Cheezel the Weasel
Viewing comments for Chapter 4 "Cheezel gets an Invitation"The adventures of a rascally former pirate
49 total reviews
Comment from Just2Write
Well done, Steve. This sounds like a grand event. Can't wait to hear how formally Cheesel dresses up. I loved that line and rhyme with Blackbeard's pyjamas! So much fun here - I feel like a kid reading these chapters.
What a lovely way to pass an afternoon.
Rose
reply by the author on 29-Dec-2016
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Well done, Steve. This sounds like a grand event. Can't wait to hear how formally Cheesel dresses up. I loved that line and rhyme with Blackbeard's pyjamas! So much fun here - I feel like a kid reading these chapters.
What a lovely way to pass an afternoon.
Rose
Comment Written 28-Dec-2016
reply by the author on 29-Dec-2016
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Thanks again!
Steve
Comment from ericawrites
This is a really well written
poem, I love the lilting rhyme
(ala "The Night Before Christmas")
I love your work.
Thank you for a very enjoyable read.
reply by the author on 11-Nov-2013
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This is a really well written
poem, I love the lilting rhyme
(ala "The Night Before Christmas")
I love your work.
Thank you for a very enjoyable read.
Comment Written 08-Nov-2013
reply by the author on 11-Nov-2013
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Erica, thanks for the kind words.
Have you checked out the other Cheezel chapters?
Steve
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Not yet, but I look forward to reading them.
Comment from christopherjl
This was fun. I'll have to search out the continuation of your piece here. I really enjoyed it and have nothing to comment on the review. Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 05-Nov-2013
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This was fun. I'll have to search out the continuation of your piece here. I really enjoyed it and have nothing to comment on the review. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 04-Nov-2013
reply by the author on 05-Nov-2013
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Thanks, Chris.
Go back and check the preceding episodes too, if you have time.
Hope to work out what on earth a pirate convention will be like before Christmas.
Steve
Comment from ravenblack
Well, I'm not familiar with cheezal ( great name- his dad must have been Frank Zappa) but I really like your use of language in this one, specifically such twists as dramatical/ practical. Reminds me of A Wind in the Willows.
reply by the author on 06-Nov-2013
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Well, I'm not familiar with cheezal ( great name- his dad must have been Frank Zappa) but I really like your use of language in this one, specifically such twists as dramatical/ practical. Reminds me of A Wind in the Willows.
Comment Written 03-Nov-2013
reply by the author on 06-Nov-2013
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Thank you.
Take a peek back at the other Cheezel chapters which are in a similar vein. Kids' names seem so random these days. At the school where I've been teaching lately, on student is called Tre-Stylz....
Steve
Comment from GWHARGIS
These are some of the cutest poems I have ever read. I like the fact that use the same characters and the relationship between the characters is constant and very well defined. The rhyming and the theme is great. Nicely done
reply by the author on 06-Nov-2013
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These are some of the cutest poems I have ever read. I like the fact that use the same characters and the relationship between the characters is constant and very well defined. The rhyming and the theme is great. Nicely done
Comment Written 03-Nov-2013
reply by the author on 06-Nov-2013
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Thank you for the kind words.
Steve
Comment from patsypats
Very good use of the ole imagination.You're creativity is great. Your rhyming scheme adds even more character to your work and the flow is easy to follow and much enjoyable. Looking forward to more:)
reply by the author on 06-Nov-2013
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Very good use of the ole imagination.You're creativity is great. Your rhyming scheme adds even more character to your work and the flow is easy to follow and much enjoyable. Looking forward to more:)
Comment Written 03-Nov-2013
reply by the author on 06-Nov-2013
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Thanks for the kind words.
Don't forget there are three previous chapters you can check out....
Steve
Comment from J. Dark
I just adored this. Your rhyme and flow are effortless but it is the imagination of warm character that makes this such a perfectly charming humour piece. For a moment, I was taken back to the comfort of being a child. Superb.
Kindest of regards,
Julie :0)
reply by the author on 06-Nov-2013
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I just adored this. Your rhyme and flow are effortless but it is the imagination of warm character that makes this such a perfectly charming humour piece. For a moment, I was taken back to the comfort of being a child. Superb.
Kindest of regards,
Julie :0)
Comment Written 03-Nov-2013
reply by the author on 06-Nov-2013
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Julie, thanks so much for the kind words and the six stars.
I am having fun with Cheezel, who seems to have a bit of life in him yet.
Steve
Comment from Louise Michelle
What fun this is! I love your characters and creative versus. Pirate's have conventions - who knew, lol. The ending was just perfect. Thanks for a fun read. Hugs, Lou
reply by the author on 06-Nov-2013
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What fun this is! I love your characters and creative versus. Pirate's have conventions - who knew, lol. The ending was just perfect. Thanks for a fun read. Hugs, Lou
Comment Written 03-Nov-2013
reply by the author on 06-Nov-2013
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Thanks, lou - glad you enjoyed.
Don't forget to check out the earlier Cheezel chapters and watch out for that pirates' convention - it promises to be fun!
Steve
Comment from michaelcahill
Cool idea to put these in a book. I am hoping that means more right? Went back and caught up. I had missed the second one. That was a little different but still in the same vein of a great story. This is just off the hook with imagination. Wow. Your command of the language allows to to write about anything that pops into your head with no language restrictions as you can obviously pull off any rhyme. There are some amazing ones here. Really every single stanza is original and witty and clever. There is no let up anywhere and that is true of the first three pieces as well. This compares to anything that has been written. It should be on people's bookshelves when finished. It will be on mine. One awesome inspiring piece of work, mikey
reply by the author on 06-Nov-2013
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Cool idea to put these in a book. I am hoping that means more right? Went back and caught up. I had missed the second one. That was a little different but still in the same vein of a great story. This is just off the hook with imagination. Wow. Your command of the language allows to to write about anything that pops into your head with no language restrictions as you can obviously pull off any rhyme. There are some amazing ones here. Really every single stanza is original and witty and clever. There is no let up anywhere and that is true of the first three pieces as well. This compares to anything that has been written. It should be on people's bookshelves when finished. It will be on mine. One awesome inspiring piece of work, mikey
Comment Written 03-Nov-2013
reply by the author on 06-Nov-2013
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Mikey, thanks so much for the enthusiastic review and the generous rating. I am so glad you enjoyed the adventures of the rambunctious Cheezel. He seems to have a little life in him yet, so we'll get him through the pirates' convention, which promises to be fun, and then see where he ends up.
Of course, I would like to see him in a proper book - one day....
Steve
Comment from Gladness
This is great! Fun to read with lots of laughs and seldom heard words to tickle the ear. You just got a new fan, I must get the next installment :)
Thanks and God bless!
Anita
reply by the author on 06-Nov-2013
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This is great! Fun to read with lots of laughs and seldom heard words to tickle the ear. You just got a new fan, I must get the next installment :)
Thanks and God bless!
Anita
Comment Written 03-Nov-2013
reply by the author on 06-Nov-2013
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Anita, thanks for the kind review and the six stars. Did you find the previous Cheezel chapters?
Steve
