''One Destiny''
Poem based on North eastern part of India2 total reviews
Comment from Smoothiecool
You have entered this in a 5-7-5 contest.
This is a free verse poem not a 5-7-5
A 5-7-5 has to be three lines only
The first line must only have five syllable (not five words)
the second line must consist of seven syllables
the third line must consist of five syllables
In three lines you have to portray the beginning and have an end in the last
Take a look at some of the 5-7-5 entries to get the idea of this
Try entering this in another category
Cheers SC
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You have entered this in a 5-7-5 contest.
This is a free verse poem not a 5-7-5
A 5-7-5 has to be three lines only
The first line must only have five syllable (not five words)
the second line must consist of seven syllables
the third line must consist of five syllables
In three lines you have to portray the beginning and have an end in the last
Take a look at some of the 5-7-5 entries to get the idea of this
Try entering this in another category
Cheers SC
Comment Written 12-Nov-2013
Comment from CR Delport
So much war and fighting is made in the name of so many religions. I wonder what God will say when they report to him. Probably smite them all. Thanks for sharing these wise words.
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So much war and fighting is made in the name of so many religions. I wonder what God will say when they report to him. Probably smite them all. Thanks for sharing these wise words.
Comment Written 12-Nov-2013
