Comment from pickthorn

Excellent

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Oh man, this is getting a little scary! Written really well. Poor Father Brian, he doesn't know what he's in for.. The evil one is powerful, but not powerful enough. . Looking forward to the outcome. Rox

 Comment Written 08-Oct-2013

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reply by the author on 08-Oct-2013

I really appreciate hearing form you, and your generousr review!

:0) Bev

Comment from boxergirl

Excellent

This chapter had me engaged from beginning to end. First, the scene with Eddie sitting in his car. I could feel the tension rising. Then Father Brian's phone conversation with the devil himself. Good job!!

 Comment Written 08-Oct-2013

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reply by the author on 08-Oct-2013

Thanks so much, Boxergirl. I appreciate your generous and encouraging review! :0) Bev

Comment from Rondeno

Excellent

Wonderful, Bevota. It's like reading a classy, published novel, and the stuff you've put in this chapter is genuinely frightening. Keep it coming, please!

 Comment Written 08-Oct-2013

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reply by the author on 08-Oct-2013

Hi, buddy. Thank you much for your great review! I'll do my best to continue to scare the crap out of folks LOL. Big Hug, Bev

Comment from Roxanna Andrews

Excellent

Oh man, this is getting scary! Great as always. Poor Father Brian, he is in for a battle. The evil one is powerful, but nothing is more powerful than God. Looking forward to the outcome. Rox

 Comment Written 08-Oct-2013

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reply by the author on 08-Oct-2013

Thanks so much, Rox. I agree with your assessment of the situation! Great to hear from you. :0) Bev

Comment from Gungalo

Excellent

Boy the priest is surely understanding what this devil says to him. It's all over the phone too until the end when he hears the noises upstairs. SIgh.

 Comment Written 08-Oct-2013

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reply by the author on 08-Oct-2013

Thanks for stopping by Gungalo. I appreciate the encouragement. :0) Bev

reply by Gungalo on 08-Oct-2013

Smiling.

reply by the author on 08-Oct-2013

:0)

Comment from sweetwoodjax

Excellent

this is very well written, writingfundimension, you did an excellent job writing this chapter where we find out father brian's mindset and the demon takes advantage of his weakness

 Comment Written 08-Oct-2013

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reply by the author on 08-Oct-2013

Thank you so much, sweet. I appreciate the support! :0) Bev

Comment from Patrick G Cox

Excellent

Hi Writingfundimension,

Now you're piling on the tension, one can pity the priest having to confront the demon alone, he should call in another exorcist pdq!

I haven't spotted any spag either. Nice one.

Patrick

 Comment Written 08-Oct-2013

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reply by the author on 08-Oct-2013

Hi, Patrick. Thank you for the gracious review. Father Brian tends to act fairly impulsively for a priest LOL. Appreciate your support, my friend.

:0) Bev

Comment from InterestingRon

Excellent

Hello!!!
Long time no see - pun intended.
I've been virtually blind for almost a year.
Some sight has been restored in one eye. I'm having an operation in November, implants and cornea transplants, that will perhaps give me more.
If you want to know how I ended up this way read my latest post - Out of Sight. A fairly true account.
Now, I'm gonna need some time to catch up with your book - and will do so and offer a real review.
But I could not resist the chance to say hello to a dear friend.
Ron xx

 Comment Written 08-Oct-2013

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reply by the author on 08-Oct-2013

Oh, Ron. I had no idea you were going through so much. I will hold you in the highest light, my friend, as you go through the surgeries and pray more of your vision will be restored. Thank you for letting me know what's been going on. I'll be checking out your post today. Blessings, Bev

Comment from barkingdog

Exceptional

This is one of your best chapters. Father Brian has a lot going on in his mind. Many past regrets. One being that he never let Debra have the comfort of knowing that he loved her. His priesthood held that back.
The product of a priest and his own mother's infidelity is another burden to bare.
Evil is all around him, banging doors, walking on the roof.
(I can't imagine staying in that house.)
He is tortured mentally as to how to write Debra's eulogy and then the killer calls. What a terrible state of emotions to deal with. How does he hold together?

A good piece of news is that the man with the schnauzer wrote down the Datsun's license number.

Mavelous, jam packed chapter! Bravo, Bev!

 Comment Written 08-Oct-2013

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reply by the author on 08-Oct-2013

Ellen, I'm very honored by your six star review. Thank you for supporting this chapter so generously. More of the supernatural to come as we get the priest together with the shaman. Tony's been the background too long. Much appreciated, my friend.

Hugs, Bev

reply by barkingdog on 08-Oct-2013

I can't wait. Yes, bring in Tony. :) e

reply by the author on 08-Oct-2013

Thanks, Ellen. :0)

Comment from Joy Graham

Exceptional

Wow! This is an awesome chapter, Bev. We finally get to know a little bit about the killer and demon. It fits in so well with this Halloween season. Spooooookyyyyyy!

 Comment Written 08-Oct-2013

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reply by the author on 08-Oct-2013

Thanks so much, Joy. I really appreciate your generous six-star review. Yes, I'm a late October birthday and love this time of year. All Hallow's Eve is one of my favorite holidays. Hugs, Bev