Comment from barrieblakeway

Excellent

AnnieDawn or should I say Miss Brevity!. Well done again. They just told me I was too brief,, great drawing choice.

bye baz

 Comment Written 10-Oct-2013

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reply by the author on 11-Oct-2013

Thanks for your comments. It is fun to take a topic and let it flow.

Comment from zanya

Excellent

The innocence of childhood days is reflected here - how refreshing and inspirational and the pic compliments it beautifully.

 Comment Written 06-Oct-2013

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reply by the author on 06-Oct-2013

Thank you so much for your review and comments. I do appreciate the time taken to do this.

Comment from Spitfire

Excellent

LOL. This shows how the price of a ride had gone up since my days. Ferris wheel ticket-- seven dollars! Or mabye he made the ride seven times. Good use of alliteration with F and S.

 Comment Written 06-Oct-2013

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reply by the author on 06-Oct-2013

Thank you so much for your review and comments. I do appreciate the time taken to do this

Comment from Rubylou

Excellent

Really cute under ten poem. It has an upbeat and lively feel to it. The picture accents the mood as well. Best to you in the contest.

 Comment Written 06-Oct-2013

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reply by the author on 06-Oct-2013

Thank you very much for your review and comments.

Comment from june prescott

Excellent

I really enjoyed this little poem about going to the county fair. The picture is great, too. Great contest entry, good luck. ~JP

 Comment Written 06-Oct-2013

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reply by the author on 06-Oct-2013

Thank you very much for your review and comments.

Comment from lakeport

Excellent

At the fair, indeed that brings back some memories,I always loved to go to the fair, that's a lovely poem,Thanks for sharing it,God bless you.Hugs!lakeport.

 Comment Written 05-Oct-2013

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reply by the author on 06-Oct-2013

Thank you so much. I really appreciate your comments.

reply by lakeport on 06-Oct-2013

your welcome.Hugs!Lakeport,

Comment from Sueellen11

Excellent

Very cute,,, I like it,,, good entry into the contest,, good rhyming and flow,,, great image you have painted,,,well done,,, good luck,,,blessings,,,sueellen

 Comment Written 05-Oct-2013

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reply by the author on 06-Oct-2013

Thank you so much. I really appreciate your comments.

Comment from Leineco

Excellent

This is just too cute and straight forward not to be worth my vote! The only contender was Autumn's Gem....but I just decided I was in a "fun" mood tonight :-)

Nice write :-)

 Comment Written 05-Oct-2013

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reply by the author on 06-Oct-2013

Thank you so much. I really appreciate your comments.

Comment from expressions9

Excellent

This is a fun read for children with vivid imagery and good flow and rhyme. I like the matching photo which fits the poem really well :)

All the best,
C

 Comment Written 05-Oct-2013

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reply by the author on 05-Oct-2013

Thank you so very much for your comments and review.

reply by expressions9 on 05-Oct-2013

You're welcome :)

Comment from RYME4U

Excellent

That is a cute poem and cute picture to go with it. The rhyme and rhythm are well done and you have done it all i8n less than 10 words!

 Comment Written 05-Oct-2013

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reply by the author on 05-Oct-2013

Thank you for your review and comments.