Hominidae
Poem written by me & published in 20012 total reviews
Comment from His Grayness
NOTHING IS POSTED IN THE WRITING BLOCK SO IT IS DIFFICULT TO WRITE ANY KIND OF REAL REVIEW SO IN ORDER TO GET PAST THE MESSAGE THAT THE MESSAGE IS TOO SHORT, I SHALL FLATTER MY BLATTER WITH A LOT THAT DOES NOT MATTER BLAH BLAH BLAH AND GOOO GOOOOLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLL
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2014
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NOTHING IS POSTED IN THE WRITING BLOCK SO IT IS DIFFICULT TO WRITE ANY KIND OF REAL REVIEW SO IN ORDER TO GET PAST THE MESSAGE THAT THE MESSAGE IS TOO SHORT, I SHALL FLATTER MY BLATTER WITH A LOT THAT DOES NOT MATTER BLAH BLAH BLAH AND GOOO GOOOOLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLL
Comment Written 16-Jan-2014
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2014
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My apologies. I had failed to "review" final look prior. Now, it can be read clearly.
Comment from tfawcus
Sadly this lovely poem has achieved complete invisibility! You need to change the font colour to something very much darker! I was only able to read it by cutting and pasting it into a Word document first and the adjusting the font. Worth the effort though. I liked the general thesis of your poem and the hopeful ending. There were some telling lines, I thought, and I was particularly impressed by:
"Man is swallowed
By his own incredulity"
reply by the author on 16-Jan-2014
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Sadly this lovely poem has achieved complete invisibility! You need to change the font colour to something very much darker! I was only able to read it by cutting and pasting it into a Word document first and the adjusting the font. Worth the effort though. I liked the general thesis of your poem and the hopeful ending. There were some telling lines, I thought, and I was particularly impressed by:
"Man is swallowed
By his own incredulity"
Comment Written 15-Jan-2014
reply by the author on 16-Jan-2014
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Thank you very much, tfawcus! Glad you liked Hominidae in particular those 2 lines you had cited.
