Will Work for Love
Some twists and turns on the romance highway18 total reviews
Comment from Kooky Clown
An enjoyable read and full of fun with a lot of twists and turns which I was not expecting I was also surmising as to the reason why they or rather she shouldn't go and then it all became so delightfully muddled with a lovely ending. Well done.
reply by the author on 27-Dec-2021
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An enjoyable read and full of fun with a lot of twists and turns which I was not expecting I was also surmising as to the reason why they or rather she shouldn't go and then it all became so delightfully muddled with a lovely ending. Well done.
Comment Written 27-Dec-2021
reply by the author on 27-Dec-2021
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Thank you! Much appreciated indeed! 😁
Comment from GE Parson
Wow! A story like this deserves another lie;I lied about it being worth a 6 banger, it's worth only bout a 5. Just kidding! I enjoyed readng it and was intreaged about were you were going with it. What an emgination you have! anyway have a blessed New year.
Bro. Jerry
reply by the author on 27-Dec-2021
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Wow! A story like this deserves another lie;I lied about it being worth a 6 banger, it's worth only bout a 5. Just kidding! I enjoyed readng it and was intreaged about were you were going with it. What an emgination you have! anyway have a blessed New year.
Bro. Jerry
Comment Written 26-Dec-2021
reply by the author on 27-Dec-2021
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Thanks brother, having a little fun?happy new year to you as well, and Sunshine! 😁
Comment from Teri7
This is very cute what you have penned for the Dialogue Only Prompt. You used very cute and realistic words. Best wishes in the contest and Merry Christmas. Teri
reply by the author on 26-Dec-2021
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This is very cute what you have penned for the Dialogue Only Prompt. You used very cute and realistic words. Best wishes in the contest and Merry Christmas. Teri
Comment Written 25-Dec-2021
reply by the author on 26-Dec-2021
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Thank you for your kind words! Appreciated. 😁
Comment from LJbutterfly
First of all, this is a very catchy title. I clicked on this post because I was curious about how the story would go. I wasn't disappointed. You capture the reader's interest with the very first words, and retain it to the surprising twist at the end. "No one can hide from the all-seeing eye of Google." Clever.
reply by the author on 26-Dec-2021
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First of all, this is a very catchy title. I clicked on this post because I was curious about how the story would go. I wasn't disappointed. You capture the reader's interest with the very first words, and retain it to the surprising twist at the end. "No one can hide from the all-seeing eye of Google." Clever.
Comment Written 25-Dec-2021
reply by the author on 26-Dec-2021
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Thank you for your kind words! Appreciated. 😁
Comment from RShipp
"Bill, I know you're my boss but I've only been working here two days and you've asked me out a dozen times in those two days. I don't even know you, really."
"That makes us even. I don't know you either. ... (What a great response!)
Enjoyed.
'Another missed deadline for the contest. Oh well...' (It would have been a fun entry!)
reply by the author on 26-Dec-2021
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"Bill, I know you're my boss but I've only been working here two days and you've asked me out a dozen times in those two days. I don't even know you, really."
"That makes us even. I don't know you either. ... (What a great response!)
Enjoyed.
'Another missed deadline for the contest. Oh well...' (It would have been a fun entry!)
Comment Written 24-Dec-2021
reply by the author on 26-Dec-2021
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Thank you for your kind words! Appreciated. 😁
Comment from Judy Lawless
You've really demonstrated your imagination with this one Denis. You could write for Hallmark, lol. I enjoyed this fun story and the twists, all unbelievable. The dialogue is excellent.
reply by the author on 26-Dec-2021
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You've really demonstrated your imagination with this one Denis. You could write for Hallmark, lol. I enjoyed this fun story and the twists, all unbelievable. The dialogue is excellent.
Comment Written 24-Dec-2021
reply by the author on 26-Dec-2021
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Thank you for your kind words! Appreciated. 😁
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You're welcome, Denis
Comment from T B Botts
Hey Dennis,
What a great story! I loved it. I was wondering where it was going to go, and the end was a pleasant surprise. I'm so glad you revived it here. You're a good writer with a good imagination. Well done my friend.
Have a blessed Christmas with your family.
Tom
reply by the author on 26-Dec-2021
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Hey Dennis,
What a great story! I loved it. I was wondering where it was going to go, and the end was a pleasant surprise. I'm so glad you revived it here. You're a good writer with a good imagination. Well done my friend.
Have a blessed Christmas with your family.
Tom
Comment Written 23-Dec-2021
reply by the author on 26-Dec-2021
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Thank you for your kind words! Appreciated. 😁
Comment from Melodie Michelle
Perfect for the Dialogue Only prompt contest and good luck on the win! The storyline was very interesting and held my attention throughout the piece;-)
Thank you for sharing and many blessings to you and your family this Christmas;-)
reply by the author on 23-Dec-2021
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Perfect for the Dialogue Only prompt contest and good luck on the win! The storyline was very interesting and held my attention throughout the piece;-)
Thank you for sharing and many blessings to you and your family this Christmas;-)
Comment Written 23-Dec-2021
reply by the author on 23-Dec-2021
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Thanks, a repost of a fun thing. Appreciate your review, and Merry Christmas to you and yours.🎄😀
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;-)
Comment from l.raven
Hi Dennis, oh what an evil web we weave...if first we
practice to deceive...
he should of just said...I loved you at first sight...
but then again...it's all that foreplay that sets the mood...
I love your story told my sweet friend...very well written you...love xxoo
reply by the author on 23-Dec-2021
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Hi Dennis, oh what an evil web we weave...if first we
practice to deceive...
he should of just said...I loved you at first sight...
but then again...it's all that foreplay that sets the mood...
I love your story told my sweet friend...very well written you...love xxoo
Comment Written 23-Dec-2021
reply by the author on 23-Dec-2021
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Thank you, a repost of a fun piece. Appreciate your review. ❤️😀👍🙏✝️
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your so welcome Dennis..love xxoo
Comment from royowen
What an incredibly interesting story Dennis, complex, and speaks a lot about the guile in people, which in itself is amazing, no animal in the world compares with the human psyche, oh they have "animal cunning" but that's the survival instinct put there by God, what about the mating instinct? Beautifully written my friend, merry Christmas, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 23-Dec-2021
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What an incredibly interesting story Dennis, complex, and speaks a lot about the guile in people, which in itself is amazing, no animal in the world compares with the human psyche, oh they have "animal cunning" but that's the survival instinct put there by God, what about the mating instinct? Beautifully written my friend, merry Christmas, blessings Roy
Comment Written 23-Dec-2021
reply by the author on 23-Dec-2021
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Thanks brother, this was a repost of a fun thing.
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You?re a good Dennis, God thinks so too.
