~ Heavenly Baby ~
RIP My Sweet Baby Sophia.....11 total reviews
Comment from Pyrrho
I am pleased that you bothered to write this with rhymes and that is a big plus. I am tempted to try to rewrite it so it has better flow/meter, but that is a big job and it is your poem. It certainly is filled with love.
next time, try to have your granddaughter equidistant from the camera: first impression is a baby big-foot.
reply by the author on 17-Aug-2014
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I am pleased that you bothered to write this with rhymes and that is a big plus. I am tempted to try to rewrite it so it has better flow/meter, but that is a big job and it is your poem. It certainly is filled with love.
next time, try to have your granddaughter equidistant from the camera: first impression is a baby big-foot.
Comment Written 17-Aug-2014
reply by the author on 17-Aug-2014
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Hi Pyrrho....thank you for the comment and rating. I truly appreciate it. I'm not sure if you read my notations but baby Sophia passed away. ;(
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I an so sorry.
Comment from Jacqueline M Franklin
OMG, Heidi,
I'm so sorry for you and your family at the loss of baby Sophia! What an awful thing to happen. She is just adorable.
Words just fail at such a time, but her spirit will always live in your hearts. This is such a beautiful dedication, Grandma.
Cheers & Blessings
Keep Smilin'.... Jax ('/')
reply by the author on 17-Aug-2014
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OMG, Heidi,
I'm so sorry for you and your family at the loss of baby Sophia! What an awful thing to happen. She is just adorable.
Words just fail at such a time, but her spirit will always live in your hearts. This is such a beautiful dedication, Grandma.
Cheers & Blessings
Keep Smilin'.... Jax ('/')
Comment Written 17-Aug-2014
reply by the author on 17-Aug-2014
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Thank you for the great comment and rating!! Indeed baby Sophia's passing has been one of the worst things I've ever been faced with. No other pain will ever compare. I'm very grateful you stopped to read this. I have a couple others about Sophia's Joyrney if you're ever interested....xoxo
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Thank you for the great comment and rating!! Indeed baby Sophia's passing has been one of the worst things I've ever been faced with. No other pain will ever compare. I'm very grateful you stopped to read this. I have a couple others about Sophia's Joyrney if you're ever interested....xoxo
Comment from ElegantButler
I am sorry for your tragic loss. I pray the misdiagnosis was due to her condition being similar to another and not because the doctors were too reliant on what some computer told them. In either case, I know your grief will never abate. It will be put on a shelf in time, but when you take it down again, the hurt will be just as strong.
reply by the author on 17-Nov-2013
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I am sorry for your tragic loss. I pray the misdiagnosis was due to her condition being similar to another and not because the doctors were too reliant on what some computer told them. In either case, I know your grief will never abate. It will be put on a shelf in time, but when you take it down again, the hurt will be just as strong.
Comment Written 06-Nov-2013
reply by the author on 17-Nov-2013
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Thank you so much for your comment and rating. My grandbaby was completely misdiagnosed both Dr and computers. However, she now is my beautiful Angel in Heaven watching over us all.
Comment from mfowler
Life can be so positive, uplifting also. And then so cruel. Your pain of loss is deeply evident and the emotion generated by the getting of gift and the the snatching away is paramount in this piece. What touched me as a new grandparent, was the overwhelming joy you had felt. Feeling such deep grief is in proportion to your joy. Writing a poem like this is both cathartic (in that you express your emotions in an organised way) and celebratory, in that you show others (obviously her parents, but others as well) how you felt, and how truly valuable and memorable her life was to you. THat helps them too.
reply by the author on 17-Nov-2013
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Life can be so positive, uplifting also. And then so cruel. Your pain of loss is deeply evident and the emotion generated by the getting of gift and the the snatching away is paramount in this piece. What touched me as a new grandparent, was the overwhelming joy you had felt. Feeling such deep grief is in proportion to your joy. Writing a poem like this is both cathartic (in that you express your emotions in an organised way) and celebratory, in that you show others (obviously her parents, but others as well) how you felt, and how truly valuable and memorable her life was to you. THat helps them too.
