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Viewing comments for Chapter 14 "I Remember"A book of poetry, quotes and short stories
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Comment from Ric Myworld
New to the styles and structures of poetry, I listen to my thoughts as I read your words, a reminder of memories and sense of loss, and time drifting on by. Thanks for the read.
reply by the author on 01-Dec-2013
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New to the styles and structures of poetry, I listen to my thoughts as I read your words, a reminder of memories and sense of loss, and time drifting on by. Thanks for the read.
Comment Written 01-Dec-2013
reply by the author on 01-Dec-2013
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Thank you so much for reading....
Comment from 4caresmiles
This is well-said and easy to read. It would make a nice greeting card. You have not overstated the significance of the loss or the feelings which you have. Nicely done!
reply by the author on 01-Dec-2013
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This is well-said and easy to read. It would make a nice greeting card. You have not overstated the significance of the loss or the feelings which you have. Nicely done!
Comment Written 01-Dec-2013
reply by the author on 01-Dec-2013
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Thank you for the kind words and reading this poem.
