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Viewing comments for Chapter 125 "5-7-5 Good Imagination"
'Tis not the Bard, but pretty good poetry anyway

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Comment from ExperiencingLiphe
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Sadly, that big roar comes out as a small meow. What do I know, maybe to the kitty the little meow sounds big. Great job with this :)

 Comment Written 16-Oct-2013


reply by the author on 16-Oct-2013
    Thanks for such a wonderful review and rating. :-)
Comment from Leineco
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Imagination
Little Kitten climbs a tree
Mountain-lion roars


That is the best, most adorable definition of imagination I have ever seen!

Bravo!! Applause!!! Well Done!!!! :-)

 Comment Written 16-Oct-2013


reply by the author on 16-Oct-2013
    Thank you Leineco for this great review. I am delighted you enjoyed it :-)
Comment from Evelyn Fort Stewart
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Oh we love the picture. Sometimes our imagination gets us in real trouble and does cause us to fear things we don't need to. God loves you and so do we.

 Comment Written 15-Oct-2013


reply by the author on 15-Oct-2013
    Thank you Ms Evelyn, for this great review. I hope you are feeling much better.
Comment from starkat
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Roaring mountain lion would cause any little kitten to scamper up a tree ... me, too. Both are part and parcel to the cat family, so they understand each other, though a little 'meow' couldn't be heard over that mountain lion's roar. Kitten is a scardy-cat for now, but imagines someday its meow will grow into a roar. Lots of imagination happening ... all in fun.

Enjoyed your 'Just for Fun'. Well done ... ;o)

 Comment Written 15-Oct-2013


reply by the author on 15-Oct-2013
    What a fun review, thank you for your time and comments. :-)
Comment from babylonia
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You definitely added a great picture. Made me smile ... your words as well as the pic.
Help me down. Feed me, please.
Good luck~
Love,
Barbara

 Comment Written 15-Oct-2013


reply by the author on 15-Oct-2013
    Thanks Barbara for the great review of this one, I am delighted it made you smile. :-)
reply by babylonia on 16-Oct-2013
    you are welcome~
    love,
    barbara
Comment from lakeport
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good imagination, that's a lovely picture, indeed sometimes the kitties cant get down. that's a lovely 5/7/5 poem.Thanks for sharing it.God bless you.Hugs!lakeport.

 Comment Written 15-Oct-2013


reply by the author on 15-Oct-2013
    Thanks for the great review, hugs back to you, :-)
reply by lakeport on 15-Oct-2013
    your welcome.Hugs!lakeport.
Comment from nelliesellie
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I love the kitten. He looks like he thought he was a mountain lion until he got to the branch. Now, he does not seem too sure. I think he just wants Mama now. The little ones can get themselves into some messes. Fun read.

 Comment Written 15-Oct-2013


reply by the author on 15-Oct-2013
    I appreciate your wonderful comments, kittens are fun, :-)
Comment from adewpearl
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what an adorable photo that complements so well your poem, which is in excellent 5/7/5 format
good alliteration in kitten climbs
and what a great visual of this cute kitten imagining itself to be a roaring lion :-) wonderful commentary on the power of imagination Brooke

 Comment Written 15-Oct-2013


reply by the author on 15-Oct-2013
    Thanks Brooke, I appreciate your complimentary review :-)
Comment from Dean Kuch
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M-E-O-O-W-W!... Hah ha!

This was gr-r-r-r-r-r-e-a-t! It should do very well in this contest, too. I wish you the best of luck...

Kuch's Six Star Review photo starlogo.jpg

 Comment Written 15-Oct-2013


reply by the author on 15-Oct-2013
    Meooww back to you Dean...... Thanks for the great review and well wishes :-)
Comment from michaelcahill
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much more than a silly little laugh. a well written piece that captures the personality of a cat to perfection. (will let someone else say purrfection) quite clever and I am smiling. mike

 Comment Written 15-Oct-2013


reply by the author on 15-Oct-2013
    I am glad I made you smile Mike. Thanks for the purrrfect comments. :-)