Cheezel the Weasel
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Comment from Dorothy Farrell
More about your character Cheezel. Good rhyming couplets - amusing read. Twelve good stanzas and look forward to more from you. I like the rhyming invitation - great picture. Regards Dorothy
reply by the author on 06-Nov-2013
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More about your character Cheezel. Good rhyming couplets - amusing read. Twelve good stanzas and look forward to more from you. I like the rhyming invitation - great picture. Regards Dorothy
Comment Written 01-Nov-2013
reply by the author on 06-Nov-2013
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Thanks, Dorothy.
Steve
Comment from pickthorn
Cheezel the weasel the scourge of the seas, is a wonderful character, admired by pirates everywhere. This poem is so cute and well written, I'm looking forward to your next
Cheezel offering.
reply by the author on 06-Nov-2013
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Cheezel the weasel the scourge of the seas, is a wonderful character, admired by pirates everywhere. This poem is so cute and well written, I'm looking forward to your next
Cheezel offering.
Comment Written 01-Nov-2013
reply by the author on 06-Nov-2013
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Thank you.
Steve
Comment from SaluteDobby
Aye! Here's me RSVP, you land lubber!
A cute poem, Steve! Arrrr! :) I can't wait to read more. Loved the line "He harrumphed grandiosely, then.."
Regards,
Namratha
reply by the author on 06-Nov-2013
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Aye! Here's me RSVP, you land lubber!
A cute poem, Steve! Arrrr! :) I can't wait to read more. Loved the line "He harrumphed grandiosely, then.."
Regards,
Namratha
Comment Written 01-Nov-2013
reply by the author on 06-Nov-2013
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Thanks, namratha - see you at the convention then - you'll recognize me by the designer eye-patch with the monogrammed kiwi,
I have always wanted to harrumph grandiosely....
Steve
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Aye! Just so yeh know, I have a wooden stump for a leg. :)
Comment from N.K. Wagner
Cheezel the Weasel! My hero! Great beginning to another exciting adventure. I want so much to share these adventures with my grandkids, Steve. Do I have your permission, or must I wait to buy the book? :) Nancy
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Cheezel the Weasel! My hero! Great beginning to another exciting adventure. I want so much to share these adventures with my grandkids, Steve. Do I have your permission, or must I wait to buy the book? :) Nancy
Comment Written 01-Nov-2013
reply by the author on 06-Nov-2013
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Nancy, thanks for the review and sorry the reply took so long.
Of course you can read this to your grandkids.
One day I'll work out how to go about getting published and get these in a proper book with pictures and everything!
Steve
Comment from Phyllis Stewart
I love it! Can't wait to see what comes next. Sounds like a good fundraiser idea--walking the plank! LOL
THis stanza is really superb in every way:
So Bartle the Wise, a most wizardly scholar,
Adjusted his waistband and straightened his collar.
Ignoring the seagulls that screeched overhead,
He harrumphed grandiosely, then solemnly read:
reply by the author on 06-Nov-2013
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I love it! Can't wait to see what comes next. Sounds like a good fundraiser idea--walking the plank! LOL
THis stanza is really superb in every way:
So Bartle the Wise, a most wizardly scholar,
Adjusted his waistband and straightened his collar.
Ignoring the seagulls that screeched overhead,
He harrumphed grandiosely, then solemnly read:
Comment Written 01-Nov-2013
reply by the author on 06-Nov-2013
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Thanks, Phyllis.
Not sure how this fundraiser works - do you pay to NOT walk the plank?
Glad you enjoyed - still thinking up piratical ideas for that convention.
Steve
Comment from Tessa Kay
What a gem! Loved it.
Several times I went Aaah! at your rhymes ( love the kind of quivery / special delivery, dramatical / piratical. Pajamas and Bahamas was extra special)
Loved your play on words with the workshop and shipwork.
Great job!
lol
Tessa
reply by the author on 06-Nov-2013
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What a gem! Loved it.
Several times I went Aaah! at your rhymes ( love the kind of quivery / special delivery, dramatical / piratical. Pajamas and Bahamas was extra special)
Loved your play on words with the workshop and shipwork.
Great job!
lol
Tessa
Comment Written 01-Nov-2013
reply by the author on 06-Nov-2013
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Tessa, thanks so much for the generous review and the six stars.
Have you checked out the earlier Cheezel chapters.
Steve
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Not yet, but will do.
:)
Comment from humpwhistle
Another fine installment in your series, Steve.
This Pirate's Convention sounds both educational
and fun. I'm particularly impressed with imaginative
rhymes. Excellent.
Peace, Lee
reply by the author on 06-Nov-2013
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Another fine installment in your series, Steve.
This Pirate's Convention sounds both educational
and fun. I'm particularly impressed with imaginative
rhymes. Excellent.
Peace, Lee
Comment Written 01-Nov-2013
reply by the author on 06-Nov-2013
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Thanks, lee
Any ideas for what these piratical types might get up to at a convention????
Steve
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Probably seminars in waylaying, belaying, and avasting. Plus Advanced Parrot Care, and Peg Leg Whittling demonstrations.
Evening Grog Tastings?
Comment from Righteous Riter
Good use of the aabb rhyme scheme. Good end rhyming. Good description with the words that paint a clear image in my mind. Good alliteration. Good complimentary photo followed by a clear message. Good work.
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Good use of the aabb rhyme scheme. Good end rhyming. Good description with the words that paint a clear image in my mind. Good alliteration. Good complimentary photo followed by a clear message. Good work.
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Comment Written 01-Nov-2013
reply by the author on 06-Nov-2013
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Thank you!
Steve
Comment from CR Delport
Just the kind of poetry I need to brighten my Friday morning. This is very well written and makes for an interesting and enjoyable read. Thanks for sharing.
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reply by the author on 06-Nov-2013
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Just the kind of poetry I need to brighten my Friday morning. This is very well written and makes for an interesting and enjoyable read. Thanks for sharing.
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Comment Written 01-Nov-2013
reply by the author on 06-Nov-2013
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Thanks for the kind words.
Steve
