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Comment from I am Cat
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Probably, I'm in love
But, it could be brain damage.

lol... one of my favorite things to say (in the day) was:

"It must be love, if it was poison ivy, I'd be itching by now."
;)

lol... this is lovely, and that photo, you look like the first boy I had a hankering for ... Joey Whitehead... ;) little boy in Highland View, Florida... yeah... i"m a Florida girl. ;) opposite coasts, lookie there. ;)
go figure.


 Comment Written 14-Nov-2015


reply by the author on 14-Nov-2015
    Joey Whitehead? Are you sure that wasn't just how you described him in your diary???
    Thank you, mikye
reply by I am Cat on 14-Nov-2015
    LOL, he was five years old, I don't think so. ;/
reply by Anonymous Member on 03-Aug-2016
    LOL, he was five years old, I don't think so. ;/
reply by Anonymous Member on 03-Aug-2016
    LOL, he was five years old, I don't think so. ;/
reply by Anonymous Member on 03-Aug-2016
    LOL, he was five years old, I don't think so. ;/
Comment from Spitfire
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If that's you in the picture, no wonder the girls followed you. As for bullying, you prove the point- a sharp tongue and quick wit can save you. Interesting fickleness of friends who turned on you when you proved your own in battle.

 Comment Written 06-Nov-2013


reply by the author on 06-Nov-2013
    I was talking to one of the writers here about that tonight. We as writers have this strange confidence I think because of our way with words. That seems to scare and confuse people because we aren't afraid when they think we should be. hahaha. They think we are crazy I think. That always comes in handy! It always amazed me that anyone would back down from my harmless little self. Fear of having a poem written about them!! mikey
Comment from ravenblack
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It could be brain damage- hah! I swear, we must be related somehow. My bully story virtually parallels yours- I broke the neighbour kid's arm- not quite in the same way, but he never teased me anymore. And my mouth? It got me out of many scrapes, often leaving the bully too befuddled and exasperated in front of classmates to be able to do anything about it without being embarrassed. And I would take on any who were bullying anybody. Another exceptional write.

 Comment Written 05-Nov-2013


reply by the author on 05-Nov-2013
    I think that the ability to use language so well gives us a crazy brave edge over people. people are very reluctant to engage me. it cracks me up. I am just a little guy. I guess I look so confident and insane that it is scary. hahaha. Yep. Bully me, whatever. But, don't think of doing it to anyone else. mikey
Comment from l.raven
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OMG Michael, What a life you had...like you I didn't like bullies...I was never bullied...I just let them know it wasn't going to happen...I fought many times for my sister...but you sure had your share of moving around...a grea write and ya know I love the poems...Luff Linda xxoo

 Comment Written 04-Nov-2013


reply by the author on 04-Nov-2013
    I don't usually bother for myself. But, I am like you. Don't mess with my family or friends or really anybody else or you will have to deal this crazy boy. Glad you are enjoying this, so am I!! mikey
Comment from Green Lake Girl
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I really enjoy your written memories. It sounds like you were an interesting and likable kid. I LOVED that you broke the bully's arm. He had it comin'! It always amazes me when I hear stories of bullies finally backing off after they themselves have been hurt. It seems that must be the only language they understand. My nephew was bullied. I wish he could've broken some arms. Very well done story.

 Comment Written 04-Nov-2013


reply by the author on 04-Nov-2013
    Bullies seek weakness. Once they discover they haven't found it they back off. I have found that most of them are bluffing. I'll step up for anyone being bullied. I hate it. The lowest form of human behavior. mikey
Comment from Cookie333
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Hehehe, the plot thickens, you naughty little boy Mike!I can just picture a little boy who doesn't give a damn about what the brats say or do...wonderful truths about growing up and thanks for sharing,
karen

 Comment Written 04-Nov-2013


reply by the author on 04-Nov-2013
    Glad you are enjoying this. I was a strange kid really. I kind of raised my self really. I never did put much stock in authority. I thought some of my teachers weren't too bright. I was correct. ha! mikey
Comment from cinderbella
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In other words, you were a real shit-disturber. You didn't get in trouble yourself, just instigated it from behind the scenes. lol
I loved "The Little Blue-Eyed Girl", especially the ending.
So when you were goaded long enough, you broke the guy's arm? HaHa.. I would say they learned not to pick on you.
The last poem "Love?" is wonderful. The ending is both surprising and hilarious.
I am enjoying reading about the very young, womanizing shit-disturber. :) Sandra

 Comment Written 04-Nov-2013


reply by the author on 04-Nov-2013
    I thought of myself as more of a Social Director in charge of entertainment for all! It took months. It is hard to get me mad. But, once I am mad it is insanely mad. hahaha. I should write about the stuff I am leaving out. But, I love my freedom. mikey
Comment from nancy_e_davis
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This is better. Not so long. I dislike bullies. Had one in grade school taunting one of my little girl friends that wore glasses. I kayoed him and he jumped on me and nearly choked me to death. It took the Cozart twins to get him off me. That was fifth grade too. After that they called me prise fighter. Eugene quit bullying after that. LOL
Very good Michael. Nancy

 Comment Written 04-Nov-2013


reply by the author on 04-Nov-2013
    Kept looking at word count. hahaha! You should write your story. That sounds like a good one. The Cozart twins! Classic. What a great nickname, Prize Fighter. Awesome. They used to call me Showboat amongst other things. Glad you enjoyed this, mikey
Comment from Patrick G Cox
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Hi michaelcahill,

Growing up in an abusive family took resilience and a certain chameleon ability I think - it certainly did in my case.

I found this fascinating, I guess today you'd have been whisked off by a social worker. I share your view that bullies aren't worth the trouble, and like you, the one time I retaliated, I ended up getting caned.

Patrick

 Comment Written 04-Nov-2013


reply by the author on 04-Nov-2013
    We do learn a lot that is true. Much of it is things we can use in life. It is unfair as you point out. But, bullying is the lowest form of human behavior and it takes on many forms. Thoughtful and insightful comments. Thank you kindly, mikey
Comment from Sasha
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This is another delightful insight into who you are and where you have been. I thoroughly enjoyed it and anxiously look forward to reading the next post.

 Comment Written 04-Nov-2013


reply by the author on 04-Nov-2013
    I am so happy you are enjoying this. It is most enjoyable to write and remember. More to come. Thank you, mikey