Lick up pine
A Limerick14 total reviews
Comment from adewpearl
Do you know the group The Capitol Steps? They always have a number using abundant spoonerisms in their repertoire. You should look them up :-) Your rhymes are strong in good limerick format and your inflection is great when this is read aloud. The inflection part gets the better of many on Fan Story when they attempt limericks. And of course I like the risque humor :-) Brooke
reply by the author on 06-Nov-2013
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Do you know the group The Capitol Steps? They always have a number using abundant spoonerisms in their repertoire. You should look them up :-) Your rhymes are strong in good limerick format and your inflection is great when this is read aloud. The inflection part gets the better of many on Fan Story when they attempt limericks. And of course I like the risque humor :-) Brooke
Comment Written 31-Oct-2013
reply by the author on 06-Nov-2013
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Thanks, Brooke.
I shall Google the capitol Steps
Steve
Comment from KG Writes
Dear Unknown Author, Exceptionally well done. Fun read. Perfect illustration choice. Very best of luck in the contest. KG Writes
reply by the author on 29-Oct-2013
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Dear Unknown Author, Exceptionally well done. Fun read. Perfect illustration choice. Very best of luck in the contest. KG Writes
Comment Written 29-Oct-2013
reply by the author on 29-Oct-2013
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Thanks for your kind words.
Steve
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kiwisteveh You are most welcome. Enjoy your day. KG Writes
Comment from tfawcus
For slander Doctor Spooner might sue
Unless his sly advances were true
When tipsy a white turd
Can be rather absurd
But it saved your verse from being blue.
(Without a doubt I have to vote for your fine limerick!)
reply by the author on 29-Oct-2013
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For slander Doctor Spooner might sue
Unless his sly advances were true
When tipsy a white turd
Can be rather absurd
But it saved your verse from being blue.
(Without a doubt I have to vote for your fine limerick!)
Comment Written 29-Oct-2013
reply by the author on 29-Oct-2013
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Tony, thanks a lot for the fun review and the support - much needed with the rather underwhelming response so far!
I believe Spooner is dong lead so I won't be expecting any legal letters any time soon.
Comment from mroberts
A lelightful dimerick complete with witty spoonerisms. I'm glad you faw sit to include explanatory notes or I would have been bompletely caffled! The picture of the girl at the mike is exactly right. Thanks!
reply by the author on 29-Oct-2013
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A lelightful dimerick complete with witty spoonerisms. I'm glad you faw sit to include explanatory notes or I would have been bompletely caffled! The picture of the girl at the mike is exactly right. Thanks!
Comment Written 28-Oct-2013
reply by the author on 29-Oct-2013
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Yank thou!
Comment from Lylise
This is a solid entry into the Limerick contest. Great presentation and content. Looks like the rules have been adhered to. Good luck to you in the contest.
reply by the author on 29-Oct-2013
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This is a solid entry into the Limerick contest. Great presentation and content. Looks like the rules have been adhered to. Good luck to you in the contest.
Comment Written 28-Oct-2013
reply by the author on 29-Oct-2013
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Thank you!
Comment from Matthew M.
That is some funny stuff. It is sad when you mix your words ups, but it can make for some very entertaining dialogue. He probably would be slapped.
reply by the author on 29-Oct-2013
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That is some funny stuff. It is sad when you mix your words ups, but it can make for some very entertaining dialogue. He probably would be slapped.
Comment Written 28-Oct-2013
reply by the author on 29-Oct-2013
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Thank you!
Comment from Dean Kuch
Hee-hee...
This one was clever, and a bit naughty too, and that's precisely what I enjoyed about it.
I wonder if the professor also asked her if he could have an ander at her gass? Hey, you never know until you try, right?
Nicely done, a very funny, clever, and very well presented entry.
Good Luck!
reply by the author on 29-Oct-2013
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Hee-hee...
This one was clever, and a bit naughty too, and that's precisely what I enjoyed about it.
I wonder if the professor also asked her if he could have an ander at her gass? Hey, you never know until you try, right?
Nicely done, a very funny, clever, and very well presented entry.
Good Luck!
Comment Written 28-Oct-2013
reply by the author on 29-Oct-2013
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Thanks, Dean
I guess he could have tried harder but he didn't want to lush his puck.
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;D
Comment from RYME4U
Excellent spoonerisms here. Very cleverly done. You have done the Limerick style to perfection and the bawdiness is hidden in the words. Great job!
reply by the author on 29-Oct-2013
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Excellent spoonerisms here. Very cleverly done. You have done the Limerick style to perfection and the bawdiness is hidden in the words. Great job!
Comment Written 28-Oct-2013
reply by the author on 29-Oct-2013
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Thank you!
Comment from emrpoems
Qualifies as a Limerick with all requirements fulfilled.
It has a five lines with a set rhyme scheme of : a-a-b-b-a with a syllable structure of: 9-9-6-6-9.
Very original idea. Good luck in the contest
reply by the author on 29-Oct-2013
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Qualifies as a Limerick with all requirements fulfilled.
It has a five lines with a set rhyme scheme of : a-a-b-b-a with a syllable structure of: 9-9-6-6-9.
Very original idea. Good luck in the contest
Comment Written 28-Oct-2013
reply by the author on 29-Oct-2013
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Thanks.
Comment from Thatguypk
Haha.... very witty, and the beauty of Spoonerisms is that you can be as saucy as you like without having to type any rude words. Nicely done. :-)
reply by the author on 29-Oct-2013
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Haha.... very witty, and the beauty of Spoonerisms is that you can be as saucy as you like without having to type any rude words. Nicely done. :-)
Comment Written 28-Oct-2013
reply by the author on 29-Oct-2013
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Thank you!
