The Letter From Little Girl
a letter21 total reviews
Comment from Belinda
This is a touching story-poem of your Chihuahua. Little Girl has captured your soul with her love and fidelity. I hope you will get her replacement soon. Interesting poem.
reply by the author on 21-Oct-2013
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This is a touching story-poem of your Chihuahua. Little Girl has captured your soul with her love and fidelity. I hope you will get her replacement soon. Interesting poem.
Comment Written 21-Oct-2013
reply by the author on 21-Oct-2013
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Hello Belinda, I loved her so very much. The calm feelings she brought to my life were incredible. Tough being without her. Thank you for this great review,,,,,,Jim
Comment from w.j.debi
Made me cry, but I recently lost my canine friend as well. No one understood the way she did so I understand where you are coming from. Love your description of how she is still watching out for you until you meet again.
reply by the author on 21-Oct-2013
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Made me cry, but I recently lost my canine friend as well. No one understood the way she did so I understand where you are coming from. Love your description of how she is still watching out for you until you meet again.
Comment Written 20-Oct-2013
reply by the author on 21-Oct-2013
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Thank you w.j. for this excellent review and understanding how I am feeling. It was almost as though I could read her mind. Really tough being without her,,,,,,,Jim
Comment from Dean Kuch
Dearest Jim...
This tender, touching write, told from the perspective of your "Little Girl" is truly beautiful. Your love for your best friend shines here.
I've often told my wife (much to her angered scolding and chagrin) that I hope I go before my Gidget does. She's my eight-year old Chihuahua, and truly my best friend, man, beast, or otherwise. I know the day she goes, if I am still here, her passing will forever silence a broken heart already and forever ravaged by heart disease.
Great work, my dear firend. Truly wonderful
~My Gidget & Me~
reply by the author on 21-Oct-2013
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Dearest Jim...
This tender, touching write, told from the perspective of your "Little Girl" is truly beautiful. Your love for your best friend shines here.
I've often told my wife (much to her angered scolding and chagrin) that I hope I go before my Gidget does. She's my eight-year old Chihuahua, and truly my best friend, man, beast, or otherwise. I know the day she goes, if I am still here, her passing will forever silence a broken heart already and forever ravaged by heart disease.
Great work, my dear firend. Truly wonderful
~My Gidget & Me~
Comment Written 20-Oct-2013
reply by the author on 21-Oct-2013
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Hello Dean, I wish there was something that I could help you with your heart disease.
Gidget is such a pretty little girl. I see why she is so important to you.
I used to worry about what would happen to her if I died before her. Now, I don't have to worry about her. Dean, I do struggle everyday with her death and the lonely feelings that I live through. I know she is in a good place and waiting for me when my time comes.
Thank you for the excellent review and warm heart felt comments.
Please take care and keep the faith as I pray for you each and every day,,,,,,,Jim
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I do so hope there are dogs in heaven, Jim, I really do. My church teaches that there are no animals in heaven, but I ask myself, how can this be? The Bible clearly states that the lion will lie down with the lamb...
Comment from cinderbella
What a beautiful "little girl" in that picture. It is so true that animals can offer so much comfort to those who are ill.
One thing: This post, I think, should be classified as poetry instead of stories. A quick note to Tom would get that altered for you.
The letter you wrote is beautiful. I love that you wrote the letter 'from' "Little Girl" instead of vice versa. That is very creative, for you have given her a voice. :) Sandra
reply by the author on 21-Oct-2013
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What a beautiful "little girl" in that picture. It is so true that animals can offer so much comfort to those who are ill.
One thing: This post, I think, should be classified as poetry instead of stories. A quick note to Tom would get that altered for you.
The letter you wrote is beautiful. I love that you wrote the letter 'from' "Little Girl" instead of vice versa. That is very creative, for you have given her a voice. :) Sandra
Comment Written 20-Oct-2013
reply by the author on 21-Oct-2013
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Sandra, I didn't know that it was listed under stories. I will look into getting this fixed.
