The Heart of Poetry
Viewing comments for Chapter 14 "The Stream"'Tis not the Bard, but pretty good poetry anyway
23 total reviews
Comment from Deepakurup
The poem and the picture together brings a beautiful vision of serenity.The poem is complimenting the picture and the picture vice-versa
reply by the author on 14-Nov-2013
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The poem and the picture together brings a beautiful vision of serenity.The poem is complimenting the picture and the picture vice-versa
Comment Written 14-Nov-2013
reply by the author on 14-Nov-2013
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Thank you so much, I am happy you enjoyed 'The Stream.'
:-) Carolyn
Comment from allborn66
This is a wonderful poem. The word choice is strong. You inspired great mental images in your reader. The tone is appropriate to the theme.
Barbara
reply by the author on 11-Nov-2013
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This is a wonderful poem. The word choice is strong. You inspired great mental images in your reader. The tone is appropriate to the theme.
Barbara
Comment Written 09-Nov-2013
reply by the author on 11-Nov-2013
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Thank you so much for this wonderful review. :-) Carolyn
Comment from Spitfire
I create when I walk outdoors. Nature is a great place to collect your thoughts.
His pen transcribes the joy of inner man - yes, that is the aim of poetry.
Great use of repetition at the end where the same lines take on a meaning more profound.
reply by the author on 08-Nov-2013
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I create when I walk outdoors. Nature is a great place to collect your thoughts.
His pen transcribes the joy of inner man - yes, that is the aim of poetry.
Great use of repetition at the end where the same lines take on a meaning more profound.
Comment Written 08-Nov-2013
reply by the author on 08-Nov-2013
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Well thank you Shari, I am glad you relate too and enjoyed 'The Stream'.. It was a 'feel good' poem to write. Hope you and Frank are doing well. :-) Carolyn
Comment from jmdg1954
I enjoyed it very much. I was able to put myself by that stream. Sitting on the fun drenched bank absorbed on thought and writing. You wrote this with a quiet pen. To me that mean, soft, subtle and smooth...
Your words are amazing... John
reply by the author on 08-Nov-2013
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I enjoyed it very much. I was able to put myself by that stream. Sitting on the fun drenched bank absorbed on thought and writing. You wrote this with a quiet pen. To me that mean, soft, subtle and smooth...
Your words are amazing... John
Comment Written 08-Nov-2013
reply by the author on 08-Nov-2013
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Thanks John, I am glad you enjoyed The Stream. I thought about you, Benny and Ritchie, other fanstory friends when I chose the picture. You are quite and amazing guy yourself. Love Carolyn
Comment from Benny Beeharry
I enjoyed it very much. So quiet and so so full of flowing beauty. By the riverside and the sound of water flowing, makes a most beautiful picture.
Just lovely.
The words are full of imageries and give the writing lots of body strength.
Well done
Benny Beeharry
reply by the author on 08-Nov-2013
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I enjoyed it very much. So quiet and so so full of flowing beauty. By the riverside and the sound of water flowing, makes a most beautiful picture.
Just lovely.
The words are full of imageries and give the writing lots of body strength.
Well done
Benny Beeharry
Comment Written 08-Nov-2013
reply by the author on 08-Nov-2013
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Benny, I am happy you liked this one. As I told another FS friend, I thought about you, Ritchie and John when I chose this picture. Thanks as always for your encouragement. :-) Carolyn
Comment from Mrs Happy Poet
This Carolyn is well written you paint such a beautiful scene with your words bringing to life the photograph well done my friend we enjoyed regards Jill and Erick
reply by the author on 08-Nov-2013
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This Carolyn is well written you paint such a beautiful scene with your words bringing to life the photograph well done my friend we enjoyed regards Jill and Erick
Comment Written 08-Nov-2013
reply by the author on 08-Nov-2013
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I am delighted you two enjoyed The Stream. Thanks for your wonderful comments. Love, Carolyn
Comment from The Death
Hi, Miss Carolyn.
I like the tone of this poem very much and the theme is very easy to connect with.
You have nicely shared what can inspirea poet to write as we write what we feel.
The artwork is just perfect for your poem.
I like the siplke phrasing and it flows nicely.
You did an amazing work!
reply by the author on 08-Nov-2013
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Hi, Miss Carolyn.
I like the tone of this poem very much and the theme is very easy to connect with.
You have nicely shared what can inspirea poet to write as we write what we feel.
The artwork is just perfect for your poem.
I like the siplke phrasing and it flows nicely.
You did an amazing work!
Comment Written 08-Nov-2013
reply by the author on 08-Nov-2013
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Good morning, thank you for this wonderful review. :-) Carolyn
Comment from Phyllis Stewart
Wonderful poem, just as Pam said in her own poem about "the crafter".
He waits not on a muse but plunges in
With memories long thought to be obscure
Yes! This is the only way to write good nature poetry, to put one's own experiences and feelings into it. You hit the nail on the head here, as they say.
reply by the author on 08-Nov-2013
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Wonderful poem, just as Pam said in her own poem about "the crafter".
He waits not on a muse but plunges in
With memories long thought to be obscure
Yes! This is the only way to write good nature poetry, to put one's own experiences and feelings into it. You hit the nail on the head here, as they say.
Comment Written 08-Nov-2013
reply by the author on 08-Nov-2013
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Thanks for the wonderful comments, it is great to hit the head of the nail sometimes. :-) Carolyn
Comment from bichonfrisegirl
Hi Carolyn,
This is a sweet, reflective write. I love that this man who is not rich moneywise knows what it is that makes a man truly rich ... love, family, nature. He appreciates the simpler things in life and realizes that these are worth more than anything else.
Very nice, Carolyn!
bichonfrisegirl aka Connie
reply by the author on 08-Nov-2013
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Hi Carolyn,
This is a sweet, reflective write. I love that this man who is not rich moneywise knows what it is that makes a man truly rich ... love, family, nature. He appreciates the simpler things in life and realizes that these are worth more than anything else.
Very nice, Carolyn!
bichonfrisegirl aka Connie
Comment Written 07-Nov-2013
reply by the author on 08-Nov-2013
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Connie, what a wonderful review. Thanks for all your encouragement. Love Carolyn
Comment from krys123
A wonderful poem Carolyn and one of originality, serenity and one of total calmness. The feeling that you portrayed to your imagery was one of free from mental or emotional distress or agitation. I felt like I was the man in the picture with a book by the by the waters of forever flowing as it whistled down the river. Your iambic pentameter and rhythm is done very well. Thank you for sharing this with everyone. You have a good one and God bless.
AK
reply by the author on 07-Nov-2013
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A wonderful poem Carolyn and one of originality, serenity and one of total calmness. The feeling that you portrayed to your imagery was one of free from mental or emotional distress or agitation. I felt like I was the man in the picture with a book by the by the waters of forever flowing as it whistled down the river. Your iambic pentameter and rhythm is done very well. Thank you for sharing this with everyone. You have a good one and God bless.
AK
Comment Written 07-Nov-2013
reply by the author on 07-Nov-2013
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Thank you for the wonderful comments and encouragement. I appreciate you AK. :-) Carolyn
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You are so welcome Carolyn