Comment Written 06-Nov-2013
reply by the author on 17-Nov-2013
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WOW....thank you so very much for the beautiful comment and rating. My amazing grandbaby Sophia was the best thing I could of ever dreamed of next to my own babies. I miss her so very much.....xoxo
Comment from pickthorn
This is such a sad poem, but a wonderful tribute to your sweet grandchild. As you said, you know that she is safe and you will see her again. Thank you for sharing this sweet poem.
pickthorn
reply by the author on 17-Nov-2013
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This is such a sad poem, but a wonderful tribute to your sweet grandchild. As you said, you know that she is safe and you will see her again. Thank you for sharing this sweet poem.
pickthorn
Comment Written 03-Nov-2013
reply by the author on 17-Nov-2013
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Thank you very much!! Someday in time we will truly meet again for sure. I just miss that wonderful sweet baby. :(
Comment from Cry the Vile Rebel
I am so sorry for your pain and am touched by your willingness to share your love of Sophie through this poem. 24 days is such a short time, too short, but she was (is) loved so very much. Take care.
reply by the author on 17-Nov-2013
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I am so sorry for your pain and am touched by your willingness to share your love of Sophie through this poem. 24 days is such a short time, too short, but she was (is) loved so very much. Take care.
Comment Written 02-Nov-2013
reply by the author on 17-Nov-2013
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Thank you so very much!! I will never be able to express my love and loss for that beautiful Angel. :(
Comment from Sefiros
I believe the poem would be better if you say that the baby died at the beginning. I didnt realize Sophia had died until the author's notes. The death is powerful. It should dominate the passage. It was as though the whole poem changed on the second reading. Put Sophia's death in plainer terms and you have a much more meaningful poem.
reply by the author on 30-Oct-2013
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I believe the poem would be better if you say that the baby died at the beginning. I didnt realize Sophia had died until the author's notes. The death is powerful. It should dominate the passage. It was as though the whole poem changed on the second reading. Put Sophia's death in plainer terms and you have a much more meaningful poem.
Comment Written 30-Oct-2013
reply by the author on 30-Oct-2013
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Thank you very much for the great idea and review....xoxo
Comment from Sasha
This is a sad and deeply moving poem about the loss of a child, something we can never prepare ourselves for. Excellent work with this and a wonderful entry for this contest. I sincerely wish you all the best.
reply by the author on 30-Oct-2013
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This is a sad and deeply moving poem about the loss of a child, something we can never prepare ourselves for. Excellent work with this and a wonderful entry for this contest. I sincerely wish you all the best.
Comment Written 30-Oct-2013
reply by the author on 30-Oct-2013
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Thank you sooo much for the beautiful comment & review. It truly means A lot!! xoxo
Comment from angelajfrank
that is a pretty poem. i'm sorry to hear about you baby. I know it must be hard for you. I miss my mother and as her only daughter. I all feel alone in the inner side of my heart. my father don't care because he has someone else. All I want is my mother in the world again. your baby and my mother both have their angel wings.
reply by the author on 29-Oct-2013
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that is a pretty poem. i'm sorry to hear about you baby. I know it must be hard for you. I miss my mother and as her only daughter. I all feel alone in the inner side of my heart. my father don't care because he has someone else. All I want is my mother in the world again. your baby and my mother both have their angel wings.
Comment Written 29-Oct-2013
reply by the author on 29-Oct-2013
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Awe, thank you so very much!! If you ever need someone to talk to, feel free to drop me a note. I appreciate your beautiful comment and great rating. It means a lot to me.
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Comment from Curly Girly
What a sad, sad story. This is a well written acrostic poem, you have done a good job. The picture is gorgeous. How very sad for all of you. You have expressed your words beautifully.
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reply by the author on 29-Oct-2013
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What a sad, sad story. This is a well written acrostic poem, you have done a good job. The picture is gorgeous. How very sad for all of you. You have expressed your words beautifully.
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Comment Written 29-Oct-2013
reply by the author on 29-Oct-2013
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Thank you so very much. I miss this precious angel.......xoxo
