If Some Could Tell!
If we were learned to tell! A Non-Fiction in 220 words112 total reviews
Comment from Chantae Harding
While I love the message of this piece I find that you repeat yourself a lot. You use the same words repeatedly when mixing it up could lend strength. I think that your piece would benefit from punctuation as well.
reply by the author on 03-Dec-2018
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While I love the message of this piece I find that you repeat yourself a lot. You use the same words repeatedly when mixing it up could lend strength. I think that your piece would benefit from punctuation as well.
Comment Written 03-Dec-2018
reply by the author on 03-Dec-2018
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Thank you for writing something that you cannot explain. Please explain what you find repeated, and you must write to me, so that I can change my writing, and I think that is the job of writing a review, if you wish to do the job of reviewing, earnestly I request you to let me know what exactly you found repeating and how much repetition I made, writing a review is not telling but showing what is what and what for you rate the piece with poor rating, hope you understand what I write, please explain what do you mean by your words - ''the same words repeatedly' and if you can explain your words I shall find you have done the job of reviewing, so please explain, I do not understand what you are writing by that, because, it is something derogatory and insulting an author, and a reviewer cannot do that, so please explain yourself what you have written. Thanking you in advance.
Comment from jmshumate
Good work on this, I think you are describing a person that is humble and to listen and not speak is an act of humility, which I think you describe well in this short write. Thank for sharing this!
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Good work on this, I think you are describing a person that is humble and to listen and not speak is an act of humility, which I think you describe well in this short write. Thank for sharing this!
Comment Written 02-Dec-2018
Comment from Rob Caudle
So Very true and exceptionally penned. If only those who pontificate could find solace in silence perhaps on the silence we could hear the words of truth and beauty. Thank you so much for posting this,
Rob
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So Very true and exceptionally penned. If only those who pontificate could find solace in silence perhaps on the silence we could hear the words of truth and beauty. Thank you so much for posting this,
Rob
Comment Written 30-Nov-2018
Comment from Insider98
Your words are wise. Everyone should think before speaking. People are constantly trying to put down others with words that are meaningless, words that aren't accompanied by thought. Great job!
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Your words are wise. Everyone should think before speaking. People are constantly trying to put down others with words that are meaningless, words that aren't accompanied by thought. Great job!
Comment Written 30-Nov-2018
Comment from Roxanna Andrews
These are wise words so you much be a wise man. Too many today flap their gums to get attention and mainly to destroy others. It is always a pleasure to listen to one who wants to uplift. Well said. Rox
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These are wise words so you much be a wise man. Too many today flap their gums to get attention and mainly to destroy others. It is always a pleasure to listen to one who wants to uplift. Well said. Rox
Comment Written 30-Nov-2018
Comment from l.d.lauritzen
A lot of truths buried in this little tale. A number of the people currently in Washington should read something like this. Maybe it would end some of the babbling. Keep writing.
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A lot of truths buried in this little tale. A number of the people currently in Washington should read something like this. Maybe it would end some of the babbling. Keep writing.
Comment Written 30-Nov-2018
Comment from Rene Ravensdale
if one would look and listen carefully to the people around them,
they would realize that those wise men are rare indeed,
I like the truth ringing in every word of this piece.
thank you for sharing,
keep on the good writing!
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if one would look and listen carefully to the people around them,
they would realize that those wise men are rare indeed,
I like the truth ringing in every word of this piece.
thank you for sharing,
keep on the good writing!
Comment Written 30-Nov-2018
Comment from giraffmang
Hi there,
I'm dispense with grammar and structural issues as I pretty much know you're not interested in them. (although they help get the message across more strongly)
So basically, don't bother to gossip... lol
All the best
GMG
reply by the author on 30-Nov-2018
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Hi there,
I'm dispense with grammar and structural issues as I pretty much know you're not interested in them. (although they help get the message across more strongly)
So basically, don't bother to gossip... lol
All the best
GMG
Comment Written 30-Nov-2018
reply by the author on 30-Nov-2018
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Thank you.
Comment from Lisa Heath
Iree. What the reviewer of this article does agree upon is there are times whefool-ish;the reviewer of this article wouldn't always suppose if one were to foolhardy. think of speaking as of making no sense at all or off a man'slip as nstupid. What is stupid is when political campaign speeched get walked out on when A. Students get what they need after and during study. B. Jobs they would appreciate having, paying their taxes ans social security according to the raise and influx of sais same; and trying to get along with others on the job without a sexual harassment charge held against them or their families. Lisa Heath
reply by the author on 30-Nov-2018
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Iree. What the reviewer of this article does agree upon is there are times whefool-ish;the reviewer of this article wouldn't always suppose if one were to foolhardy. think of speaking as of making no sense at all or off a man'slip as nstupid. What is stupid is when political campaign speeched get walked out on when A. Students get what they need after and during study. B. Jobs they would appreciate having, paying their taxes ans social security according to the raise and influx of sais same; and trying to get along with others on the job without a sexual harassment charge held against them or their families. Lisa Heath
Comment Written 29-Nov-2018
reply by the author on 30-Nov-2018
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Thank you for sending something I do not understand, please explain what are you talking about and why you are writing all these, you are just writing neither related to the work and distantly not even I find your words have any point to this work, please stop writing and sending but before sending any further review to me, please and please explain what are you trying to mean and why. Wish you every success in your chosen goal. With regards.
Comment from Carolyn Reaves
Your writing speaks the truth on so many levels. People have always practiced talking too much. Sometimes words hurt worse than being cut with a knife. People resort to bullying with words, especially social media, and sometimes ruin the character of innocent people. I know from recent experiences in my own family after my father recently passed away.
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Your writing speaks the truth on so many levels. People have always practiced talking too much. Sometimes words hurt worse than being cut with a knife. People resort to bullying with words, especially social media, and sometimes ruin the character of innocent people. I know from recent experiences in my own family after my father recently passed away.
Comment Written 29-Nov-2018
