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A fond memory of time spent together.
2 total reviews
Comment from
Merriweather
Good luck Dawn with your contest entry. I really enjoyed reading your poem. It never ceases to amaze me how a poem having three lines can deliver a whole story. I think you have been able to use these words to freeze a moment in time. The poem evokes a feeling of closeness, warmth and relaxation. I like the image of white sheets.
Comment Written 17-Dec-2013
reply by the author on 27-Dec-2013
Thank you so much! You are the ideal audience: understanding exactly what I hoped to convey!
Comment from
country ranch writer
those were the good old days of just lying with your loved one in the peace and the quiet of the early morning all snuggled together
Comment Written 17-Dec-2013
reply by the author on 27-Dec-2013
exactly! Thanks for your review, it's always nice to get feedback.
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