Heaven and Earth
An Acrostic poem18 total reviews
Comment from pipersfancy
I think you've done a very nice job with this piece! Strong message that is connected throughout, makes for a good acrostic poem.
PF
reply by the author on 29-Oct-2013
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I think you've done a very nice job with this piece! Strong message that is connected throughout, makes for a good acrostic poem.
PF
Comment Written 28-Oct-2013
reply by the author on 29-Oct-2013
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Thank you so much! I appreciate you taking time to read it and I'm so glad you liked it!
Comment from nancyjam
This is such a positive poem of
Faith. An inspiration to all who
read it.
Strong rhyme and meter.
Thoughts expressed sincerely.
reply by the author on 28-Oct-2013
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This is such a positive poem of
Faith. An inspiration to all who
read it.
Strong rhyme and meter.
Thoughts expressed sincerely.
Comment Written 28-Oct-2013
reply by the author on 28-Oct-2013
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Thank you so much! I worked hard on it and you've made it worth it, Thank you again!
Comment from Righteous Riter
Good creative acrostic piece. Good use of the aabb rhyme scheme. Good perfect rhyming with tell/well. Good alliteration with peace/profound...direct/dear/day...shall/stay...home/heaven. Good complimentary photo followed by a message filled with hope.
reply by the author on 28-Oct-2013
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Good creative acrostic piece. Good use of the aabb rhyme scheme. Good perfect rhyming with tell/well. Good alliteration with peace/profound...direct/dear/day...shall/stay...home/heaven. Good complimentary photo followed by a message filled with hope.
Comment Written 28-Oct-2013
reply by the author on 28-Oct-2013
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Thank you so much! I appreciate you taking time to read it and I'm so glad you liked it!
Comment from allborn66
This is a wonderful poem. I loved your acrostic choice. The theme flows very well. The word choice is strong. The tone is appropriate to the subject matter.
Barbara
reply by the author on 28-Oct-2013
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This is a wonderful poem. I loved your acrostic choice. The theme flows very well. The word choice is strong. The tone is appropriate to the subject matter.
Barbara
Comment Written 28-Oct-2013
reply by the author on 28-Oct-2013
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Thank you so much! What a sweet review. I appreciate you taking time to read it and I'm so glad you liked it!
Comment from patsypats
Very beautifully written. Great contest entry. Imagery is so vivid and the message you have delivered is admirable. Your picture choice wraps it all up to make it a sure winner:)
reply by the author on 28-Oct-2013
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Very beautifully written. Great contest entry. Imagery is so vivid and the message you have delivered is admirable. Your picture choice wraps it all up to make it a sure winner:)
Comment Written 28-Oct-2013
reply by the author on 28-Oct-2013
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Thank you so much! Unfortunately, I thought I had submitted it when I posted it but I didn't. I wrote another one called Sisters for the Acrostic contest. Thank you for your support just the same and thank you for this sweet review!
Comment from Selina Stambi
All I desire, this truth I must tell
Rests in the hope that I served you well .. beautiful lines - AMEN!
Suzie, what a touching, triumphant, joyful poem!
May it be so for us all. Thank you, my dear. :)
Hugs to you,
xxx
Sonali
reply by the author on 28-Oct-2013
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All I desire, this truth I must tell
Rests in the hope that I served you well .. beautiful lines - AMEN!
Suzie, what a touching, triumphant, joyful poem!
May it be so for us all. Thank you, my dear. :)
Hugs to you,
xxx
Sonali
Comment Written 28-Oct-2013
reply by the author on 28-Oct-2013
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Thank you so much! I appreciate you taking time to read it and I'm so glad you liked it!
Comment from KG Writes
Suzie Q As far as an Acrostic poem, I think that you did a good job. It is well written and composed. A most enjoyable and thought provoking read. Your illustration is a perfect choice. I enjoyed it very much. KG Writes
reply by the author on 28-Oct-2013
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Suzie Q As far as an Acrostic poem, I think that you did a good job. It is well written and composed. A most enjoyable and thought provoking read. Your illustration is a perfect choice. I enjoyed it very much. KG Writes
Comment Written 28-Oct-2013
reply by the author on 28-Oct-2013
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Thank you! I'm so happy you liked it!
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Suzie Q You are most welcome. Enjoy your day. KG Writes
Comment from Dorothy Farrell
This is a lovely faith acrostic inspired by your visit to a store. It is well written and fits the criteria for the contest. Your last line I pondered on 'Home sweet home is in Heaven with You' - It does sound as if here on earth you did not find home sweet home. Perhaps 'too' instead of 'with you'. Just a thought on what is a lovely acrostic. Good Luck. Regards Dorothy
reply by the author on 28-Oct-2013
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This is a lovely faith acrostic inspired by your visit to a store. It is well written and fits the criteria for the contest. Your last line I pondered on 'Home sweet home is in Heaven with You' - It does sound as if here on earth you did not find home sweet home. Perhaps 'too' instead of 'with you'. Just a thought on what is a lovely acrostic. Good Luck. Regards Dorothy
Comment Written 28-Oct-2013
reply by the author on 28-Oct-2013
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Thank you so much! Oh, as for the last line, I was just referring to my eternal home with the Lord. I've had a good life here. God's really blessed me even through my trials so I can't complain. I forgot to enter it in the contest so I submitted another one called Sisters. Thank you again for this sweet review!
Comment from emrpoems
Wonderfully crafted acrostic poem. Picture befitting for
this poem
Perfect couplet rhymes
Earth has me now, yet I shall not stay
All I desire, this truth I must tell
Rests in the hope that I served you well
Take my hand when my journey is through
Home sweet home is in Heaven with You . This is all that matters in the end
reply by the author on 27-Oct-2013
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Wonderfully crafted acrostic poem. Picture befitting for
this poem
Perfect couplet rhymes
Earth has me now, yet I shall not stay
All I desire, this truth I must tell
Rests in the hope that I served you well
Take my hand when my journey is through
Home sweet home is in Heaven with You . This is all that matters in the end
Comment Written 27-Oct-2013
reply by the author on 27-Oct-2013
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Thank you so much! I have to say, I'm happy you liked the photo choice as well. I think I spent as much time trying to find a picture to fit my poem as I did writing the poem! haha I appreciate you reading it and I'm so glad you liked it!
Comment from sweetwoodjax
this is very well written, suzie q, you did an excellent job writing this acrostic poem about the way that life on earth is not eternal. i enjoyed reading this one...
reply by the author on 27-Oct-2013
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this is very well written, suzie q, you did an excellent job writing this acrostic poem about the way that life on earth is not eternal. i enjoyed reading this one...
Comment Written 27-Oct-2013
reply by the author on 27-Oct-2013
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Thank you!! I'm so glad you liked it. Worked hard on it and you made it worth it!
