Beware the Pumpkins on Halloween
Halloween night is full of surprises.40 total reviews
Comment from JM daSilva
Halloween is over but we are still cleaning up the mess left by the horror. Lots of sinister pumpkins staring at me right now.
reply by the author on 01-Nov-2013
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Halloween is over but we are still cleaning up the mess left by the horror. Lots of sinister pumpkins staring at me right now.
Comment Written 01-Nov-2013
reply by the author on 01-Nov-2013
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Thank you for your comments and review. It is greatly appreciated.
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Welcome.
Comment from Eternal Muse
I love your Pumpkin poem, the beautiful Halloween colors and the adorable picture. Your choice of words is excellent and the visuals are stunning. I enjoyed this so much - kind of puts you in a festive holiday mood, and you stay there.
Thank you for sharing your talent with us once more.
reply by the author on 01-Nov-2013
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I love your Pumpkin poem, the beautiful Halloween colors and the adorable picture. Your choice of words is excellent and the visuals are stunning. I enjoyed this so much - kind of puts you in a festive holiday mood, and you stay there.
Thank you for sharing your talent with us once more.
Comment Written 01-Nov-2013
reply by the author on 01-Nov-2013
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Yeltel, thanks for enjoying it so much. I really had fun writing this one.
Comment from honeytree
The art work is really great and somewhat scary.
The words were written very well
Some like Halloween and some don't.
I feel it can be frightening at times at Halloween
Particularly for children.
Honey tree
reply by the author on 01-Nov-2013
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The art work is really great and somewhat scary.
The words were written very well
Some like Halloween and some don't.
I feel it can be frightening at times at Halloween
Particularly for children.
Honey tree
Comment Written 01-Nov-2013
reply by the author on 01-Nov-2013
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Honeytree, thank you for your comments and review. It is greatly appreciated.
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I am glad you liked the review.
All the best From
annie
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I am glad you liked the review.
Annie
Comment from The Death
This is a wonderful entry for the contest. Your phrasing is very nice and suits the theme. Excellent use of alliteration and consonance throughout. You have presented it nicely. Good luck:)
reply by the author on 01-Nov-2013
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This is a wonderful entry for the contest. Your phrasing is very nice and suits the theme. Excellent use of alliteration and consonance throughout. You have presented it nicely. Good luck:)
Comment Written 01-Nov-2013
reply by the author on 01-Nov-2013
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Anupam, thank you for your comments and review. It is greatly appreciated.
Comment from Dean Kuch
"Muahahahahahhhhhhhhhhhhh.............." to you too, gramalot8... (LOL!)
What a perfectly delightful Halloween poem! The rhyming was fantastic, with some good alliteration, such as "ghoulish Glee", the meter was just a tad off (check those syllable counts in each one of the lines of your stanzas), but really, it didn't throw off the fun, frolicking rhythm.
All in all, a wonderful poem for All Hallow's Eve!
reply by the author on 31-Oct-2013
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"Muahahahahahhhhhhhhhhhhh.............." to you too, gramalot8... (LOL!)
What a perfectly delightful Halloween poem! The rhyming was fantastic, with some good alliteration, such as "ghoulish Glee", the meter was just a tad off (check those syllable counts in each one of the lines of your stanzas), but really, it didn't throw off the fun, frolicking rhythm.
All in all, a wonderful poem for All Hallow's Eve!
Comment Written 31-Oct-2013
reply by the author on 31-Oct-2013
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Dean, thanks, and I love your pumpkin!! And, thank you for your great comments and review.
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It was my pleasure!
Comment from Matoshka
I loved the whole package for Halloween. It brought so many memories back to me of being a child on the scary day. It is just Beautifully presented in every way. Blessings and good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 31-Oct-2013
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I loved the whole package for Halloween. It brought so many memories back to me of being a child on the scary day. It is just Beautifully presented in every way. Blessings and good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 31-Oct-2013
reply by the author on 31-Oct-2013
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Matoshka, thank you so much. I'm glad it brought back good childhood memories. I loved writing it for the same reason.
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So very welcome. Happy Halloween and may you have the treats you desire the most. God Bless you.
Comment from ELumpkins
A very good post. It must have taken quiet an imagination to come up with this one. The poem it't self muat have taken some time to construct, then add the video and that must have turned into some project. You did good, I bet you are glad Hslloween only comes around once a year.
reply by the author on 31-Oct-2013
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A very good post. It must have taken quiet an imagination to come up with this one. The poem it't self muat have taken some time to construct, then add the video and that must have turned into some project. You did good, I bet you are glad Hslloween only comes around once a year.
Comment Written 31-Oct-2013
reply by the author on 31-Oct-2013
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Elumpkins, thank you. I love Halloween and this was fun to create. Greatly appreciate your comments and review.
Comment from Cookie333
What a zippety, skippety pumpkin patch you have here my friend, just perfectly perky for this day.
Well done, thank you for sharing with us,
karen
reply by the author on 31-Oct-2013
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What a zippety, skippety pumpkin patch you have here my friend, just perfectly perky for this day.
Well done, thank you for sharing with us,
karen
Comment Written 31-Oct-2013
reply by the author on 31-Oct-2013
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Karen, thanks so much. I loved writing it and the video was the inspiration for it all. Appreciate you commenting and reviewing. Jerri
Comment from misscookie
I love the photo you choose for your poem
it truly sets the mood. You captured my attention from the first line to the last. and had me on the edge of my chair.
thank you for sharing.
reply by the author on 31-Oct-2013
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I love the photo you choose for your poem
it truly sets the mood. You captured my attention from the first line to the last. and had me on the edge of my chair.
thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 31-Oct-2013
reply by the author on 31-Oct-2013
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Misscookie, thank you. It was a fun write and the video was the inspiration. Glad you liked it. Jerri
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It was my pleasure, your very welcome, until next time.
Comment from simplyteresa
Your poem was a true delight to read and I could not help but smile. It was so full of a fanciful, childlike energy, I felt like there was almost a bounce to it. Such a fun pick me up.
Thank you so much for sharing this wonderful poem and the great smile.
Teresa
reply by the author on 31-Oct-2013
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Your poem was a true delight to read and I could not help but smile. It was so full of a fanciful, childlike energy, I felt like there was almost a bounce to it. Such a fun pick me up.
Thank you so much for sharing this wonderful poem and the great smile.
Teresa
Comment Written 31-Oct-2013
reply by the author on 31-Oct-2013
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Teresa, thank you so much. I'm glad you enjoyed it. It was a fun one to write and it was prompted by the video attached.
