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Viewing comments for Chapter 26 "Wishful thinking granted"
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Comment from adewpearl
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solid rhyming
a most thoughtful poem of faith
wouldn't that be wonderful, to have a world with no hatred or crime, just love :-) Brooke

 Comment Written 10-Oct-2013


reply by the author on 14-Oct-2013
    Brooke, thanks for the review sorry it took me so long to respond to you I have been sick and then went on vacation.have a bless day Sandy,
Comment from annatberry
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That was beautiful and truly a wonderful wish. Your writing was great, but what you said was more than words. It was truly a wonderful message from God. God Bless you for writing this poem.

 Comment Written 05-Oct-2013


reply by the author on 14-Oct-2013
    annaberry. thank you for your review sorry it has taken me so long to respond to it ,I have been sick and then went on vacation.Blessings
Comment from emrpoems
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You sure made a very unselfish wish for everyone to come to know Jesus and hen there would be only peace and love. Great poem but I did not like your picture very much. Good luck in the contest

 Comment Written 05-Oct-2013


reply by the author on 14-Oct-2013
    Thank you for your review, sorry it took so long to respond to it have been sick and out of town.Blessings
reply by emrpoems on 14-Oct-2013
    Glad you're up and about again
Comment from Silent1rose
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I enjoyed reading this. It flowed very smoothly. A very good meesage put into the lines of a poem. One of the many gifts that God has given his children.

 Comment Written 05-Oct-2013


reply by the author on 14-Oct-2013
    Thank you for your review,sorry it has taken me so long to respond to it ,have been sick and then went out of town.Hope you have a bless day
reply by Silent1rose on 14-Oct-2013
    No worrries. I hope you get better :) ~ Rose
Comment from Starlit Ink
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This is an amazing wish. You were creative to come up with this, as I wouldn't of thought of that. Wouldn't it be great to wish that everyone would know Jesus. If they did, what more could you wish for? I like the imagery of the gates of Heaven opening. Good luck with your contest.

 Comment Written 05-Oct-2013


reply by the author on 14-Oct-2013
    Thank you for your review,sorry it has taken me so long to respond to it .I have been sick and then went out of town. Hope you have a bless day
Comment from Benny Beeharry
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Fabulous. I wish a lot more people would read this poem, so full of faith, love and humanity.
The writing is good also and it has a good flow, consistent and simple.

Benny Beeharry

 Comment Written 05-Oct-2013


reply by the author on 05-Oct-2013
    Thank you and God bless
Comment from sweetwoodjax
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this is very well written, mystery writer, you did an excellent job writing this poetic wish for everyone to accept Christ and have no need for hell. i enjoyed reading it. good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 05-Oct-2013


reply by the author on 05-Oct-2013
    Thank you and God bless you.