Let Me Paint For You
My reply to someone who asked Am I an Artist28 total reviews
Comment from Treischel
A here I thought you were a Tarnished Knight. But then I learned uyou were a silver tongued devil, I once called you a big lug too, now you a painter with words. I guess that makes you a Renaissance man. Good poem.
reply by the author on 16-Dec-2013
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A here I thought you were a Tarnished Knight. But then I learned uyou were a silver tongued devil, I once called you a big lug too, now you a painter with words. I guess that makes you a Renaissance man. Good poem.
Comment Written 16-Dec-2013
reply by the author on 16-Dec-2013
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Ha ha I am like a rainbow Mr T I come in many colors but you better look fast as I may fade away into a storm cloud hehehe
Thank you kind sir !!
TK
Comment from kiwijenny
This is cool...yes you are an artist without a brush...I hope you and your mermaid will enjoy the new year......I liked this poem a lot
God bless..............................................................
reply by the author on 16-Dec-2013
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This is cool...yes you are an artist without a brush...I hope you and your mermaid will enjoy the new year......I liked this poem a lot
God bless..............................................................
Comment Written 16-Dec-2013
reply by the author on 16-Dec-2013
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Thank you so much kiwi and all the same to you
TK
Comment from judiverse
Hi, TK. Glad to see you back and hope the health issues are less than they were. I saw a post from Mermaids today, so hope that means she is recovering. A lovely idea in the poem and so true--a writer can paint with words. You have some thoughts about making the sun shine and turning a dry field into one of clover. Words can produce feelings of wonder and anticipation. Great line;;"Painter without a brush." judi
reply by the author on 16-Dec-2013
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Hi, TK. Glad to see you back and hope the health issues are less than they were. I saw a post from Mermaids today, so hope that means she is recovering. A lovely idea in the poem and so true--a writer can paint with words. You have some thoughts about making the sun shine and turning a dry field into one of clover. Words can produce feelings of wonder and anticipation. Great line;;"Painter without a brush." judi
Comment Written 16-Dec-2013
reply by the author on 16-Dec-2013
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Thank you so much judi Hawaiian Mermaid is recovering still has three more weeks in cast then 3 more in therapy Sure be glad when she gets out of that wheel chair but I know not as happy as she will be lol
HUGS
TK
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Hi, TK. You're welcome. I just read Ginger's poem and am glad she's recovering. Therapy is no fun. judi
Comment from krys123
So beautifully written TK and very masterfully done. This free verse poem is well penned and very easy to read and describes the love that you offer and have for your Mermaid.
This love is so strong that you paint her pictures with words that most ultimately can shine, dance brilliance and palate your poems discreetly on canvases of verses and lines. Thank you so much for sharing this with others including myself TK. You have a good one and may you both have a happy holidays.
AK a.k.a. Alex
reply by the author on 16-Dec-2013
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So beautifully written TK and very masterfully done. This free verse poem is well penned and very easy to read and describes the love that you offer and have for your Mermaid.
This love is so strong that you paint her pictures with words that most ultimately can shine, dance brilliance and palate your poems discreetly on canvases of verses and lines. Thank you so much for sharing this with others including myself TK. You have a good one and may you both have a happy holidays.
AK a.k.a. Alex
Comment Written 16-Dec-2013
reply by the author on 16-Dec-2013
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Thank you so much Alex I do hope to be in a postion again to take the time to read and write more Been a bit hectic here for sure but are starting to calm down..Was hard to get used to Mermaid in a wheel chair and having to carry her up and down the stairs as they are so steep to have a ramp it would be 15 ft long lol
I know you are aware of the problems my friend .. I will be on before Xmas with a few more and will have the time to read and comment for a change
Aloha from the Big Island where it is 78 today with a wind chill factor of hummm ok 79 its a warm breeze hehehe
tk
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You lucky dog you and you are so welcome. It got up to 71 today where I live but then it goes back to the cold 51s and down to low 40s. All I could be worse and not complaining. Take care and hope to hear from you soon.
Alex
Comment from bichonfrisegirl
I really liked this write, TK! Yes, it is so amaaazing to see all of the wonderful imagery, and emotion that a writer can produce sans paint brush.
"So let me paint for you
Let me make you sigh
Let me make you cry
Let me make you fall in love" .... magic, indeed!
