Random Reflections.
Viewing comments for Chapter 9 "There is A Choice To Make."Poems of Random wandering; an inward look.
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Comment from kiwigirl2821
I enjoyed reading this one. If I could offer anything it would be that I found so many separations distracting from the actual work. good luck. xoxo Kiwi
reply by the author on 08-Jan-2014
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I enjoyed reading this one. If I could offer anything it would be that I found so many separations distracting from the actual work. good luck. xoxo Kiwi
Comment Written 08-Jan-2014
reply by the author on 08-Jan-2014
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Thanks for your review. Can you please be more specific so I can revisit that area and may be able to fix it.
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The numbering I, II, III, etc. I didn't think your piece needed these and thought it would be easier to read and enjoy without them. Good luck. xoxo Kiwi
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Thanks for the suggestion. I find it hard to use the website for posting a poem as all stanzas seem to get jumbled up and lines join with other. I have learned to handle this now. Thanks again.
Comment from shanteseg
I love this poem, I was very touch by it. You really did a great job expressing your point. I especially like how you begin the poem and ended it. This was a poem that I will read daily good job.
reply by the author on 08-Jan-2014
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I love this poem, I was very touch by it. You really did a great job expressing your point. I especially like how you begin the poem and ended it. This was a poem that I will read daily good job.
Comment Written 08-Jan-2014
reply by the author on 08-Jan-2014
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Thanks for your encouraging words. The subject of why human world is full of inequality has tormented philosophers and common man for ever; this seems to be one explanation of it.