Thank you for your excellent review and warm comments. That photo was taken 2 days after I got her. She weighed 4 pounds and 2 ounces,,,,,,,Jim
Comment from Patty Mazzurco
This reminds me of my friend who just lost one of hers. I told her that her dogs were the luckiest I've ever known for the care and love they got from her. Very well expressed and written. I am sorry for your loss... <3
reply by the author on 21-Oct-2013
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This reminds me of my friend who just lost one of hers. I told her that her dogs were the luckiest I've ever known for the care and love they got from her. Very well expressed and written. I am sorry for your loss... <3
Comment Written 20-Oct-2013
reply by the author on 21-Oct-2013
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Thank you patty for your excellent review and your comments,,,,,,Jim
Comment from krys123
Again thank you Jim for sharing this tear jerker of a poem with myself, fans and other readers/writers. Yes I let out a chair for this lovable letter that your beloved has written to you. A very soft and serene letter of love and tenderness and where you should weep no more and which what she hasn't said of maybe getting another dog and one for me to remember me by and one for you to love again. You have a good one.
AK
reply by the author on 21-Oct-2013
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Again thank you Jim for sharing this tear jerker of a poem with myself, fans and other readers/writers. Yes I let out a chair for this lovable letter that your beloved has written to you. A very soft and serene letter of love and tenderness and where you should weep no more and which what she hasn't said of maybe getting another dog and one for me to remember me by and one for you to love again. You have a good one.
AK
Comment Written 20-Oct-2013
reply by the author on 21-Oct-2013
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Thank you AK for your wonderful heartfelt review and warm comments. I struggle everyday with her untimely and tragic death. My heart is truly broken. I have not wanted another little dog. The place that I moved into will not allow me to have another dog. If she were alive, she could have moved in here with me. Go figure AK,,,,,,,,Jim
Comment from Nosha17
This is a most moving piece of writing. I just lost my malemute a few months ago and I am still not recovered. Nice way to angle your poem from the dog's perspective. Nice imagery and rhyme and very well-written. Commendable.
reply by the author on 21-Oct-2013
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This is a most moving piece of writing. I just lost my malemute a few months ago and I am still not recovered. Nice way to angle your poem from the dog's perspective. Nice imagery and rhyme and very well-written. Commendable.
Comment Written 20-Oct-2013
reply by the author on 21-Oct-2013
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Thank Nosha17 for your excellent review and I am truly glad you like the angle for which the way I wrote this poem/letter,,,,,,Jim
Comment from nancy_e_davis
Jim, This brought tears to my eyes. I am so happy to see you are working through your grief. It is true, she wants you to be happy. Rejoice in the time you had together and smile. Hugs. Nancy
reply by the author on 21-Oct-2013
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Jim, This brought tears to my eyes. I am so happy to see you are working through your grief. It is true, she wants you to be happy. Rejoice in the time you had together and smile. Hugs. Nancy
Comment Written 20-Oct-2013
reply by the author on 21-Oct-2013
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Nancy, thank you for your excellent review and comments. I'm trying to accept that she will never return, but, we will be together again someday. Hugs back,,,,Jim
Comment from Rondeno
thank you for this touching tribute to a pet who was more than a pet - and with whom you shared some difficult times, and a lot of love.
reply by the author on 20-Oct-2013
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thank you for this touching tribute to a pet who was more than a pet - and with whom you shared some difficult times, and a lot of love.
Comment Written 20-Oct-2013
reply by the author on 20-Oct-2013
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Rondeno, my heart has been broken from her death. She brought me great joy and happiness in a very trying and dark time in my life. Thank you ever so much for this excellent review and wonderful comments,,,,,,Jim
Comment from denhagan
This is a lovely short story, written in the form of a poem by the dog to her owner. Has good rhythm and rhyming throughout the poem. Nice creative and touching write.
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reply by the author on 20-Oct-2013
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This is a lovely short story, written in the form of a poem by the dog to her owner. Has good rhythm and rhyming throughout the poem. Nice creative and touching write.
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The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 20-Oct-2013
reply by the author on 20-Oct-2013
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I am desperately trying to heal from her death. I thank you, denhagan, for this excellent review and comments,,,,,,Jim
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You're welcome Jim. Take care,
Dennis
