Comment from kiwijenny

Excellent

Wow the three point three minute poem... I like it
I like the tripping of fingers......But it is not 5/7/5 syllables
Woe and alas.....
God bless

 Comment Written 10-Dec-2013

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reply by the author on 10-Dec-2013

thanks!

Comment from Smoothiecool

Good

you have entered a 5-7-5 contest you have not complied with the set out
a 5-7-5 poem consist of three lines
the first and third must have a five syllable count only not five words
the second line must contain seven syllable not seven words
look at what you have and see if you can edit it to comply
the theme is good
good luck
cheers SC

 Comment Written 10-Dec-2013

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reply by the author on 10-Dec-2013

Sorry I didn't understand the competition I thought 5-7-5 was some 911 police code!

reply by Smoothiecool on 10-Dec-2013

don't have to be sorry just go in and edit it to bring it into line with the competition it can be done
why wast your dollars
good luck

Comment from JeffreyVPerry

Excellent

I await your hands continuing to write poetry. You are clever to read this but also elusive not to write at all. I do also like your rhyme.

 Comment Written 10-Dec-2013

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reply by the author on 10-Dec-2013

I lick my fingers after each script

Comment from B. Diehl

Excellent

I like this a lot, but it seems a little obscure to me. This poem is actually a 7-8-5 poem, but I assume that you knew that. Anyway, if you could elaborate to satisfy my curiosity, I've love that. If not, that's okay. :P

-B<3

 Comment Written 10-Dec-2013

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reply by the author on 10-Dec-2013

I divided 5-7-5 with Pi multiplied it with X, and.... I blame the calculator!