Beware the Pumpkins on Halloween
Halloween night is full of surprises.40 total reviews
Comment from ragamuffin
We see so many jack-o-lanterns on Halloween and see them so "not fresh" a fews after if not before the holiday. This is kind of a different spin on the pumpkins. This is a clever idea or take on the jack-o-lantern and fun to read. Great description and flows well.
reply by the author on 31-Oct-2013
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We see so many jack-o-lanterns on Halloween and see them so "not fresh" a fews after if not before the holiday. This is kind of a different spin on the pumpkins. This is a clever idea or take on the jack-o-lantern and fun to read. Great description and flows well.
Comment Written 31-Oct-2013
reply by the author on 31-Oct-2013
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Ragamuffin, thank you for your comments and review. It is greatly appreciated. Now, you why they look so not fresh.... they've had a busy night! LOL
Comment from handmadecards
This is an accurate pumpkin scary poem about of halloween. Written in ABCB style with quirky well balanced stanzas. Fabulous ending, thank you for sharing. your creative flare.
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This is an accurate pumpkin scary poem about of halloween. Written in ABCB style with quirky well balanced stanzas. Fabulous ending, thank you for sharing. your creative flare.
Comment Written 31-Oct-2013
reply by the author on 31-Oct-2013
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Handmadecards, thank you so much for you comments and review. It is greatly appreciated.
Comment from ericawrites
This is a very well written poem, cleverly constructed and an enjoyable read. Paints a great picture of Halloween and your artwork matches perfectly. Well done, thank you for sharing. Keep up the good work.
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This is a very well written poem, cleverly constructed and an enjoyable read. Paints a great picture of Halloween and your artwork matches perfectly. Well done, thank you for sharing. Keep up the good work.
Comment Written 31-Oct-2013
reply by the author on 31-Oct-2013
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Ericawrites, thank you so much for your comments and review. It is greatly appreciated. I'm glad you enjoyed it.
Comment from Righteous Riter
Good complimentary photo. Good use of the abcb rhyme scheme. Good end rhyming. Good perfect rhyming with bat/hat. Good descriptive word choice that paints a picture in my mind. Good alliteration, clear message, good work. Best of luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 31-Oct-2013
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Good complimentary photo. Good use of the abcb rhyme scheme. Good end rhyming. Good perfect rhyming with bat/hat. Good descriptive word choice that paints a picture in my mind. Good alliteration, clear message, good work. Best of luck in the contest.
Comment Written 31-Oct-2013
reply by the author on 31-Oct-2013
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Righteous Riter, thank you for your comments and review. It is greatly appreciated. Happy that you enjoyed it.
Comment from allborn66
This is a delightful poem. I loved the word choice. The tone is appropriate to the theme. It has a nice flow. The picture is sweet.
Barbara
reply by the author on 31-Oct-2013
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This is a delightful poem. I loved the word choice. The tone is appropriate to the theme. It has a nice flow. The picture is sweet.
Barbara
Comment Written 30-Oct-2013
reply by the author on 31-Oct-2013
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Barbara, thank you for your comments and review. It is greatly appreciated.
Comment from michaelcahill
Hey, this is a great piece! I like the premise of the pumpkins coming to life kind of like Cinderella's carriage. But, a creepy ghoulash one. hahaha. Well written and fast moving. Awesome presentation with perfect music to go along and set the mood. Well done. I would hate to be a judge. mikey
reply by the author on 31-Oct-2013
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Hey, this is a great piece! I like the premise of the pumpkins coming to life kind of like Cinderella's carriage. But, a creepy ghoulash one. hahaha. Well written and fast moving. Awesome presentation with perfect music to go along and set the mood. Well done. I would hate to be a judge. mikey
Comment Written 30-Oct-2013
reply by the author on 31-Oct-2013
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Mikey, thank you for your comments and review. It is greatly appreciated.
Comment from pickthorn
What a delightful Halloween poem about the scary pumpkins. Making the Jack-o-Lanterns has always been my favorite part of Halloween and I love the pumpkin pies that are made from the pumpkins. The pumpkin song with the scary pumpkin faces lend to the Halloween feeling... I like the muhahahaha too. LOL You've done a lot of work on the presentation of a cute poem and it shows. Good luck on the contest.
pickthorn
reply by the author on 30-Oct-2013
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What a delightful Halloween poem about the scary pumpkins. Making the Jack-o-Lanterns has always been my favorite part of Halloween and I love the pumpkin pies that are made from the pumpkins. The pumpkin song with the scary pumpkin faces lend to the Halloween feeling... I like the muhahahaha too. LOL You've done a lot of work on the presentation of a cute poem and it shows. Good luck on the contest.
pickthorn
Comment Written 30-Oct-2013
reply by the author on 30-Oct-2013
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Pickthorn, thank you so much. I'm so glad you enjoyed it so much. Yeah, pumpkin carving is one of my favs also. I really appreciate your comments and review.
Comment from Janice Canerdy
Your well-written, entertaining poem extends a cheery invitation to the young ones to carve those pumpkins so people can enjoy the variety of faces."
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Your well-written, entertaining poem extends a cheery invitation to the young ones to carve those pumpkins so people can enjoy the variety of faces."
Comment Written 30-Oct-2013
reply by the author on 30-Oct-2013
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Janice, thank you so much for your kind comments and review. It is greatly appreciated.
Comment from denhagan
This is a nice poem for the Halloween contest, written in the quatrain style with good rhythm and rhyming throughout the poem. Nice picture to accompany the poem.
reply by the author on 30-Oct-2013
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This is a nice poem for the Halloween contest, written in the quatrain style with good rhythm and rhyming throughout the poem. Nice picture to accompany the poem.
Comment Written 30-Oct-2013
reply by the author on 30-Oct-2013
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Thank you for your comments and review, Denhagan. It is greatly appreciated.
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You're welcome,
Dennis
Comment from mermaids
Excellent use of words that creates lively pumpkins on Halloween. I like how the jack-o-lanterns sway and dance,you have written a poem that should be read every Halloween.
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Excellent use of words that creates lively pumpkins on Halloween. I like how the jack-o-lanterns sway and dance,you have written a poem that should be read every Halloween.
Comment Written 30-Oct-2013
reply by the author on 30-Oct-2013
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Mermaids, thank you so much for your wonderful comments and review. It is always greatly appreciated.
