Poems By AnnieDawn
Viewing comments for Chapter 92 "At The Fair"My book of poems and stories
16 total reviews
Comment from Lulube
right off the reader is singing the melody of an older childrens play song. Great imagery in this 10 worded poem.
Cute and sassy.
good job.
lulube good luck in the contest
reply by the author on 05-Oct-2013
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right off the reader is singing the melody of an older childrens play song. Great imagery in this 10 worded poem.
Cute and sassy.
good job.
lulube good luck in the contest
Comment Written 05-Oct-2013
reply by the author on 05-Oct-2013
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Thank you.
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welcome
lulube
Comment from CrumpleStiltskin
It is not an easy task to write a poem in under 10 words and it takes more thought that one would think. I think this was well put together and the rhyme in it was very fluid, I really liked it - Thanks for sharing :)
reply by the author on 05-Oct-2013
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It is not an easy task to write a poem in under 10 words and it takes more thought that one would think. I think this was well put together and the rhyme in it was very fluid, I really liked it - Thanks for sharing :)
Comment Written 05-Oct-2013
reply by the author on 05-Oct-2013
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Thank you for reviewing my poem. This contest was a challenge.
Comment from amada
Wonderful thoughts and selection of artwork. It reminded me of my own childhood, except no the seven dollars! I wish. This is a great reminiscence!
reply by the author on 05-Oct-2013
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Wonderful thoughts and selection of artwork. It reminded me of my own childhood, except no the seven dollars! I wish. This is a great reminiscence!
Comment Written 05-Oct-2013
reply by the author on 05-Oct-2013
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Thank you for reviewing my poem. This contest was a challenge.
Comment from giovannimariatommaso
Clever & catchy little ditty. 9 words. I don't see any spelling or grammatical errors. I'm told to expand on this but I believe that I have said all that there is to say. If FanStory wishes to discuss this further then good luck to that one too! Good luck, giovanni
reply by the author on 04-Oct-2013
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Clever & catchy little ditty. 9 words. I don't see any spelling or grammatical errors. I'm told to expand on this but I believe that I have said all that there is to say. If FanStory wishes to discuss this further then good luck to that one too! Good luck, giovanni
Comment Written 04-Oct-2013
reply by the author on 04-Oct-2013
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Thank you so much. I appreciate your time for the review.
Comment from mfowler
These surely are small poems which means your writing has to be brief and engaging. I think you have the whole package here; a great little rhyme backed by a great presentation package.
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reply by the author on 04-Oct-2013
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These surely are small poems which means your writing has to be brief and engaging. I think you have the whole package here; a great little rhyme backed by a great presentation package.
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Comment Written 04-Oct-2013
reply by the author on 04-Oct-2013
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Thank you so much. I appreciate your time for the review.
Comment from emrpoems
You achieved telling a story that made complete sense in less than ten words. Very well written with words that flowed well.Good luck in the contest
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reply by the author on 04-Oct-2013
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You achieved telling a story that made complete sense in less than ten words. Very well written with words that flowed well.Good luck in the contest
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Comment Written 04-Oct-2013
reply by the author on 04-Oct-2013
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Thank you for your kind review.
