Writing Prompt Entries 2014
Viewing comments for Chapter 1 "Soothed"The clue is in the title!
16 total reviews
Comment from RichardFann
Fabulous picture,
By a great photographer.
Like the poem.
Except I thought it was about
seawater
till I read the notes!
I dare not recall my times of tears.
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2015
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Fabulous picture,
By a great photographer.
Like the poem.
Except I thought it was about
seawater
till I read the notes!
I dare not recall my times of tears.
Comment Written 09-Apr-2015
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2015
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LOL! Thank you, Richard :)
I'm glad you enjoyed the poem - as always, I appreciate the generous 6 star award - very kind of you!
Best wishes, Debra
Comment from Leineco
Valves release
as salt water s
p
i
l
l
s.
I am soothed.
Lovely use of the simulated flow of a tear drop falling :-)
reply by the author on 12-Jan-2014
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Valves release
as salt water s
p
i
l
l
s.
I am soothed.
Lovely use of the simulated flow of a tear drop falling :-)
Comment Written 06-Jan-2014
reply by the author on 12-Jan-2014
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Hi lorraine :) Thank you for the great review. Sorry for late reply, I've been unable to log on for a week x
Comment from Capricorn30
Excellent!
Great creativity incorporating blue font while simultaneously spelling an imperative word to resemble a falling teardrop;
Nothing like a good cry to make us feel better.
reply by the author on 12-Jan-2014
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Excellent!
Great creativity incorporating blue font while simultaneously spelling an imperative word to resemble a falling teardrop;
Nothing like a good cry to make us feel better.
Comment Written 05-Jan-2014
reply by the author on 12-Jan-2014
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Thank you for your great comments. I appreciate your review :) Kindest regards Debra
Comment from Val Crisson
As much as I find the presentation of this little poem fabulous, I don't find the message that interesting. "Pills" is an odd word to describe a tearful vent, though I know it's appropriate syllable count. I believe the poet was going more for presentation than substance.
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reply by the author on 06-Jan-2014
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As much as I find the presentation of this little poem fabulous, I don't find the message that interesting. "Pills" is an odd word to describe a tearful vent, though I know it's appropriate syllable count. I believe the poet was going more for presentation than substance.
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The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 05-Jan-2014
reply by the author on 06-Jan-2014
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Hi val, thank you for your review. I'm glad you enjoyed the presentation, although I promise that I did think about the content of the poem as much as the presentation! The word presented vertically is "spills" not "pills". I always appreciate your comments though ;) kindest regards as always, Debra
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Sorry, Debra, I missed the "s"
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That's ok!
Comment from nelliesellie
I love the picture. I love the way you formed the poem. Yes, tears spilling can bring you comfort. They wash away the pain. Tears are cleansing water. Great work. Good luck with the contest.
reply by the author on 12-Jan-2014
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I love the picture. I love the way you formed the poem. Yes, tears spilling can bring you comfort. They wash away the pain. Tears are cleansing water. Great work. Good luck with the contest.
Comment Written 05-Jan-2014
reply by the author on 12-Jan-2014
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Thank you for your great comments and good luck wishes. I appreciate both :) Kindest regards Debra
Comment from in777wr#
This was a cleverly written poem. The poem is well written, and flows well.
Valves release
as salt water spills
I am soothed
I loved the creativity in this poem. Well written.
reply by the author on 12-Jan-2014
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This was a cleverly written poem. The poem is well written, and flows well.
Valves release
as salt water spills
I am soothed
I loved the creativity in this poem. Well written.
Comment Written 05-Jan-2014
reply by the author on 12-Jan-2014
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Thank you for your great comments. I appreciate your review :) Kindest regards Debra
Comment from adewpearl
clever use of formatting as the word spills spills down the page
I like the alliteration of salt/spills/soothed
perfect pairing with the photo of the tear
Brooke
reply by the author on 05-Jan-2014
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clever use of formatting as the word spills spills down the page
I like the alliteration of salt/spills/soothed
perfect pairing with the photo of the tear
Brooke
Comment Written 05-Jan-2014
reply by the author on 05-Jan-2014
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Hi Brooke, thank you for your great comments :) Kindest regards as always... x
Comment from l.raven
some times crying seems to that the pressure off of what hurts so bad... a small poem that says so very much...so very well written...
reply by the author on 05-Jan-2014
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some times crying seems to that the pressure off of what hurts so bad... a small poem that says so very much...so very well written...
Comment Written 05-Jan-2014
reply by the author on 05-Jan-2014
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Thank you Linda for your lovely comments. I appreciate it :) Kindest regards...
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sooooo very welcome...xxoo
Comment from Jeanie Mercer
This is a quite creative presentation, with the "salt water" spilling down the page. I enjoyed reading it. Good luck to you, Jeanie Mercer
reply by the author on 05-Jan-2014
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This is a quite creative presentation, with the "salt water" spilling down the page. I enjoyed reading it. Good luck to you, Jeanie Mercer
Comment Written 05-Jan-2014
reply by the author on 05-Jan-2014
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Thank you Jeanie for your great comments and good luck wishes. I appreciate both! Kindest regards... :)
Comment from tfawcus
What a great picture and innovative presentation of your poem. There is nothing quite like a good cry for cleansing the soul and putting us back on track again!
reply by the author on 05-Jan-2014
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What a great picture and innovative presentation of your poem. There is nothing quite like a good cry for cleansing the soul and putting us back on track again!
Comment Written 05-Jan-2014
reply by the author on 05-Jan-2014
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Hi Tony, thank you for your great comments. Kindest regards...:)
