The Heart of Poetry
Viewing comments for Chapter 21 "Introspection reflection"'Tis not the Bard, but pretty good poetry anyway
25 total reviews
Comment from KG Writes
notesandmore I love this. It's beautiful. No more 6's, I'm sorry. True as well. Thoughts and ideas often swirl around in my head but just won't come together. Very well written and composed. Great job. KG Writes
reply by the author on 16-Oct-2013
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notesandmore I love this. It's beautiful. No more 6's, I'm sorry. True as well. Thoughts and ideas often swirl around in my head but just won't come together. Very well written and composed. Great job. KG Writes
Comment Written 16-Oct-2013
reply by the author on 16-Oct-2013
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Well thank you for the virtual 'six', I will take it. :-) I am glad you related to this one. The fact that we can think of what we could write about is inspiration in itself. I appreciate you, Carolyn
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Carolyn You gave me a smile. Nice to be appreciated. Keep up the good stuff. KG Writes
Comment from rouskin
"I sit at my desk with my pen in my hand
wondering what I can write today
do I have a plan"
Well known situation probably to most of us here with addition of eye-catching artwork.
I'm not the Lord but you have my blessings and this poem soon shell be All Time Best.
Thank you for sharing.
reply by the author on 14-Oct-2013
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"I sit at my desk with my pen in my hand
wondering what I can write today
do I have a plan"
Well known situation probably to most of us here with addition of eye-catching artwork.
I'm not the Lord but you have my blessings and this poem soon shell be All Time Best.
Thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 14-Oct-2013
reply by the author on 14-Oct-2013
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What a wonderful way to start my day! This is a great review, thank you, I am so glad you enjoyed the poem. :-) Carolyn
Comment from Curly Girly
This is a lovely poem about reflections of life. It tells of the things we think about and go through. What shall we write about? There is so much to tell.
Was your lack of punctuation intentional?
To me it seemed that the questions needed question marks.
reply by the author on 14-Oct-2013
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This is a lovely poem about reflections of life. It tells of the things we think about and go through. What shall we write about? There is so much to tell.
Was your lack of punctuation intentional?
To me it seemed that the questions needed question marks.
Comment Written 14-Oct-2013
reply by the author on 14-Oct-2013
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Thanks Nicole, Wow, a sixer... I am delighted you enjoyed this one, and yes, it was intentional. I appreciate you , Carolyn
Comment from Stepperdark
Thank you for sharing your poem. I truly enjoyed it. I liked the away it flowed. The ending was my favorite. And the picture I thought fit perfectly with the poem.
reply by the author on 14-Oct-2013
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Thank you for sharing your poem. I truly enjoyed it. I liked the away it flowed. The ending was my favorite. And the picture I thought fit perfectly with the poem.
Comment Written 14-Oct-2013
reply by the author on 14-Oct-2013
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Thank you for this great review, I am delighted you liked this one, Carolyn
Comment from Dorothy Farrell
A thoughtful poem about inspiration and what to write. Your rhyme scheme starts off well in abcb form but falls away in some of your stanzas (three four and six) but the content of your poem is very good and a joy to read. Regards Dorothy
reply by the author on 14-Oct-2013
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A thoughtful poem about inspiration and what to write. Your rhyme scheme starts off well in abcb form but falls away in some of your stanzas (three four and six) but the content of your poem is very good and a joy to read. Regards Dorothy
Comment Written 13-Oct-2013
reply by the author on 14-Oct-2013
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Thank you Dorothy for such a fine review and comments of this one. :-) Carolyn
Comment from zanya
Probably the Muse had paid a visit by the end of this poetic reflection on inspiration. A beautiful pic from the natural world to complement the sentiments.
reply by the author on 12-Oct-2013
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Probably the Muse had paid a visit by the end of this poetic reflection on inspiration. A beautiful pic from the natural world to complement the sentiments.
Comment Written 12-Oct-2013
reply by the author on 12-Oct-2013
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Thank you so very much for this lovely review. :-) Carolyn
Comment from Silent1rose
This flowed very well! And I can relate so much to this. Not knowing what to write about when there are so many things. Oh how I hate writer's block. This is a great poem. Great work! ~ Rose
reply by the author on 12-Oct-2013
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This flowed very well! And I can relate so much to this. Not knowing what to write about when there are so many things. Oh how I hate writer's block. This is a great poem. Great work! ~ Rose
Comment Written 12-Oct-2013
reply by the author on 12-Oct-2013
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What a wonderful review and rating you have given me. I appreciate you so much. Thank you, Rose
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You're so very welcome and it was my pleasure. ~ Rose
Comment from Spitfire
I do believe you've covered all the hackneyed topics. "tis hard to come up with something new, but it's the reflections of one's self that makes old thoughts breathe new air.
reply by the author on 11-Oct-2013
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I do believe you've covered all the hackneyed topics. "tis hard to come up with something new, but it's the reflections of one's self that makes old thoughts breathe new air.
Comment Written 11-Oct-2013
reply by the author on 11-Oct-2013
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Thanks Shari, you got it. :-) Carolyn
Comment from jmdg1954
You just did and a fine job of writing that is!!!
I could picture you, seated, tapping the #2 pencil on the desk, staring onto space... Oh wait, that's me!!!
We all go through that spell. More times then not!
Nicely done Carolyn.
John
reply by the author on 11-Oct-2013
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You just did and a fine job of writing that is!!!
I could picture you, seated, tapping the #2 pencil on the desk, staring onto space... Oh wait, that's me!!!
We all go through that spell. More times then not!
Nicely done Carolyn.
John
Comment Written 11-Oct-2013
reply by the author on 11-Oct-2013
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Thank you John, hope you are having a great weekend. :-) Carolyn
Comment from Mrs Happy Poet
Yes my friend this is well written we do sit and ponder a while before we decide what to write at times well done I enjoyed regards Jill and Erick
reply by the author on 11-Oct-2013
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Yes my friend this is well written we do sit and ponder a while before we decide what to write at times well done I enjoyed regards Jill and Erick
Comment Written 11-Oct-2013
reply by the author on 11-Oct-2013
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I am glad you two enjoyed this one. :-) Carolyn
