Comment from Lainee

Excellent

Pili I just adore reading your writing my friend and the images your words always manage to conjure up never disappoint. Beautiful thoughts with a wonderful flow.

Goodluck,
Lainee :O)

 Comment Written 14-Jul-2005

Comment from Bryana

Excellent

I can only say WOW!! This is beautiful.
Waves of longing
bring your memory
in the silent night,
again and again
quivers forlorn
through the breezes
of my mind.

Que tierno, que romantico. Thank you my friend.

 Comment Written 14-Jul-2005

Comment from Dreamdancer

Excellent

Wow...
Pili this is awesome-- I found it to be very romantic with just a light touch of eroticism. Passionate yet not over the top. A very heart felt emotional experience! Beautiful Poem! Buddy

 Comment Written 13-Jul-2005

Comment from clhutchinson

Excellent

Again the eloquence in the wording shines through with clarity from the thoughts that's deep within the heart. Vivid metaphors add beauty and depth to this longing. A tender and beautiful piece of writing that flows flawlessly.

 Comment Written 13-Jul-2005

Comment from Louanne

Excellent

Another beautiful creation speaking
wisdom in a meditative journey
which brings a calm to the reader.

I like these words:
quivers forlorn
through the breezes
of my mind.

 Comment Written 13-Jul-2005

Comment from Helvi2

Excellent

Hi Pili,
Two Poems about Love nad voth in the top 10. I feel very strong emotion from this and yet very gentle to. A beautiful description of those emotions exposed.

Wonderfully Expressed,
Helvi

 Comment Written 13-Jul-2005

Comment from Quite Spirited

Excellent

She reappears and in a flare
Catapulted from her snare
In to love's tenderness that's shared
And here nothing can be compared.

Quietly but with much meaning
Exploring passions best steaming.
One on one we two together
Open to life's veiled answers.

Soft, sensuous, and sensitive
Reflects, you get what you give!
Beautifully composed with yearning
Stoking fires in the learning.

 Comment Written 13-Jul-2005

Comment from Jie T. Elins

Excellent

Ah! A breath of fresh air. I haven't had the best of luck in the poems I have read today, so it's wonderful to finally read one that is brilliant. You have captured the spirit of poetry. The words flow beautifully and the images are original and poignant. Well done and thanks for the great read!

 Comment Written 13-Jul-2005

Comment from Diny

Excellent

You sure have a romantic view on life
Every time i read your poetery I sigh... what a lovely soul
I think I shall lokk in to your port have you ever written any short stories?

Write on
diny

 Comment Written 13-Jul-2005

Comment from sengwriter

Excellent

* * * * * *
Bonus Stars! Now again to find you in a jubilant mood, I really find it nice. You're actually a soulful poet so when some of your poems gets your pains projected, we the readers don't feel good.

How and whatever forlorn you may be you've got the address of your loving repose again and you seem to be joyous. Am I right? hchchb

 Comment Written 13-Jul-2005