Madness
From a wickedly wretched writer2 total reviews
Comment from songbyrd
you did a good job on your 5-7-5 poem.. and with the way the world situation seems to be there is madness all around us. Good job!
reply by the author on 03-Oct-2013
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you did a good job on your 5-7-5 poem.. and with the way the world situation seems to be there is madness all around us. Good job!
Comment Written 03-Oct-2013
reply by the author on 03-Oct-2013
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Thank you for your kind review. I really appreciate it. It's my first time writing a haiku and your comment fired me up.
Comment from tfawcus
I can feel the frustration from here! The allusion to Paradise Lost in the last line is pretty neatly fitted in! Clever! I wish you the best of luck with this competition entry!
reply by the author on 03-Oct-2013
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I can feel the frustration from here! The allusion to Paradise Lost in the last line is pretty neatly fitted in! Clever! I wish you the best of luck with this competition entry!
Comment Written 03-Oct-2013
reply by the author on 03-Oct-2013
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Thank you for your kind review. I really appreciate it. It's my first time writing a haiku and your comment fired me up.
