us joy during the cold dark days of winter. The Lune style of poetry was a great choice for shaping this theme into a meaningful, spiritual message.
Comment Written 17-Jan-2014
reply by the author on 17-Jan-2014
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So pleased you enjoyed my offering! Thank you!
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You are welcome
Comment from Crunchie
Mrs KT
You write beautifully about this wondrous little bird restoring your faith to you on a cold day by his presence.
A lovely uplifting poem thank you for sharing.
Love
Crunchie xxx
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Mrs KT
You write beautifully about this wondrous little bird restoring your faith to you on a cold day by his presence.
A lovely uplifting poem thank you for sharing.
Love
Crunchie xxx
Comment Written 17-Jan-2014
reply by the author on 17-Jan-2014
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Thank you for your kind review! diane
Comment from Petriesan
good luck in the contest
you ask: Who am I to doubt?
To question
What I do not know?
my unsolicited answer: you are the beloved of God.
Peace
reply by the author on 17-Jan-2014
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good luck in the contest
you ask: Who am I to doubt?
To question
What I do not know?
my unsolicited answer: you are the beloved of God.
Peace
Comment Written 17-Jan-2014
reply by the author on 17-Jan-2014
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My humble thanks for your kind review...diane
Comment from trevorletang
oh wow this is such a beautiful picture and the poem tells a splendid story. Would love to see something like this in real life. Can see how it would be a restorer of ones faith. Wow what a marvellous God we serve
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oh wow this is such a beautiful picture and the poem tells a splendid story. Would love to see something like this in real life. Can see how it would be a restorer of ones faith. Wow what a marvellous God we serve
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Comment Written 17-Jan-2014
reply by the author on 17-Jan-2014
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Thank you for your kind review! diane
