Comment from billscott

Excellent

This kind of poetry usually does not catch my eye.

This time, it did.

I looked at it and absorbed your message.

Powerful stuff!

 Comment Written 10-May-2014

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reply by the author on 13-May-2014

Thank you for appreciating my poem, Bill.

Comment from seaglass

Exceptional

A 5-7-5 poem is suppose to paint a picture or capture a moment in time. This paints a picture of the consequences of making bad choices that break the law. Eventually, justice will prevail.Good luck with the contest

 Comment Written 04-May-2014

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reply by the author on 05-May-2014

Thanks for the comment. I will apply your suggestion the next time I write. :)

Comment from Sylvia Page

Excellent

Investigation,
Criminals fall for the traps,
Poetic Justice.

You have created a very fine 5-7-5 poem and the subject matter is very relevantly put in so few words/
Sylvia

 Comment Written 04-Nov-2013

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reply by the author on 05-Nov-2013

thank you so much!

reply by the author on 05-Nov-2013

thank you so much!

Comment from CrystieCookie999

Excellent

This has an interesting subject. I realize a 5-7-5 can't develop a subject much. You stuck to the format, so good job on that.

 Comment Written 04-Nov-2013

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reply by the author on 05-Nov-2013

thanks!

reply by the author on 05-Nov-2013

thanks!