Memoir
Viewing comments for Chapter 5 "Fear of Success"True story
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Comment from Evelyn Fort Stewart
Living with a fear that controls your decisions in life is a terribly thing with many handicaps. Good luck in the prompt. God loves you and we do too.
reply by the author on 19-Dec-2013
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Living with a fear that controls your decisions in life is a terribly thing with many handicaps. Good luck in the prompt. God loves you and we do too.
Comment Written 19-Dec-2013
reply by the author on 19-Dec-2013
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Thank you for reviewing this.
Comment from EMB
Somehow, I really couldn't get where this was going (or coming from?), so I took a peak at the contest prompt. (Wow.) Readers should really know what this is all about before taking a gander at entries. :)
reply by the author on 07-Dec-2013
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Somehow, I really couldn't get where this was going (or coming from?), so I took a peak at the contest prompt. (Wow.) Readers should really know what this is all about before taking a gander at entries. :)
Comment Written 07-Dec-2013
reply by the author on 07-Dec-2013
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Thank you for the review, Edward. Is the ''wow" a critique? Most reviewers didn't look at the prompt.
Comment from Mystic Angel 7777
This strikes me more of a synopsis of the story rather than a critique, but nonetheless I found it a wonderful read. I love the way you describe the dynamics of the story in terms of self-reflection leading to full self-awareness. I enjoyed this very much. I wish you all the best in the contest voting. Thank you so much for sharing this with me.
reply by the author on 28-Nov-2013
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This strikes me more of a synopsis of the story rather than a critique, but nonetheless I found it a wonderful read. I love the way you describe the dynamics of the story in terms of self-reflection leading to full self-awareness. I enjoyed this very much. I wish you all the best in the contest voting. Thank you so much for sharing this with me.
Comment Written 28-Nov-2013
reply by the author on 28-Nov-2013
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I suppose you have a point. I have not seen a critique from the protagonist's point of view and figured it was more involved with substantive content rather than rhetoric. Thanks for the review. Bill
Comment from writersworld4ever
Wow, deep poetic idea. As I walk through life I learned that my worst enemy is myself. Fear is what we set in our minds. You really have a deep idea and valuable message to the readers but I just think that the idea you hsve here is mostly suitable for a short story or a book or even a novel. You already have a plot. You just need to expand your idea.
reply by the author on 28-Nov-2013
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Wow, deep poetic idea. As I walk through life I learned that my worst enemy is myself. Fear is what we set in our minds. You really have a deep idea and valuable message to the readers but I just think that the idea you hsve here is mostly suitable for a short story or a book or even a novel. You already have a plot. You just need to expand your idea.
Comment Written 28-Nov-2013
reply by the author on 28-Nov-2013
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This mini-essay is a critique of a another member's piece. It's a contest entry for CREATIVE CRITIQUE. Thank you for reviewing.
Comment from James Dooney
I actually like this. YOu describe things quite well. Many people I am sure will be able to associate quite well with it, as I am sure many are living it also. Good job !
reply by the author on 28-Nov-2013
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I actually like this. YOu describe things quite well. Many people I am sure will be able to associate quite well with it, as I am sure many are living it also. Good job !
Comment Written 28-Nov-2013
reply by the author on 28-Nov-2013
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This mini-essay is a critique of a another member's piece. It's a contest entry for CREATIVE CRITIQUE. Thank you for reviewing.