Very nice, TK!
bichonfrisegirl aka Connie
reply by the author on 16-Dec-2013
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I really liked this write, TK! Yes, it is so amaaazing to see all of the wonderful imagery, and emotion that a writer can produce sans paint brush.
"So let me paint for you
Let me make you sigh
Let me make you cry
Let me make you fall in love" .... magic, indeed!
Very nice, TK!
bichonfrisegirl aka Connie
Comment Written 16-Dec-2013
reply by the author on 16-Dec-2013
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Thank you so much Connie so glad you enjoyed the magic of this ..Was one of those spur of the moment pieces that seem to flow much better than the ones you sit and think about
TK
Comment from hifein
loved your poem. are are indeed a painter. all one needs to have is an imagination as you read the words and fill museum walls and wondrous brains with your imagery. well penned 'painted'!
reply by the author on 16-Dec-2013
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loved your poem. are are indeed a painter. all one needs to have is an imagination as you read the words and fill museum walls and wondrous brains with your imagery. well penned 'painted'!
Comment Written 16-Dec-2013
reply by the author on 16-Dec-2013
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Thank you so very much hifein your words are very appreciated
tk
Comment from SteveY
Your words do inspire as always. And yes I love your word paintings! Sorry to hear of your health issues. You now have my prayers. Peace to you always.
reply by the author on 16-Dec-2013
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Your words do inspire as always. And yes I love your word paintings! Sorry to hear of your health issues. You now have my prayers. Peace to you always.
Comment Written 16-Dec-2013
reply by the author on 16-Dec-2013
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Thank you very much for both the comments and your concern on the health issues..things are moving right along..Thrre more weeks for mermaid to be in cast then three weeks therapy Sure will be happy for her to be out of that wheel chair as she can't put any pressure on that ankle or else wham bam another 6 weeks
TK
Comment from country ranch writer
HOPE YOU MERMAID IS BACK UP ON ONES FINS AGIN SOON.MY BEST TO BOTH OF YOU. THE POEM IS LOVELY AND IS A GLIMPSE OF YOUR WORLD AS YOU SEE IT. I HOPE ONE DAY TO BE QUITE AN ARTISH WITH OUT A BRUSH AS YOU------------
reply by the author on 16-Dec-2013
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HOPE YOU MERMAID IS BACK UP ON ONES FINS AGIN SOON.MY BEST TO BOTH OF YOU. THE POEM IS LOVELY AND IS A GLIMPSE OF YOUR WORLD AS YOU SEE IT. I HOPE ONE DAY TO BE QUITE AN ARTISH WITH OUT A BRUSH AS YOU------------
Comment Written 16-Dec-2013
reply by the author on 16-Dec-2013
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Oh come now CRW You are a verbal painter as well as I..Better in many ways I must say..But I do value your comments and do very much appreciate them..BUT HEY I MISS YOUR SLY REMARKS HOW CAN I NOT BE NICE TO YOU WHEN YOU TREAT WITH SUCH KINDNESS LOL THANK YOU FROM LADY MERMAID ALSO SHE IS GETTING HER FIN BACK IN SHAPE THREE MORE WEEKS THEN 3 WEEKS MORE OF THERAPY.. I DO HOPE SHE CAN GET RID OF THAT WHEEL CHAIR AS OF NOW THEY SAID NO PUTTING ANY PRESSURE ON THE ANKLE SO WHEELING WE DO GO
tk
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a compliment coming from you my friend is like winning the lottery. wow, wow, and wow! shock, shock!How in the world could I be better than you you have all the knowledge and know how.
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My dear I know nothing at all I have I think a wizard that controls the keys on this key board I just put my fingers on the keys and he does the rest. I know you have one also why cause I just sent his brother to you His name is The wizardly wizard or worldly words of wiz-dumb !! A good wizard he is too
TK
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Oh thank you dear Knight! I will send my Angel of blessings to you for you sweet Mermaid to watch over her and help he get well
I tell my hubby it is funny when I set here it just seems to pore out onto the keys.If I could just get those typos under control.
