Percolation
The way a writer works29 total reviews
Comment from kiwijenny
This seems to happen to me at night...............it seems that I go to bed with a problem ........and at night thoughts percolate and in the morning a solution
Well done
God bless
reply by the author on 26-Dec-2013
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This seems to happen to me at night...............it seems that I go to bed with a problem ........and at night thoughts percolate and in the morning a solution
Well done
God bless
Comment Written 25-Dec-2013
reply by the author on 26-Dec-2013
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Thank you for your review and comments. RJ
Comment from Smoothiecool
great picture for this poem
good luck in the contest
your Acrostic works well and flows
your words allow the reader to see and feel your thoughts on s writers mine and process of putting it all down on paper before the last is published
you have covered this well
your lines flow well easy read
cheers Smoothiecool
reply by the author on 26-Dec-2013
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great picture for this poem
good luck in the contest
your Acrostic works well and flows
your words allow the reader to see and feel your thoughts on s writers mine and process of putting it all down on paper before the last is published
you have covered this well
your lines flow well easy read
cheers Smoothiecool
Comment Written 25-Dec-2013
reply by the author on 26-Dec-2013
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Thank you for your review and nice comments. RJ
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welcome
Comment from Roo4U
I loved the use of the visual pic and totally enjoyed the flow of the poem. That said, I was a it dismayed at the last two lines. I wasn't sure how to take the last two lines!
All in all, I sincerely enjoyed reading your work.
reply by the author on 26-Dec-2013
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I loved the use of the visual pic and totally enjoyed the flow of the poem. That said, I was a it dismayed at the last two lines. I wasn't sure how to take the last two lines!
All in all, I sincerely enjoyed reading your work.
Comment Written 25-Dec-2013
reply by the author on 26-Dec-2013
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Thank you for your review and comments. For me the last two lines are the end, how it all comes together. You mull or work it through your mind over and over, the next thing you know you have something cool to write. RJ
Comment from Phatsoul77
Yes this says a lot about this particular writer, I believe. I would even go so far as to say that this poem is close from the poets heart and best destined a quality about a rarely recognized characteristic about the writer from even their closest of friends.
reply by the author on 26-Dec-2013
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Yes this says a lot about this particular writer, I believe. I would even go so far as to say that this poem is close from the poets heart and best destined a quality about a rarely recognized characteristic about the writer from even their closest of friends.
Comment Written 25-Dec-2013
reply by the author on 26-Dec-2013
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Thank you for your review and comments. It does come from within, it is nice that you have seen that. RJ
Comment from Erik McGinley
Nice caption image, nice idea fairly well conveyed.
It reads a little bit contrivedly, in the sense that, Revisions at least, don't usually come at the start of the creative process.
This bit, purely personal perspective; slightly more abstract writing style might have got the idea across a bit better.
Nevertheless, nice poem and I enjoyed reading.
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reply by the author on 26-Dec-2013
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Nice caption image, nice idea fairly well conveyed.
It reads a little bit contrivedly, in the sense that, Revisions at least, don't usually come at the start of the creative process.
This bit, purely personal perspective; slightly more abstract writing style might have got the idea across a bit better.
Nevertheless, nice poem and I enjoyed reading.
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Comment Written 25-Dec-2013
reply by the author on 26-Dec-2013
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Thank you for your review and comments. RJ
Comment from denhagan
This is a nice Acrostic poem with descriptive phrases that describe the thought processes that writers and poets go through in creating a story or poem.
reply by the author on 26-Dec-2013
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This is a nice Acrostic poem with descriptive phrases that describe the thought processes that writers and poets go through in creating a story or poem.
Comment Written 25-Dec-2013
reply by the author on 26-Dec-2013
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Thank you for your review and comments. RJ
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You're welcome RJ,
Dennis
Comment from tfawcus
What an interesting summary of the writing process! There is much here with which I can identify, especially 'Acquired as we allow the mind to drift". This is an acrostic that will resonate with many people. Good luck in the contest!
reply by the author on 26-Dec-2013
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What an interesting summary of the writing process! There is much here with which I can identify, especially 'Acquired as we allow the mind to drift". This is an acrostic that will resonate with many people. Good luck in the contest!
Comment Written 25-Dec-2013
reply by the author on 26-Dec-2013
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Thank you for your review and nice comments. RJ
Comment from write hand blue
We are all different but we have to tread the same path when it comes to artistic expression.
You describe the art of writing to a Tee, using the not so easy form of an Acrostic poem.
Good luck in the competition.
:) mel.
reply by the author on 26-Dec-2013
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We are all different but we have to tread the same path when it comes to artistic expression.
You describe the art of writing to a Tee, using the not so easy form of an Acrostic poem.
Good luck in the competition.
:) mel.
Comment Written 25-Dec-2013
reply by the author on 26-Dec-2013
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Thank you for your review and nice comments. RJ
Comment from rouskin
This is a really good poem and a worthy contest entry
Excellent artwork to complement this poem
Best of luck in the contest
Merry Christmas and Happy Holidays
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reply by the author on 26-Dec-2013
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This is a really good poem and a worthy contest entry
Excellent artwork to complement this poem
Best of luck in the contest
Merry Christmas and Happy Holidays
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Comment Written 25-Dec-2013
reply by the author on 26-Dec-2013
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Thank you for your review and nice comments. RJ
