Let Me Paint For You
My reply to someone who asked Am I an Artist28 total reviews
Comment from TAB_that's me
You are so right TK - we poets paint without a brush - and you do such a good job of it. We can turn mud into rainbows:)
~Teresa~
reply by the author on 16-Dec-2013
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You are so right TK - we poets paint without a brush - and you do such a good job of it. We can turn mud into rainbows:)
~Teresa~
Comment Written 16-Dec-2013
reply by the author on 16-Dec-2013
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Thank you so much Teresa Love that line "Mud into rainbows"
May have to steal that one from you sometime with aknowledgement of course lol
TK
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You go right ahead and use it. Sometimes a line in a poem sparks our own creativity. :)
Comment from Barb Hensongispsaca
Please tell Mermaid that no matter what is wrong, things always look better with writing.
This is a nice piece explaining the position of an artist . A professional. A work in the making
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Please tell Mermaid that no matter what is wrong, things always look better with writing.
This is a nice piece explaining the position of an artist . A professional. A work in the making
Comment Written 16-Dec-2013
reply by the author on 16-Dec-2013
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Thank you Barb she alre4ady read you kind words and thanks you as much as I do
TK
Comment from ronnie k
" .. sun shine on a dreary cloudy day " wow, if the question was not answered for your friend it surly gave this artist a even better reason to PAINT
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" .. sun shine on a dreary cloudy day " wow, if the question was not answered for your friend it surly gave this artist a even better reason to PAINT
Comment Written 16-Dec-2013
reply by the author on 16-Dec-2013
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Thank you so much ronnie
TK
Comment from Deepakurup
Absolutely true.Books were and are an integral part of me.This poem wonderfully showcases this immense power of words and of creative intelligence..
reply by the author on 16-Dec-2013
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Absolutely true.Books were and are an integral part of me.This poem wonderfully showcases this immense power of words and of creative intelligence..
Comment Written 16-Dec-2013
reply by the author on 16-Dec-2013
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Thank you so very much for your more than kind words mini-k
TK
Comment from nancy_e_davis
Yes, we are painters but we do it with words.
We can paint emotions and sights and many things that cannot be caught on canvas. Glad you are better. Hope to see you both active again soon. xxx Nancy
reply by the author on 16-Dec-2013
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Yes, we are painters but we do it with words.
We can paint emotions and sights and many things that cannot be caught on canvas. Glad you are better. Hope to see you both active again soon. xxx Nancy
Comment Written 16-Dec-2013
reply by the author on 16-Dec-2013
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Thank yo very much Nancy !!! We are on the mend woo hoo bout time too
Hugs TK
Comment from Gungalo
So let me paint for you
Let me make you sigh
Let me make you cry
Let me make you fall in love
Merry Christmas you two and I sure do hope your health issues go away. Awesome this is.
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reply by the author on 16-Dec-2013
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So let me paint for you
Let me make you sigh
Let me make you cry
Let me make you fall in love
Merry Christmas you two and I sure do hope your health issues go away. Awesome this is.
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Comment Written 16-Dec-2013
reply by the author on 16-Dec-2013
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Thank you very much Ms G Yes have had a few issues lately but we are on the heal well I am now fine just Mermaid with that broken fin needs to heal than back to normal for us
TK
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Good luck TK.
Comment from Pili Pubul
Hey, so great to have you back hope you'll be better than new soon.
Glad I kept one six star for some special poem that touched my heart.
Well my Knight you did it, what a beautiful artist you are, I enjoy all the
great paintings you described so well including falling in love... with your poem... Big enormous hug.. Pili
reply by the author on 16-Dec-2013
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Hey, so great to have you back hope you'll be better than new soon.
Glad I kept one six star for some special poem that touched my heart.
Well my Knight you did it, what a beautiful artist you are, I enjoy all the
great paintings you described so well including falling in love... with your poem... Big enormous hug.. Pili
Comment Written 16-Dec-2013
reply by the author on 16-Dec-2013
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I am so glad that it touched you Pili Thank you so much for your kind words and that big green emerald cross that you gave me woo hoo Hugs and xx
TK
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My great pleasure... Welcome back. Hugs
Comment from kiwisteveh
I loved the idea and the spirit of this piece - isn't this what we all try to do? Change somebody's life with the power of our words. I still keep my most cherished review where somebody expressed so clearly just how I had managed to do that.
I have to say that I felt just a little let down by the very last line - yes, it summed up the thought of the poem, but it did so with an image repeated from just above. I felt that this powerful position demanded something stronger and more original.
Spag alert - You have 'with out' as two words in one place.
Steve
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reply by the author on 16-Dec-2013
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I loved the idea and the spirit of this piece - isn't this what we all try to do? Change somebody's life with the power of our words. I still keep my most cherished review where somebody expressed so clearly just how I had managed to do that.
I have to say that I felt just a little let down by the very last line - yes, it summed up the thought of the poem, but it did so with an image repeated from just above. I felt that this powerful position demanded something stronger and more original.
Spag alert - You have 'with out' as two words in one place.
Steve
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Comment Written 16-Dec-2013
reply by the author on 16-Dec-2013
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Steve I it shows I did not reply to this if you get twice sorry..I do appreciate very much your idea on the ending was off the cuff but went with my feelings on it You may be right needs a bit more pazzaz but hey a little less pazzaz never hurt anyone lol Going to change with out now thank you very much
TK