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Not to worry typos are part of writing the main thing get it down then worry about the silly english and correct spelling..Many say count the words or syllables I say when you count you lose the rhythm and the heat of your words are interrupted by 1-2-3 1-2-3 I never count I just write Always remember you can break the rules of poetry Why? Just because you can Words of wiz-dumb from the wizard I sent you for that is what he told me
TK
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Comment from Hawaiian Mermaid
Aloha ATK,
My response to your beautiful poem, it deserves a "6",
My response in parentheses
You asked me if I am
Artist? You asked do
I paint?
To answer your question
Yes I do paint
But I need not a brush
For I paint with words
(You color my life
With words of cheer
I know not how you do it
You are so sweet my dear)
Words that reflect
Every color of the rainbow
I can make the sun shine
On a cloudy dreary day
(You can make me laugh
When I'm feeling low
The color in your words
Show your love you know)
I change a parched dry field
Into a bonnie field of clover
Or make rain drops come alive
With the sound of pitter patter
On your window sill
(Oh! The sound of pitter patter
How your words do inspire
They warm my lonely heart
And fill me with desire)
For my paint is magic
I will let you travel
To far off places
Feel things deep inside
(Words that tug at heartstrings
Bringing back memories in the heart
When love was young and sweet
Lost within the deepest part)
That you thought were gone forever
I can fill you with wonder
And the excitement of anticipation
Of a passionate love affair
(Your words stay in my heart
Not washed away with age
Coloring my mind and heart
In your words of love to bathe)
Yes I am a painter with out a brush
I would have it no other way
(You are blessed with words
That transfigure and inspire
Spreading a word rainbow
So many really do admire)
So let me paint for you
Let me make you sigh
Let me make you cry
Let me make you fall in love
(Here is my empty canvas
Please paint for me, my dear
Blend colors of the rainbow
With Love so bright and clear)
For I am the painter without a brush
reply by the author on 16-Dec-2013
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Aloha ATK,
My response to your beautiful poem, it deserves a "6",
My response in parentheses
You asked me if I am
Artist? You asked do
I paint?
To answer your question
Yes I do paint
But I need not a brush
For I paint with words
(You color my life
With words of cheer
I know not how you do it
You are so sweet my dear)
Words that reflect
Every color of the rainbow
I can make the sun shine
On a cloudy dreary day
(You can make me laugh
When I'm feeling low
The color in your words
Show your love you know)
I change a parched dry field
Into a bonnie field of clover
Or make rain drops come alive
With the sound of pitter patter
On your window sill
(Oh! The sound of pitter patter
How your words do inspire
They warm my lonely heart
And fill me with desire)
For my paint is magic
I will let you travel
To far off places
Feel things deep inside
(Words that tug at heartstrings
Bringing back memories in the heart
When love was young and sweet
Lost within the deepest part)
That you thought were gone forever
I can fill you with wonder
And the excitement of anticipation
Of a passionate love affair
(Your words stay in my heart
Not washed away with age
Coloring my mind and heart
In your words of love to bathe)
Yes I am a painter with out a brush
I would have it no other way
(You are blessed with words
That transfigure and inspire
Spreading a word rainbow
So many really do admire)
So let me paint for you
Let me make you sigh
Let me make you cry
Let me make you fall in love
(Here is my empty canvas
Please paint for me, my dear
Blend colors of the rainbow
With Love so bright and clear)
For I am the painter without a brush
Comment Written 16-Dec-2013
reply by the author on 16-Dec-2013
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Awe that was very special love it and you gave me a 6 too woo hoo
xxoo tk
Comment from Titanx9
TK, this one's lovely. There is so much with which I agree in this beautiful poem, because writers and poets are artist and paint/describe emotions, pictures and thoughts of themselves and others. Life would be rather dreary if we didn't exist. Thanks for a pleasant read. I hope you're well soon, and back to give 100 percent of your productive and creative mind.
reply by the author on 16-Dec-2013
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TK, this one's lovely. There is so much with which I agree in this beautiful poem, because writers and poets are artist and paint/describe emotions, pictures and thoughts of themselves and others. Life would be rather dreary if we didn't exist. Thanks for a pleasant read. I hope you're well soon, and back to give 100 percent of your productive and creative mind.
Comment Written 16-Dec-2013
reply by the author on 16-Dec-2013
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Thank you so much Titan I am on the mend, well really mended, its Mermaid that still has some issues with the cast still on her ankle Cant put any pressure on it so a walking cast is out of the question So I get to push her around a lot with no repercussions lol
TK
