Christmas Memories
A poem about Christmas memories.2 total reviews
Comment from sweetwoodjax
this is very well written, darlene, you did an excellent job writing this 5 7 5 poem about the memories that surround us at Christmas. this will be the first Christmas without my mother. good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 13-Dec-2013
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this is very well written, darlene, you did an excellent job writing this 5 7 5 poem about the memories that surround us at Christmas. this will be the first Christmas without my mother. good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 12-Dec-2013
reply by the author on 13-Dec-2013
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Thank you!
Comment from FrannyG
A nice 5/7/5 that most people could relate too. 'past' and 'gone' have similar meaning so it would be good to find a different word for one of them. Good syllable distribution and a nice idea. Well done.
reply by the author on 13-Dec-2013
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A nice 5/7/5 that most people could relate too. 'past' and 'gone' have similar meaning so it would be good to find a different word for one of them. Good syllable distribution and a nice idea. Well done.
Comment Written 12-Dec-2013
reply by the author on 13-Dec-2013
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Thank you!
