Comment from manokid

Excellent

It doesn't get much better that this, Pili. You are so amazingly talented and there is so very much to you. I feel privileged to know your work, and as I mentioned before it touches my deepest core. Thank you, Pili, you have helped me more than you know.

 Comment Written 10-Jul-2005

Comment from AuroraSky

Excellent

Saddening depths found again in your words. Ending with dreams of yesterday, provoking minds to contemplate tomorrow...standing on the threshold of time.

 Comment Written 09-Jul-2005

Comment from Lainee

Excellent

I am so glad you are back Pili! This poem is lovely and your thoughts although sad flow well from line to line with wonderful imagery which seems to be your norm my friend.

Goodluck,
Lainee :O)

 Comment Written 09-Jul-2005

Comment from shelley kaye

Excellent

very very nice
totally understandable
excellent flow and rhythm all the way through

"intoxicated
by the aroma
of fresh earth,
enveloped
in dreams
of our yesterdays."

thanks for sharing :-)

 Comment Written 08-Jul-2005

Comment from Thomas Raine

Excellent

What a beautiful free verse piece. Flows phenominally from beginning to end. I love the picture you chose to accompany this with. Good job.

- TR

 Comment Written 08-Jul-2005

Comment from Jon Kuntz

Excellent

Very nice job with this. I didn't notice any grammar problems. It has a nice flow to it, and you keep on your subject. The subject being the thing that just came to me. We can't escape the emotions, no matter how much time has gone by.

 Comment Written 08-Jul-2005

Comment from 96744mom

Excellent

very touching to the heart and soul, i admire your originality in all your writings, the first thing that enters my mind when I begin to read your poems is....how graceful they are and soothing to always read. it always makes me smile and leave with a very humble feeling. no changes needed, great job.

 Comment Written 08-Jul-2005

Comment from Diny

Excellent

This was very good... I could even see a story through it
I could feel the love and admiration of someone and the regret to leave even the memories of life behind

well done
bravo again
my friend

Write on...
Diny

 Comment Written 08-Jul-2005

Comment from Bryana

Excellent

My dear friend, I was mesmerized, intoxicated,
after reading your beautiful poem. It's a pity that
they are the treasures once you shared and now
they are left behind. Collect more treasure and share them NOW!

Bienvenida mi amiga,
Ana

 Comment Written 08-Jul-2005

Comment from clhutchinson

Excellent

The well chosen words in themselves are mesmerizing as the message comes through with a graceful flow of the thoughts. Such peacefulness and contentment from the pleasant memories comes forth.

 Comment Written 08-Jul-2005