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Change Too

Another shorty - 5/7/5 about change.

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Comment from G.B. Smith
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Hello Linda
I am the same way about change. The change in me is awesome, but the fat old gray bearded man in the mirror has changed from a handsome young man to an old fart
Bear

 Comment Written 07-Jan-2014


reply by the author on 07-Jan-2014
    Well, honey, we can be "old farts" together. I have written a series of five (so far) poems about change, don't know why, just popped into my head one day about how many ways we used the word "change". When I graduated from high school (1967), I weighed 99 pounds. After having three children, I struggled to maintain at 130 pounds. Now, at age 65, I am toting around 200 pounds. Talk about change!! I don't even try to lose it any more, just keep enjoying what I like to eat. Nice talking to ya Bear. . .Linda
Comment from steevie
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another musing from the keen mind of Linda. The word 'change' is so versatile ... it can take on many meanings ... you have used it in various ways ..

well done, my friend

smiles
steve

 Comment Written 05-Jan-2014


reply by the author on 05-Jan-2014
    Thank you, Steve, for being my booster club and sharing your thoughts on what I write. Linda
reply by steevie on 09-Jan-2014
    It was my pleasure, Linda!

    keep smiling and the world will smile with you

    hugs
    steve
Comment from zanya
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'Too old for change' -that we can never be as my school Head used to drill into us years ago 'change is the only constant'. This season is filled with change!!

 Comment Written 05-Jan-2014


reply by the author on 05-Jan-2014
    Thanks for reading and sharing your thoughts, Zanya. Linda
Comment from CreativeXXXX
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The body of this poem took me by surprise, I certainly wasn't expecting the first line to be about changing a diaper. It's very creative and clever. I like the final statement about being too old to change. Good work.

 Comment Written 05-Jan-2014


reply by the author on 05-Jan-2014
    CreativeXXXX: I'm writing a series of 3/5/3 and 5/7/5 poems using "change" as many ways as I can think. This is number two and at least number 3 will be posted today. Thanks for reading and sharing your thoughts. Linda